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I hope I'll not disappoint you guys by posting this part
So here I am posting the next part
Kindly read it if you have time and please try to comment rather than just clicking the like tab as your comments are more precious for me

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Part 1

She was tired now after running. For the first time in her life she have to struggle to save her from the human beasts. As she backed off she felt somebody's hand on her shoulder. She turned furiously and .... her nightmare become true .. A gang of four boys and one girl were standing behind her ... That girl whom she trust like anything .. she betrayed her and now she was there to fight for her dignity ..... She again tried to move from there but because of continuous running her legs cannot move

"Oh come on baby why are you pretending so much .. we can spend good time together" A boy pulled her towards him

"No ... please don't do this ... I beg you ... please" She cried and tried to push the boy back

"Ahh poor baby .. don't listen to him ... you come with me" Another boy said and the boy who was holding her pushed her and she fell on the ground. They formed a circle around her and she was looking all of them helplessly

"Please don't do this ... Please let me go ... Please" She was totally on the mercy of them and they all were laughing at her

"HELP SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME" She shouted with hope that maybe somebody will come to save her

"Cry baby ... Cry as hard as you can ... nobody's gonna rescue you" A boy said laughing

"What is happening here" They all looked at each other

"Oh shit ... go .. run .... you ... we are not gonna left you ... Go" They all ran from there and she thanked God

"Mam are you ok" It was a police man but before she could answer she faints and fell on the ground

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He has invite his business partner Salil at the dinner now they were leaving when Mrs Salil Thakkar spoke

"I must say Mr Raheja that you are so lucky to have Riddhima as your wife" He smiled at the comment while Riddhima looked at her husband to watch his reaction

"You are right agar Riddhima meri life mein na hoti toh main khud ko adhoora mehsoos kerta" Armaan placed his hands on her shoulders and take her in his arms. She just smiled

"Excuse me main zara Raj ko daikh loon .. Bye" She excused and came from there while Armaan watched her in anger


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"Di please ... please main abhi shadi nahi ker sakti" Avni said making puppy face

"Per Avni tum choti maa ko jaanti ho na unhon ne kaha hai toh matlab tumhari shadi Mayank se hogi" Other girl said applying kajal to her eyes

"Di mere pass aik solution hai" Avni got out of bed

"Kya Avni" She went to cupboard and take out her duppata

"Di aap Avni ban ke Mayank se mil laina .. hai na best idea"

"Kya" Nupur turned and narrowed her eyes on her, "Tum pagal ho gayee ho"

"Please Di" Avni joined her hands

"No Avni" She tried to refuse

"Please Di meri khatir" and Nupur can do anything to see her sister happy

"Theek hai main uss se miloon gi per agar woh aik acha larka hua toh tumhain uss se saghai kerni parhe gi" She surrendered

"Thanks Di you are the best sis of the world" Avni hugged her and she smiled at her childish act


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He entered the room in rage. Riddhima looked at the door and get scared.

"Kya kia tum ne bahir" He said loudly

"Armaan please Raj uth jaaye ga" She tried to stop him. He came forward hold her hand and dragged her outside the room

"Armaan leave me mujhe dard ho raha hai" He left her hand at once, she hold her ankle which reddened by his grip

"Kya sabit kerna chahti ho tum ke main bohat bura hoon" He hold her arms tightly and she closed her eyes with the pain

"Armaan please .. mujhe dard ho raha hai"

"DARD ... yehi toh tum sub ko batana chahti ho ke tumhara pati tumhain dard ke siwa kuch nahi de sakta" His fingers were penetrating in her arms and she joined her lips together to control the pain

"Yaad rakhna Riddhima tumhain mera pyar kabhi nahi mile ga .. tum iss ghar mein sirf Raj ki maa ban ke aayee ho iss se zyada mujh se kabhi expect mat kerna ... SAMJHI TUM" He shouted and tears came in her eyes. Only then phone start ringing

He looked at her red face and moved towards the phone

"Hello"

"Hi bhai"

"Mayank" He exclaimed with happiness while Riddhima looked at her with piercing eyes, "Kaise ho tum"

"Main theek hoon ... aap aur Bhabhi kaise hain aur Raj kaisa hai" He asked

"Haan yahan bhi sub theek hai" She threw a hatred look on Riddhima

Mayank: "Main ne yeh batane ke liye phone kia hai ke main kal sham ki flight se India aa raha hoon"

Armaan: "Such .. theek hai kal main tumhain airport se le loon ga"

Mayank: "G Bhai ab main phone rakhta hoo kal milte hain ... Bye"

"Bye" Saying this he put down the phone

He again turned to Riddhima, "Kal Mayank wapis aa raha hai aur main nahi chahta ke tum uss ke saamne koi bhi tamasha banao ... so be careful" He said and went to his room while she knelt down on floor and started crying

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"You will lose this race" A boy said to him

"I have never ever lost any bike race and mark my words .. I'll win this one too" He covered his face with helmet

Only then announcer announce the beginning of Race

His competitor drove the bike at the whistle, he smiled and wait for few moments then he raced his bike and in 1 minute he crossed his competitor, Exactly after 4 minutes and 5 seconds he crossed the finish line. He stopped the bike and got up of it, he looked back and slowly removed his helmet.

"Yaar tu hamesha kaise jeet jata hai" This was Sameer his competitor for the race and his best friend

"Well I am a born winner" He said smiling and it was not false he mean it


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well that's it for today guys
I hope you guys will like it
please don't forget to comment

and I ask you guys one thing that rather giving long updates after long if you guys allow me can I update short parts early!

I need your suggestion guys!


Edited by NabeehaFS - 15 years ago
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heyyyy dear,
awesome part
thanks for PM.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyyy dear,
awesome part
thanks for PM.


love
Riddss



hey thanks yaar 😊

and you're welcome
Edited by NabeehaFS - 15 years ago
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interesting start:) looking fwd to this FF:)

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Originally posted by: myownarea

interesting start:) looking fwd to this FF:)



Thanks yaar 😊
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Gr88 start dear...
Cant wait for moree...
Cont soon yaar....

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