My Mr. A... 2(AR ff) Part 14 pg 86

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zenia khan

@zazi098

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

hey sani!,

you've got a great FF going on here :) it's just amazing and so different :P, i love your riddhima .... and her mind :P i know you're sick but i have to tell you ..UPTADE SOON!!!! PLEASE!!!! :P okay ab khatam :)

and pm me when you update ...phata phat se :D

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diyaa1pk

@diyaa1pk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

hi how r u ....miss ur ff ....continue soon ........

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

yaar i m missing ur FF plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

m waiting......😉🤣...n ya, mujhe pehle link milna chahiye....😡😆

Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Dark_Desire
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m first yippeeee!⭐️ nikki # 1 m the best👏

😆😆😆

m so modest rn't i😉😆

ok to the part

meri sexy churel bf

yaar u don't kno reading the part i fell off ma bed laughing. mind blowing job sanz.👏 seriously this waz the most awaited part u kno how much u made us wait for it.😭 everyday i wud be like wen will we get to see AR marry in ur ff.😍 gosh i waz blown away wen i read it seriously so many surprises. i waz thinking AR will go to a temple and accidently jus get married. u kno like the sindoor thing.😉 but right in the beginning NEPAL i waz like now wat😲 and became glued to reading. ma fav waz the stickytape part. wen i read celotape i waz like wat in the world is tat and asked ma mum. she called me an anpar and i waz like wat i din't so i asked. she told me it waz stickytape. and i waz like oooo😲 tape now it makes sense.😆 anyways i wonder why ridz had tape in her bag/ purse in the first place.😕 but then i din't care bcoz it waz too funny🤣 it actually reminds me of the time i waz at ma couzins house bcoz they were gonna take me to a party but they r older than me and like girly girls so they were doing all they stuff they needed to. well anyways i waz like only 10 so i waz getting bored so decided to bother em. i wud ask every five seconds if u r ready or can we go.😳 they got fed up with me so sent me down with this strip full of gunk. ( it was a wax strip but it look like gunk at 10😆) so anyways i waz like forget it and sat down with ma guy couzin watching a movie. he wudn't stop laughing at a joke or kept talking everytime i started focusing on the movie. i was so fustrated of the whole day so i stuck the wax strip on his mouth😳😆😆😆😆 and screamed shut up idiot.😡 tats wen ma girls cousins finally came down and saw him. omg it waz so funny wen they ripped it off his face. he was screaming so bad. guy lost some of his beard but i was laughing😆😆😆😆😆 he deserved it big time tho.😳

lmao muskaans line abt kidnapping ridz. 🤣 yaar seriously genious.👏 u kno this part i felt like ridz waz a totally acting sani like u kno.😆 i seriously luvd it. then the marriage.😲😲😲😲 m like in nepal WOW! yo the lines tat were written in the other language i skipped em. hehehe i cudn't pronounce em so i read the english version. serious u went all out for this part. good job😳 u kno the biggest shock is tat they got married for laddoos😆😆😆. the enemies took a life time commitment for a plate of laddoos😆😆😆 tell r there like really laddoos only for married couple😕 jus wanna kno.😆 and the last thing i thought ridz wud faint but it waz armaaan. at tat time i cudn't take it no more. i fell off ma bed lauging at tat part.🤣 the worst thing waz i read the update at ma cousins house and she thought i finally lost ma last screw🤪 and after waz like if u laughed like a maniac for another minute more i seriously waz gonna call the hospital.

yaar this has got to be one of ma fav parts outta this ff.⭐️

plz plz plz do update soon😃

can't wait to see everybody elses reaction and wats gonna happen next😃

luv ya❤️

Nikki😛

ur as modest as riddhima in my ff😉😆 aww thank you nikki yaar. am so contented that my mehnat paid off😃 haha even i laughing when i read the part again and the celotape part came😆 yaar ab mein ff likhu to aise sindoor thingy se kuch diff hi likhungi na😉 but am so glad that the part was a hit😃 well nikki it was riddhima's travelling bag, so she had all useful handy stuff in her handbag which included celotape. haha nikki ur so kamini, that cousin thing is hilarious😆 ab ridzy ka character sani jaisa hoga to vo sani type hi behave karegi na😉😆 haha thats the fun bit that kamines got married cuz of ladoos, i bet noe they hate the sight of it ROFL

