do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142 - Page 66

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 29

Mayank was resting in his bed in ward

Nupur had been sent to home by mayank a s she was too tired and weak although she didn't wanna go but after all mayank is mayank so she went to take rest

On other side samrat gunjan armaan and mayanks mom were busy in planning some sort of surprise for mayur

And''.its surprise yr wait for nest update

In mayanks ward

Nupur enter with soup and flower'. Obviously for mayank

She saw mayank sleeping peacefully so she sit beside him and ruffled his hairs

N: shukr hai tum thik ho'bus ab tumhe me kuch nhe hone dngi ..tumhari parchaye ban ke rahoge

Mayank opened his eye as he felt a drop of tear in his cheeks

M: nupur tum phir shuru hogye'maine mana kiya thana ( angrily)

N: arey ye to khushi k aaansu ha

M: acha kis baat ki khushi hai ( he asked intentionely so a to knw her feelings)

N: tumhe nhe pta( confusingly)

M: nhe tum btao na plzzz( pleading like a small kid)

N: budhu mjhe is baat ki khushi hai k meri jaan meri zindagi phir ase mere paas laut aye hai.tumhe khoke phir se paaya hai maine

M: lekin me to kabhi tum se dur gaya hi nhe tha. Kyu tmhe yad nhe humara wo waada .sath jeene aur marne ka waada kiya tha aur mayank Sharma wade nhe torta.

N; ha jaanti hu akru

M:to ek wo to do

N: kiya( se knew wht he want but she acted as she didn't knw)

M: tumhe nhe pta

N: nhe na

M: ja mjhe tum se koi bt nhe karni

Nupur smiledat his childish acted and gave a small peck on his cheek

M: ye kia mjhe to achi si sweet kiss chaye

N: wo to tumhe jab mileygi jab tum ye soup piyogi.vegetable soup

M: yuck

N: mayank job hi ho peena to padega

M: jaan plz nhe peena

N: mjhe kuch nhe sunna phir tum hi soch lo jo tmhe chaye won he mileyga

M: acha ( making nasty face)

She feed him and he silently drink all

Thn

M: ab do

N: oh acha ye lo paaani me to hul hi gaye thi

M; paani maine paaani kab maanga tha

N: arey tumhe ye nhe chaye tha to kia chaye tha

M: kuch nhe( sadly)

N; acha m going dr se tumhari progress k bare me kuch discuss karna hai

M: ha to jao na yaha one k waise bhi koi fayda nhe ha( in taunting style}

Nupur left with mischief smile

M: kitni ajeeb ho tum nupur mjhe boring sadu kehti ho aur khud kuch bhi nhe samjhti . tumhe to eera bday bhi yaad nhe hoga .

Mayank was so sad

But nupur had some other planning to make mayanks bday memorable

Now come to terries whee gunjan and diya are arranging sum thing

Mean while nupur enters

G: thnk god nupur tum agaye yr hame to kuch bhi samj nhe arha tha yr

D: ha yr tum hi kuch thk karo

N: ha yr li knw bt kia karu yr mayank chor hi nhe rha tha

D and g: oh ho to ye bt hai

N:aisi koi bt nhe hai( blushing)

D: acha chalo btao k karna kiya hai

N: bus kuch aisa karna hai k mayank ki bday special banjaye

G: but bhai ko pta chal gaya to

N: aisa kuch nhe hoga isiliye to manie ye bt sirf hum teen k beech me rakhi hai

D: hmmm chalo start preparation

Thn they arranged all things as mayanks wish and likes

It was noe abt 10 0 clock

N: uhhhhh finalll sab hogya yr hope k mayank ko ye sab pasand aye. Pichle dino hum ne buhat zyada saha hai bus ab hime in prob se thora break chaye

D: u right babes bus ab tum ek hojao

N: thnx diya

N: chalo me mayank k paas jao warnam ayank ko shak hojayega

Then nupur go to mayank hugged him lightly

N: kaise ho ab( pretending to b normal)

M; zinda hu

N: kia

M: thk hu me .tum kaha thi

N: yhi thi bus dr se kuch kaam tha unhone bola k do din me tum ko discharge kardenge

M: chalo kuch to acha hua( in taunting way)

N: (in mind) I knw mayank k tum naraz ho bus kuch der aur phir tumhara gussa thanda hojayega

M: acha tumhe ghar nhe jaana kiya

N: ha bus bye kehne hi ayi thi

M: ok jao na bye

Thn nupur left leaving angry sad mayank

Meanwhile nupur text gunjan

Lets see whts she text him

Nupur msg

" hey there is change in plan . I will b there at terrace u have to bring mayank there and leave him there'

Gunjan replied

" how"

Nupur replied

" ur brother you better knw wht to do"

The end

Sorry for short update

Will cont soon

By Saturday pakka

Till thn read and comment

Precap

Maynk bday by nupur

Frndz do suggest sum song regarding this

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic update sehr...

Nupur mayu k wajah se rest karne k liye chali gayi hai...

Aww sam armaan n mm r planning surprise 4 mayur.

Mayur convo was rocking....

Ohh bechare mayu ko soup k badle jo chaiyye tha nai balke paani mila...so sad. 😭

Are mayu samajh raha hai k nupr uska bday bhul gayi.. 😲

Par yahan pe toh nupur gunj n diya k saath milke surprise tayyar kar rahi hai...

Hmm last moment nupur change her plan...ab dekhte hai gunj kaise lati hai mayu ko.

Par not fair haan itna intizaar karwa k itni si update.

Par isiliye maaf kiya k agli update surprises se bhari hogi aur lambi hogi. 😃

Luv
*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yupiiiiii am second

i loved it sehr
Nupur ka dialogue ki mayu akdu sadu hai aur wo wo kuch bhi nahi samajhti hai 😆😆😆
Wow what a plan for his b'day?
haye kitna maja aa raha hoga na
and she is saking Gunjan to get him
very smart
but ek shikayat y do u leave always in suspense
No worries i loved it and next part should be soon sehr
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update
waiting eagirly for saturday
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update will wait for saurday
thanks for the pm 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sesh
Awesum Upd.
Thanxz For The PM 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
sehr
main tiu tumse ussa hu
kyun?
r a itna chota update koi karta hain kya.
but anyways it was superb update.
loved mayur convo.
haye mayur r so sweet.
loved their bonding
so the gang decided to arrange a surprise b.day party for mayank
hmm very good idea.
waiting for it.
but try to make it longer next time. ok????????

take care.




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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part...
update it s000n....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsumd

Fantastic update sehr...

Nupur mayu k wajah se rest karne k liye chali gayi hai...

Aww sam armaan n mm r planning surprise 4 mayur.

Mayur convo was rocking....

Ohh bechare mayu ko soup k badle jo chaiyye tha nai balke paani mila...so sad. 😭

Are mayu samajh raha hai k nupr uska bday bhul gayi.. 😲

Par yahan pe toh nupur gunj n diya k saath milke surprise tayyar kar rahi hai...

Hmm last moment nupur change her plan...ab dekhte hai gunj kaise lati hai mayu ko.

Par not fair haan itna intizaar karwa k itni si update.

Par isiliye maaf kiya k agli update surprises se bhari hogi aur lambi hogi. 😃

Luv
*kulsum*


hwey angel
m glad u lyke it
i knw it was tooo short yr
agar tum mere city me rehti na to tmhe me apni notebook deti us me saare updates hai
but yr type karne ka time nhe milta waise surprise to buhat aaane wale hai
just wait and watch
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Posted: 15 years ago
Waw...........meri sizee this one is lovely 😍
update soon yar

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