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Posted: 15 years ago
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part=1 a beautiful morning in mumbai.....camera focuses on a big mansion where a girl wearing a saree is doing the arti n another woman is with her....the arti is done....
p=riddhima beta...jake armaan ko bulake la...
the girl is riddhima shergill......
r=ji mama...abhi bulati hu.....
riddhima was going up when padma calls her....
p=ab riddhima upar jake...
r=mama mujhe yaad ha...
p=warna woh nahi uthega
r=janti hu mama....
riddhima goes in her room where someone was talking on the phone n was busy tying up his tie..the person is armaan...
a=nahi....mujhe meri file abhi ek ganteke andaar mere table pe chahiye..
r=ufffooo..armaan tum bhi na..taayar hojao pehle..phir chillana..har roz subhaha uthetehi phone aur kuch kaam nahi ha kya???
a=ek second riddhima....ha....ok..mujhe meri file chahiye..
r=lao ma band deti hu.....
a=thankss...chalo ma chalta hu..
r=ruko kaha jaraha ha???? nashta nahi karna ha kya?????
a=are ha....chalo....ek minute.....humare prince uthe kya???
r=nahi..bass uthane jarahihu...
a=riddhima..jaldi karo..office keliye late horaha ha..
r=tum niche chalo....5 minute me usse lekar ma ati hu...
a=jaldi ana...
r=ye samrat bhi na..har subhah derse uthta ha...
ten riddhima enters another rooom..the room is ful of musical instruments...drums..guitars..music player.......basket ball.but the room is tidy up.....a hot dude is sleeeping under the bedsheeet...when riddhima shouts up,.....
r=SAMRAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the boy slowly opens his eyes n looks at riddhima who was staring at him......then he covers his face with the pillow...
r=are mane to abhitak parda bhi nahi hataya pehlehi mu dhak lia...
s(in sleepy tone)=par hatoge na bhabi ab..plzzz...sone do na bhabi....
r=bilkul nahi..samrat 8.30 bajraha ha....office nahi jana kya??? armaan aur papa niche wait karraheha...
s=to karne do...ya bolo ke chale jay mujhe nahi ana..mujhe sona ha...plzzzzzzzzzz
r=sam..agar tu abhike abhi nahi utha na to kaalse ma tujhe nahi uthaungi......shadike baad bhi nahi...
saying riddhima turns to leave when samrat holds her hand n gets up..he makes her sit..
s=bhabi not fair..har din ap mujhe esehi blackmail karti ha.....
r=karna parta ha....
s=kyu?? bhabi ap janti ha ke jabtak har subhah ap mujhe nahi bulati apki awaz sune begar ma nahi uthta.....
a=janti ha riddhima..aur hum sab..siiliye to riddhima ki duty ha..
s=bhai plzzzz......
r=sam...tu bacche ki tarah kyu behave karta ha???
s=ma baccha nahi hu...
a=ye lo..khud kehta ha baccha nahi ha aur bacche ki tarah behave karta ha...rriddhima ke na uthanepar nahi uthata...esa lagta ha riddhima teri patni ha....
s=kassh hoti...
a=kya???????????????????
s=aur nahi to kya??? aagar mane apko zor laga kar nahi kehta to thori na ap bhabiko propose karte????
a=par kia to mane na....
s=aur mom dad se baat kisne ki thi????
a=woh....
r=acha ab larna band...samrat kabtak ese??? teri engagement hochuki ha..kuchi mahinome teri dia se shadi..
hearing thjis samrat gets off the bed n goes to the window.....
r=sam......
a=sam mere bhai..agar tu usse pyaar nahi karta....usse khush nahi ha..phir sagai kyuki??? aur ab to baat shaditak pouch chuki ha....tu kyu karraha ha???
r=armaan...ek minute...samrat mujhe bata.....tu mujhse aur tere bhaise sab bolta ha..ye baat bol..hum zarur teri problem kaal haal nikalenge.....tu bata to sahi...agar tu diia se nahi kisi aurse..
s=nahi bhabi...esi koi baat nahi ha,...ma kisi aur se pyaar nahi karta...par dia se bhi pyaar nahi karta......ma to sirf usse dost manta hu....
r=agar esi baat ha to kyu usse shadi karraha ha?????
s=ye ap puch rahiha bhabi...app to sab janti ha na...mere shadise mana karne par usne sucide karneki koshish ki..mane ekbaar uske sath dinner nahi gaya to usne 2 din tak khana nahi kahay..ab agar mane shadinahi ki to pata nahi...aur wase bhi dad ki dosst ki beti ha na..mom dad ko bohot pasand ha......mom ne to kaha ha ke woh dia kohi meri patnike roop me aur apni choti bahu chahti ha.,.,...aur dad ne kaha ha ke agar mere dil me apne parents.....unki izzat ha pyaar ha to ma shadi karunga..mom ne kasam di ha..to ma kya karu bhabi aphi batayiye?????
armaan n riddhima looked at eachother in question look but no answer...
s=aur wase bhi bhabi mane jis ladkiki tasveer apne dilme dekhi ha....shayed woh kabhi hogi bhi nahi..
r=ladki????
a=tasveer..?????
s=mere dilme humehsase ek chehra ha ke mere lie jo ladki hogi woh esi hogi....
r=kaisi??????
samrat went to the bed....n sat there....
s=ek aisi ladki jiske khubsuraat akhose ye duniya aur bhi khubsuraat lagee........
he stands up n takes the basket baall...starts bouncing it....
