*AR one shot-Love is pain* Replies--pg4,5 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyyy Sanjana !!
Gosh, you really made me cry today... that was such an emotional and really heart wrenching one shot ! :( :(
beautiful penning hun ! :) :) :) the ending was sooo sooo sad and just so.. this tells you that you should never let go of true love, maybe it'll be gone forever once you let it go...
thanks for the pm !
Fab penning ! :) :) :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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im so so sooo hurt gosh that was so sad, poor her or himi dunno, why did he left her first, :(( the separation was something so sad and then her sudden dead and the letter , that was beautiful but extremlyyy sad , now i want to CRY :(((((((((
plz write another happy OF na plzzz ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

owww very sad os

but beautifully penned down loved it

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
such a sad os
i was literally crying at the end
loved the way u wrote it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
oops ... what a sad story. :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hello ,
your one shot is very sady and touchy.
kabhi kabhi insaan kuch afsurda huta hey tu usse khamushi aur sad song hi pasand attye hain, ishi story bhi wo sad hi chosse kerta hey this is a life my dear .
yeh hi waqat qurbat ka huta hey.
I think your story not only best it is superb,
bas ek ehsaan k hum akely hain yeh hi insaan ko maar dalta heyso jo dil sey qareeb hutye hain un ka saath buhat zaroree hey
sorry yaar maine kuch ziyada hi santy likh deya.
with love take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
@ Ritu di-- thanks a lot for your comments di. You were the first one to leave your comments. Oh! I made you cry...i know its really touching..!! If i have a nice concept in mind, i'll definitely write another one. :)

@Robin_M-- thanks a lot for comments. True, it was sad and tragic.

@smartnsmexxi-- thanks for your comments. I made you cry literally? aww...!

@lil_desi_goddes--thanks for your comments. Yeah, i know the ending was really touching and sad.

@naureen_aly--thanks for your comments!

@sammy4u--I am glad you liked it. Thanks.

@Steffi- You literally scared me, when you said 'That was horrible' hehhehee..I actually felt i wrote it so badly. But when, you later clarified that you meant the story(it was sad) and not the writing, it was relieved. Concerning you question, Armaan really meant what he said and he was very serious about it. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments. If i have a nice concept in my mind, i'll definitely write another one.

@AttractiveAdya-- Thanks for your comments.

@Swetha- Thanks for your comments. I am glad you liked it.

@Nidha di- Thanks a ton for your comments di. I really miss you.

@Prinnia- Thanks for your comments. I am happy to know that you liked it a lot.

@Riddss- Thanks.

@ashi.loves.ks-Thanks.

@angelina_2005- Thanks. I am glad that you liked it so much.

@karans_angel-Thanks a lot for your comments. You really made my day. I'll definitely write more, if i have a nice concept in my mind and i'll pm you for sure.

@Farwa- Thanks for your comments. Aww..you are crying?

@-Dreamy_Girl- Thanks a ton for your comments. I am really happy to know that you liked it so much. I guess i wrote it well for i made you cry..aww...I am glad that you felt it to worthwhile to read again and again. Aur kiski yaad aa gaye?

@Soumya- I'll be waiting for your comments. Even i am happy to write something after a really long break.

@Nruti- I have been really busy for the past few months because of my 10th board exams. It was due to this reason, i didn't even come regularly on IF. Concerning my other ff, i am sorry to say that i am not going to continue them. I am putting an end to them. Its been really long and i am out of ideas. Also, it will be difficult for me to update regularly. So, if i write anything, that will be a One-shot, so that my readers don't have to wait ages for me to update. Thanks a lot for your comments. I am glad you liked it. Yeah, it was emotional and the last line, very touching, for sure.

@Sunaina- Thanks a lot for your comments. I missed you a lot. I am glad you liked it so much. True, one shouldn't let go off true love. But, its also a fact, that one realizes its importance, only when they have lost it.

@Nina- Thanks a lot for your comments. True, it was sad, the separation, the letter, her sudden death. I am glad you liked it. If i have a nice concept in my mind, i'll definitely write another one. Next time, happy for sure. :)

@ blessing-beauty- Thanks for your comments. I am happy to know that you liked it very much.

@kashndsel4eva-Thanks a lot for your comments. Aww...i made you cry.

@nonnie- True, very sad.

@Suvarna....-Yeah, really sad.

@shinseen- Thanks a lot for your comments. Yeah, it was really touching and a sad one. You became really senti..:( its ok, ho jaata hai kabhi-kabhi. :)

@ Iqbal Neha1- Thanks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u know something i wanted to write an ff on this...like i loved d sms......which came to me in jan...but i cudnt get time to write..thank god 4 dat...as u have layed it so beautiful...seriously a painful love.....
its an amazing one...touched evry1's heart.....loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was so sad..:( esp tht last line..:( :( :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
this is so sad.... i cried in the end....
please an earnest request to all.... write happy AR stories...

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