My MayUr/ArTi OS corner: ArTi OS Prt3 updtd Pg 23! - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
Yami 🤗
I am so glad that you finally updated the 3rd part, making all the praanis so happy 😆 But seriously, I was pleasantly surprised and so glad !
Awww, Yami it was such an ArTilicious and totally adorable update. 😍 I loved it to bits. Gosh, I so wish this was in real life as well, I so wanna see them together ☺️🤪
Please update the 4th part ASAP Yami, I am itching to read more.😃
ILY Yami <3<3
You've made us praanis very very happy 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Aaaaww shooo cute! :D Amazing work Yamini :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
Yams... that was really cute.. I am waiting for more surprises though... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww yams di that was so cute lolz nice work !
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Posted: 15 years ago
😲diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i was in hostel i came and this wonderful surprise🤗

rushing to read it😍 😆

EDIT:

omg u r back with a large LOUD BANG ......first of all i cant believe that u remembered that i forced u to dedicate to me😳......but i am proud that i did 😎🤣...becz its sooo special to see my name with such such lovely and artilicious update ☺️☺️ i love u sooo much for this di🤗🤗 & i dont say thanks to people i love choo much so i wont😳😆

and and ........coming to this OS di arti being back have inspired way to much😲😆 this was soo perfect di, so sweet soooo cute, soo romantic, so hot ☺️☺️......and by god soo funny🤣........i am going mad and i have actually saved this one 😍😍 .........and will soon be mailing to rati di and arjun jiju for inspiration maybe😉😆
okay the start waking up in each other arms .....di u fainted me in that first para only🤪 not fair🤔😆........then the walk hand in hand, i am dieing to se that, i am having bufferflies afeter reading it 4 time too😆.......omg the chai sharing part rati what was that u refusing to share chai with arjun?😲🤣 i luved that part to bits di ........but i am glad arjun finally told her that this increases love☺️....
..such a awwwwwwww part😍

A : bahot kuch, kisi aur time bataunga main (with the flirty/naughty look)
di this line too by god i can soo picture arjun saying this to rati with that naughty look☺️ 😳.....y the hell am i blushing soo badly😆
oye dont get me started on the too kisses part ohhh my first the arjun one i can soo picture it, and the hug after that, do dil ek jaan☺️ ......as if that was not enough for drooling u added rati kisses arjun ☺️😍
di love the dialogues, that rati one "that i have finally found the man i have looking for such long time" and arjun one u r mine forever..🤪ohhh my u always add ur sweetness and cuteness in ur os too😳........di u have any idea what sort of level of madness i am in after this!

Di i loved it and i will waiting for the next update love u sooooooooooo much
and big thanks okay no thnks to u .....mauhhhhhh!!!!🤗🤗








Edited by theaneesha1992 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow yamini
too good
u r too good at this
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
What a kamini I am for not reading this earlier. *hits self million times* *faints* *wakes up again* *reads OS*

It was so ArTilicious yaar 😍 Simply so beautiful ❤️
I was totally drooling and laughing!!

I can't wait for part four 🤪

And thanks for the dedication 🤗 I love you too and can share anything with you my elder sis! 🤗

Awesome, awesome, SIMPLY awesome! You write so well Di!

Write on MN too na 😳

Love,
Mrs. S 😎

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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣 Oh itne chote sa cup. 😆 So naughty Yamini. Awwwwww it was sooooooo adorable and each and every bit was written beautifully!

You are an amazinggggggggg writer Yamini and ofcourse write the fourth part!

Keep it up Yams!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shinz

😭 😒 😔
i dont get a dedication.....i am no longer your friend and sweetheart...and u dont love me anymore *sighs and weeps*

keeping that apart....,
the OS was very cute...i especially loved the way they thot abt that dialogue.......saazish one...LOL.....and how cutely do they muse at the fact that all their fans wnt them to be together...!!

it was very cute yam di:) but its not ddicated to me!

anyways......i loved the romance.......:)
but:(



jealous?😉😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yami Yami Yamiiiiiiiiiiiiii
I feel like running n giving u a tight hug !!!!!🤗
itni cutee n choti si n more cute n choti si OS hai !!
I just love it !!
n the part where Rati sayzzz inke cup itne chote se hote hai🤣
ArTi chooo cuteeee !!
just love thos OS!!!
keep writing na !!
u r such a talented writer !!!
luvvv ya sis🤗
-Lina-

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