yes some sweets are only kept of married couple😃 jus wanted to see my audience's reaction when i wrote armaan fainting part😆😆😆

thank you again bbz muahz love u

love

sani

Originally posted by: Prinnia
Yeeeeeeeeeee ME 2nd😆
😆😆
Edited*😉

Hey My sexy churel kamini jannemaan of heaven princess🤗

dekh...maine kitni jaldi edit kar diya kamini😉
Achcha name diye it was really MOST AWAITED PART
U sent them to nepal now ha😃....That's great kamini😆
haan haan jaan, badi jaldi edit kar diya. chocolate chaiye?😆. thanks you bbz😃

Thanks ki tune unke bich ki INVISIBLE wall ko jaldi tor diya
warna Hum yani tere FF ki readers to bored ho jate yaar😆
Riddhima was mind blowing in this part yaar
teri carbon copy hai puri ki puri😉
kitna jabaan chalati hai yaar😆
aur jab armaan ne bola to uske mu pe celotape laga diya
bechara mera armaan😆😆😆

muje bhi AR ki banter sune bina neend nahi aati😆😆😆

haaww riddhima meri jaisi hai?😲 i didn't knew that

ab mere dialogues aise hai ki riddhima ki zabaan scissors se bhi fast chalti hai😆

kamini can't stand ki koi us par has and especially her enemy

Riddhima ko fashion ki itni fikar thi...mujhe to pata hi nahi tha😉.....
but dekh armaan kitna sweet hai...yash johar ki movies ki HEROs bhi uske samne kuch nahi hai😉
aur ha...i totally agree with him ki Ridz ko god ne KAFI fursaat main banaya hai😆
HAW!!!...i loved ur KAM AKKAL KI AULAAD aur Bollywood anpar

well haan yeh waali riddhima ko fashion ki bohot fikar hai and mummy ki daant bhi sunni par ti hai when i don't wear my coat😆😆😆 kamini ab armaan riddhima ka pati hai, ab uske sapne dekhna chorde😉😆😆😆 u know yeh god ne fursat mein banaya hai, yeh waali baat kisi ne muje kahi thi, so just thought of adding this punch😆😆😆 thank you bbz😃

RIDZ Kitna attitude dikha ti hai yaar😆....but have to say....kamini mast hai yaar...😉😆 ab kamini sani hai to mast to hogi hina😉😆😆😆

HAW!!!!!!.......usne armaan ko khane ki dhamki di......armaan khane bohot tasty hoga na...😉 pata nahi kabhi taste nahi kiya

I loved that dialoge of muskaan yaar."nahi yaar kidnapping ki to koi tension nahi hai cuz who ever will kidnap riddhima, will drop her back saying "isse wapas lelo bhai. muje paise nahi chahiye, bas iska muh band kar wado"..it was so true.... my freind 2J said that dialogue to me when i said that am going home from a sun san way and what if someone kidnaps me

main to shaadi dekhke SURPRISED ho gayyi yaar😃
But pehle meri knowledge ko thoda sa enlighten kar
wo sach main nepali language tha......mujhe to thodi thodi guzrati bhi lag rahi thi kamini twinzy ne translate kiya tha, go ask her

Bechare Armaan-riddhima😆😆......laddo khanne gayye the.....Pundit ne special LADDO khila diya😉😆😆
Thank god ki us PUTRI ki akaal main atlast aayi ki shaadi ho gayyi hai
Aur armaan to OUT OF FOCUS hi ho gayya yaar😆😆😆

putri pundit ko nahi chorne waali😆😆😆

SUPURB PART....
it was just OUT of the world😃😃
tu to cha gayyi kamini😉
kya likha hai....Marvellous
Loved every bit of it
it becomes MORE MORE & more interesting day by day....😃
Next update jaldi karna yaar
eagerly waiting for that
keep continue Fabulous work😃
thanks for the PM😃

aww thank you bbz

ur sweet words encouraged me so much😃

love u
prinz

Originally posted by: armaanakakaran
Thank god u update
it being ages..

HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa riddhima😆
😆i love this ridz...
lol they r married
Last line cracked me up
shaddi ke laddoo
...bechara armaan faint ...want to knw wat happen next

aww sorry for delay bbz

thank you and am so glad u liked it😃

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

Twinzy yyyyyyyy 🤗
man loved the part...
ROFL it was so much funny yaar and i just cant wait for the further part.

u defo need to update soon twinzy warna abhi keh rahi hu kuch aacha nahi hone wala

no wonder mujhe bi phir morcha dukan join karna pade

n one thing... ur nepali is just fabulous... kisse siki ?

and yep overall loved the part and as always loved the special tu tu mein mein of AR

and awww Armaan cared for ridz when she was cold that was so sweet

and man ridz n her bolly movies n yeah not to forget her fashion jeez ...

well interesting n fun part..

continue soon.. muahz ! ❤️

kamini twinzy😆

aww thank you so man. am so happy ki tujhe part itna acha laga ki meri rightous twinzy morcha gang mein shamil hone ki cheap dhamki de rahi hai ROFL

mere to bhaag khul gaye😆😆😆

nepali meri behen ne sikhayi, any problem?😉😆

armaan is a sweetheart man, bas riddhima ko hi uski kadar nahi😆

no words for riddhima😆😆😆

thank you muahz

love

sani

Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

res for replying the comment 😉🤣

Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

kitni kamini hai tu par tu par poor vini vo meine comment ka reply ke liye res liya hai🤣

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani
kitni kamini hai tu par tu par poor vini vo meine comment ka reply ke liye res liya hai🤣

kaisi hai tu... fine mat karna wahan update....😡....

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: coolvini4u
kaisi hai tu... fine mat karna wahan update....😡....

par pehle muje comment to edit karne de phir hi update karungi na😆😆😆

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#250

@jiya- thank you bbz

@Kamal_23 - thank you kamal

@moonlight2630- haha i know they both got married just for the sake of laddos and thank you tubelight😃

@cute.arsh- thank you and aww thank you i feel so blessed that u liked my riddhima so much

@dazzling_armaan- yup these kinda marriages can only happen in my ff😆 riddhima ke saath jo bhi rahe, un sabki haalat kharab ho jaati hai😆 thank you

@lil_desi_goddess- thank you

@Riddss- thank you bbz

@namita18- ahem ahem😆

kyo did my part made u speechless that u couldn;t say anything😆 aww thank you so much and am so glad ki tera has has kar pet dukh gaya😆 u know i use these kinda lines in my daily lives thats why they are always at the tip of my toungue😆 riddhima and craziness go hand in hand😆 uff bolly wood se yaad aaya, i need to watch some movies😆 don't worry as the story will progress, romantic moments bhi daal dungi😆 armaan is a sweetheart par riddhima kitna attitude deti hai😆 well yes u guess it correct my mr a ki riddhima ka character is ditto mines😆 and don't worry i won't changed my self for anyone😃

@coolvini4u- tera nahi pata par haan AR ko zaroor shock mila hai😆 thank you am so glad you are liking the ff so much😃 haan vini zara sambhal kar bolna jo bhi bolna hai vo, warna kahi khalli jeeju se shaadi na ho jaaye🤣 well now whats coming ahead is going to be very interesting😉😆 no it wasn't a loop hole. interview par jaane se pehle riddhima said that she don't care what other people think of her dressing style but she can't live without fashion😆 thank you again😆

@ankitajain94- thank you and yeah they both did got married😆

@naina.sweety- thank you bbz and no problem😃

@kashrocks- thank you

@princess52- hahahahahaha habz sweety, tune promo nahi para tha kya, they both were gonna get married and now watch what happens😉 ab riddhima se shaadi karke kaun kamina faint nahi hoga😆

@Sweet_Ashum- thank you man. meri mehnat rang laayi😃 nahi twinzy ne nepali ko translate liya tha. mere ff mein abnormal cheeze bohot hoti hai😆 thank you bbz

@ri-za- thank you bbz

@disco_diva- thank you aamna

@princess_52- am fine bbz and thank you, yup they were indeed very hungry😆

@smartnsmexxi- thank you

@kweetrockstar- aww ur comment made me smile yaar😃 thank you jaan

@sweety_ursh- thank you

@swetha10- thank you and yeah shaadi ka laddo thing was funny😆

@dmg_roks_antara- haye rabba i hope i didn't damage ur organs😆 thanks anatara😃

Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago