AR FF-'My every breath in ur name' final pt in p41 - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sushi1987

add me to your PM list yaar... wud be damn happy if this really happened in the ongoing track...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



done.... will pm u wen the next part is ready.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nipa.presi

amazing yaar,nice part



thanq so much...
keep reading..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER

gr8 part

cvz shud read ur ff
plz pm me wen u update
continue soon
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GAURAV



thanq so much gaurav.
sure. i'll let you know wen i come up with the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kinnarik

plsss do continue.....
waiting to see wht will hapn nxt
and if possible addme on ur pm list!!!
loved it!!!



thanq so much...
added u as my buddy. will let u know wen the next part is up.
keep reading...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanq so much guys for your appreciation. It means a lot.
So here comes the next part.
Actually I was a bit down after watching yesterday's epi. So plz bear with any minute mistakes.
Hope you like this too.

Part 12 - On the way to destination

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Riddhima's POV

We reached my house by 6.30 pm. Throughout our drive, I noticed Armaan lost in his thoughts. I wondered what he was thinking so much. I tried asking him, but he just skipped the topic. Afterall he had gone through so much in a short span, so I thought he might need some time to regain himself. Yes, he was all alone himself in the tsunami of hurdles. My family was there to lend me support, but Armaan – he suffered alone but never made any complaints. My heart twisted in pain to watch Armaan so calm, so lost. My heart urged me to take him in my arms and make him realize that I am there for him and I gave in. When he was about to get down from the car, I stopped him and hugged him tight. "I love you Armaan. I will always be there for you." said I burying my face in his chest. He did not say anything, just planted a kiss on my forehead and this worried me even more.

We got down from the car and while walking towards the entrance, Armaan stopped me by my arm. I turned to face him. He looked straight into my eyes. I noticed that his eyes were slightly moist. "Basket, while driving I was thinking….." he stopped without completing his sentence. "Hmm Armaan" I waited for him to continue. He did not speak for a moment.

Then he slowly stepped back by a foot and kneeled down, holding my arm in his. "Basket, Will you marry me?" he asked in a low voice. I did not know what to speak. This was the moment I wished would be true with all my heart. A flush of happiness shook me. Tears rolled down my cheeks while I stared at the man who bowed in front of me with his heart in his arms – offering it to me. The man, inspite of all the pain I have given him, only loves me more in turn. "I want to spend my entire life with you. Infact I don't know how to live without you. I promise you all the happiness in the world. Will you be my Basket forever?" said he while tears escaped his green eyes which are full of love. I voice got stuck in my throat. I nodded my head in agreement, not able to speak in tears of unlimited happiness. He stood up and cupped my face in his palm. "So I take it as a yes" he whispered, wiping the tears off my face. He then took out a wonderful diamond ring from his pocket and slided over my finger. Finally, my dream came true. I threw my arms around his neck and hugged him hard, not wanting this moment to go and he responded back pulling me even closer to him. "Yes Armaan. Yes. I want to be yours – forever" I spoke fighting back the tears, cradling in his strong arms.

We stood there in each other's arms for few moments. Armaan slightly bent over to reach my ears and whispered "Basket, I guess this is the third time I am proposing to you. I hope this would be the last time. I'll get bored if have to, once again". I was startled at his words and moved back from his arms to look at his expressions. But he only had a wide grin across his face and winked at me. "Armaan" said I pushing him slightly away from me, joining his smile. We moved forward towards the front door. I felt so satisfied, so content and so happy.

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Armaan's POV

I am on cloud9. Finally I am at my destination – with Riddhima – forever. As we reached the door, I rang the bell. Within few moments, the door was opened by Padma aunty. I felt so glad meeting her after a long time and my eyes became moist. Padma aunty had always been like my mother. I was emotionally bonded to her. While I kept staring at her, Riddhima moved in and hugged her mother.

Padma aunty's call brought me out of my thoughts. I immediately moved in to the house and took her into a bear hug. "I missed you so much aunty" said I fighting back the tears. She patted at my back and said "I missed you too beta." I drew myself back and we all moved to the living room, while I put my arm around Riddhima's waist and the other around Padma aunty's shoulder – two beautiful and the most important women in my life.

We seated ourselves in the sofa, while Dr.Shashank approached us. I stood up and wished him "Good Evening Sir". "Ahh. No formalities Armaan" he said, hugging me. I am relieved that he accepted me. Padma aunty went into the kitchen to get us some snacks.

"So… When do you want to get married?" I was startled at Dr.Shashank's straight question that I literally jumped in the sofa. I looked at Riddhima. She blushed and nodded at me. Suddenly I felt myself at the top of the cliff, above all – in happiness. "Armaan? " Dr. Shashank's stern voice brought me down to the ground. "Sir…. I….." I searched for words. He looked at me expecting some answer. I was so lost in the thought of marrying Riddhima that I blurted out "As soon as possible sir. May be tomorrow." Now it was Shashank's turn to get startled. I immediately realized what I just spoke and looked at Riddhima. She turned to deep red and was biting her lips to stop her laughter. I was embarrassed and after a few moments of silence, everyone including Padma aunty, who just came with the snacks, bursted out into laughter. And I joined them.

"wow… Why are all so happy?" a voice came from the entrance. It was Atul, who entered with a big smile on his face. "Good evening Sir, Mam. Hey Armaan, Ridzy" he greeted everyone in his own style and sat beside me on the sofa.

"Hie. Beta" Padma aunty greeted him back and said "Armaan just confessed his eagerness to get married to Riddhima in a surprising way and that's why we bursted out into laughter" and started laughing again. He too joined us and I wondered how the time just passed so quickly when Padma aunty called for dinner.

While we started eating, Dr.Shashank spoke again "Ok Armaan, I'll talk to the Pandit and get the date fixed. I hope you can wait for few days." he said with a big smile on his face. "Yes… Yes sir." I agreed and looked at Riddhima. Her eyes had a spark of happiness in them I loved it. I took her hand in mine and squeezed it slightly. She blushed slightly enjoying our contact. But I also noticed that she was a bit nervous. I understood the reason too.

"Dr.Shashank, I just want to say something" said I. Everyone's eyes were focused on mine as I spoke again "I want the marriage to be simple – only with close friends from Sanjeevani and few close relatives". I recognized the surprise in their eyes as I finished. Riddhima looked at me puzzled and I nodded at her. I knew she was a little uncomfortable with the idea of marriage. She is Riddhima afterall and I understood the reason behind it. Her features became normal and so were everyone's. I was glad that they understood what I meant.

After finishing the dinner, I stayed for some time. Atul, Riddhima and I enjoyed the precious moments f our being together remembering all the past memories. Then finally came the words from Dr.Shashank, I prayed not to come. "Armaan and Atul, it's getting late. I think you should get back to your houses." He said in a stern voice. I cursed him under his breath 'Why does Dr.Shashank has to be the way he is? Why can't he let me enjoy some more time with Riddhima?' "Yes Sir…. Yes. It's time" saying so I and Atul got to our feet. We wished Padma Aunty Good night and moved towards the entrance while Riddhima escorted us.

"Bye Ridzy. Good night" Atul said to Riddhima and turned to me "Let's go Armaan". "Yes Champ. Let's…. You start the car. I will come in a moment" said I giving him the car keys. He smiled at us and left.

"So Armaan. Good night" Riddhima said, blushing. "Oye… Hoye… Basket I love you when you blush" said I moving closer to her. But she pushed me away pointing her finger towards the car in which Atul was waiting, saying "We will meet tomorrow Armaan, at Sanjeevani." I gave a dirty look at Atul when I heard the horn and turned back to Riddhima "Fine Riddhima. Good night" said I in a disappointed tone. Riddhima smiled at my expressions and pulled me back to her and planted a kiss on my cheek and whispered "Sweet Dreams my future hubby". I liked her word "Hubby", pulled her closer by her waist and kissed her lips passionately. 'She is mine – only mine' I thought to myself. She responded back with equal fervor.

She pushed me away gently noticing the horn of my car and ran inside the house, waving at me. 'I love you basket' said I to myself and went to my car to join Atul. He was grinning at me. I avoided meeting his eyes and said "Let's go champ. Why don't you stay today at my place tonight? It's long time that we talked properly." His face lit up at my words and agreed immediately.

We drove back to my house. Atul kept on talking about the fun we had at Sanjeevani and something else. But I am lost in my own thoughts remembering the time I spent with Riddhima and heart full of plans for my wonderful future with my love - Basket.

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So howz it guys? Do comment and let me know ur views.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part. wow he proposed her 3rd time, even I hope this will the last,poor guys had to go through so much. But All is well now, atleast in this ff.
continue soon and thanz for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
i am so happy
cant wait 4 them 2 get married
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

romanric part

proposing 4 the third time and then getting yes chalo kuch to acha howa
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the part plz continue soon

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