s=uske chalne par sari duniya..saree log tham jay....bass sirf woh chalti jay aur sab usse dekhe....mere kadam bhi rukh jaye......sirf uski aur barte rahe...
he throws the ball in the net n takes the guitar.....
s=jiske payal ki awaz kisibhi gane se zyada surili ho...............jiski baate itni acchi ho ke maan akre har paal bass uski baatehi sunte rahe.....
jiske awaz itni pyaar ho ke dil chahe din bhar usiki awaz sunte rahe...hum kuch na bole..bas woh bolte rahe......
jo sabse sundaar ho...sabse pyaari...sabse acchi...jo jitni simple ho....utnihi attractive bhi ho....
jo apne pehlehi nazar me sabko ghayal karde....par apne andaaz me..esi hogi meri ladki........sirf meri..
hearing his description armaan n riddhima starts claaping...samrats dream broke...
a=dude......sapnese bahar aaa....
r=wah..kya description diya ha...wase kaha dekha esi ladki???sapneme???
s=nahi mere dilme..
a=oyehoye...kya baat ha...
s=par bhabi...esi koi ladki nahi ha......aur dia kabhi esi nahi ban payegi..
r=samrat..
s=anyways..i dont ccare ke meri shadi ho ya naho..jisse bhi ho...par mere bhai aur bhabi humesha mere sath ha...
a=absolutely..
r=accha abhi tu jaldise tayyar hojao....hum niche wait karraha ha...
s=5 minutee..
r=chalo armaan...
scene shifts...everyone was having breakfast......
p=riddhima...samrat kaha ha???
r=mama..woh...
s=yehi hu mom...
p=ao beta....nashat tahnda horaha ha...
s=ha...
r=sam....plzzzz lunch thikse khalena....
s=ok bhabi..
p=riddhima beta abna tum apni duty karna kaam kar do....tumhe bhi practise hojayegi..aur sam ko bhi adat dalniha na....jab dia ayegi..
s=ab..bhabi..ma chalta hu.....mera hogaya...bhai chale...
r=samrat...
a=ab mom..chalte ha...dad se kehna hum nikaal chuke ha..
p=thik ha armaam..
a=bye,....
r=byee.....
armaan n samrat..in car.....
a=sam..tu ese kyu uthgaya????
s=bhai roz roz mom ki ye baate...i just dont like it....
a=chill yaar....sab thiik hojayega..wase aj teri new assightent ke liey candidants araha ha na???
s=ha bhai....bhai ajka weather kitna accha ha na??? kitni acchi hawa ha...
a=ha.....
s(in mind)=esa kyu lagraha ha jaisa aj kuch naya hone wala ha meri life me??? jo meri life badal dega...ye khubsuraat hawaka ehsaas mujhe kyu ishara deraha??????? kya kuch hone wala ha??????????
scene shifts to a bus stand....the place is crowy all r waiting for the bus...a girl wearing a blue salwar suit...looking at her watch...n looking very tensed.....she is sweating.....her innocenet eyes behind the specs...n she is murmuring something in her mind
girl=plzzz bhagwan is bus ko jaldse bhej do..aj interview ka pehla din ha..ma late nahi hosakti...plzzz
then a man says......."are bus agayi....."the girl turns other way.....n a sweet smile appears on her facee.....the girl is gunjan..
g=thank you bhagwan.....
but unfortuantley the bus wasnt her bus....it was another buss..
g=oh noi....meri bus kab ayegi,.????
scene shifts..
a=sam..tu mujhe na bank me utar de...ma phir aunga..
s=ok bhai..
samrat was driving the car....n gunjan was at the bus stop........scene divides in two....samrat smiling..n gunjan tensed...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
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Yayyyyyyyyyyyy Me first....
Awsomeeeeee...Mindblowingggggggg...Superbbbbbbbbbb.....Fantasticcccccccc updt....
I totally luved it to the core.....
Aaj tune mera dil jeet liya lol😆
really yr...it was a great prt...
Ples cont soooooooon...cause i cant wait fot sajans meet.....
N thnx a ton for the pm
luv..
Sonal
Edited by sweetsonal156 - 15 years ago
-Jyotika- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
awesomeee updt dear..
loved it..
loved d way sam described his dream gal.. 😳
cant wait for sajan first meet..
pllzzzzzz do cont soon
MagicLantern thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
loved it
pls update soon
Ultrachic thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
the first part was awesome.....
please cont. soon!!
Aaru77 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
the cs and the concept sounds intresting....
looking forward to it....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
awesome....superb.....
wat a start....luved it.... d way samrat describes his dreamgirl.....amazing.... 👏
cont soon..... thanx 4 d pm.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

edited

hayeeeeeeee awsomeeee updt dear..
loced the way sam describe her dream girl...😳😳😳😳
it was so swwet yaarrr
keep it up..
continuee soonnn...
Edited by ridhima1_gunjan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
wahhhhhhhhhh kya bat hai
really mindblowing 1st part
well
waiting 4 sajan's first meeting yar reallyyy

plzz plzzz plzz do continueeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Aweeessooommeee yar...
Just loveeeddd it...
Sammy lift degaa???
Right??
Cont soon....

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