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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Mansi...

I know I am late with the comment, I mean its already around a dozen and a half pages over and I am here after long. Waise, congratulations and all the very best for this newest addition to your FF... I mean the new thread.

Now about the part... The sort of intro-title said it all and was enough to create curiosity. But then how can we resist reading the part itself...

It is finally reaching its spot... I mean realization about what is Armaan for her. The thought of leaving him is making her conscious, but still want her to feel restless. When she was reading his diary, I was happy to see her guilty for her behavior towards Armaan. But I was also disappointed when she suspected Armaan yet again for his intentions with Vivek... I mean she has known Armaan for long enough now, but still when it comes to Vivek, the first thought that passes her mind is ALWAYS if Armaan is 'planning' to trap Vivek. I feel sorry for Armaan. I know Riddhima will realize it very soon.

Finally she met Vivek... abruptly, but she had to meet him someday. What I liked the most about that scene was Riddhima's resolute not to leave without informing Armaan... atleast she respects and cares that much.

I was extremely shocked on reading Riddhima and Vivek's conversation. Vivek was perfect with every word. The balance he had managed to keep while trying to allure her into his so-called-reality, was presented so aptly that it was enough to fool any person. I so hated him for lying. But at the same time, a new thing that I noticed made me smile... and that was despite of his scornful words against Armaan, Riddhima's support was strong enough to stay intact. I think Catherine was like another Angel sent to reveal the truth. She did what none could have done... cleared mud from the glass so that Riddhima could see the real picture.

The way Vivek was telling her everything made him a poor soul who was trapped by mishappenings of life, but I was confused about one thing and that is – Gabe... I mean who does she belonged to? Was she Vivek's or someone else's? Then when Rob butted in, I knew that Vivek was trying to hide the fact that Gabe was an outcome of his own betrayal... he is a disgusting man.

Finally, I had to pat Riddhima's back for being smart. She figured out through her quick calculations that Vivek was lying to her all the time and he had no intentions of getting back to her. Even right now he was just trying to look innocent to save his *s* from being kicked. But atleast he is human enough to feel something for his daughter. That's a relief and its good also in a sense, coz this will be the biggest reason of him not turning his towards Riddhima ever again.

Armaan, dude don't worry, your coast is clear now. But I am more than just sure that he still has so much to do. His relationship with Riddhima is still on the edge of cliff. By whatever I have gathered from Riddhima's character, I can say that it will take time for her to forget and forgive. And ever if she does is able to do that, she will take time to move on in her life. Another thing that concerns me is that, if she chose to stay with Armaan, then I am not sure she will realize it soon enough that she has fallen for Armaan. *sigh* I wonder how much more efforts Armaan has to put in? *sigh*

Thanks for the PM dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sweetie!

first of all congratz on the new thread! 👏
now....4 the part......it was AMAZING!!
SUPERB JOB! 👏
the part toke me forever 2 finish reading....lol....but it was very interesting 😃
finally everything is out in the open!
it was sooo shocking abt vivek's plan n all 😲
i already had a doubt on him tht he was cheating on riddhima
i still remeber the part where riddhima calls him n she hears a women's voice in the background...from then on i knew it
n now since everything is cleared i hope we get 2 c some ar scenes really soon 😳
looking forward 2 tht!
update soon!
tc!
Edited by Jinalee114 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey mansi,

Sorry for late comment.

So much workload ,shayad kaamdev kuch jyada khush the.

" sabar ka phal meetha hota hai " ye jisne bhi kaha hai ye baat tumhara update padhke 100% sach lagti hai.

What an update ! I think u r Just excellent writer.

The way whole unfold drama u wrote it was just awesum.

I think vivek is disgusting he is selfish person.

I just hope now ridz will not blame to ami for all this.

Ami is just perfect husband. (just hope ridz will realize it soon)

" No, I think I'm the lucky one to get him "- mindblowing dialogue from today update ( just hope it will come true soon)

I think wait karna waste nahi gyaa .

It worth.

Just waiting for next pls jyada late mat karrna

Awesome ! ( just one word to whole update. Im surprise that every time I found there is new aspect in ur ff)

so happy

Hey mansi,

Sorry for late comment.

So much workload ,shayad kaamdev kuch jyada khush the.

" sabar ka phal meetha hota hai " ye jisne bhi kaha hai ye baat tumhara update padhke 100% sach lagti hai.

What an update ! I think u r Just excellent writer.

The way whole unfold drama u wrote it was just awesum.

I think vivek is disgusting he is selfish person.

I just hope now ridz will not blame to ami for all this.

Ami is just perfect husband. (just hope ridz will realize it soon)

" No, I think I'm the lucky one to get him "- mindblowing dialogue from today update ( just hope it will come true soon)

I think wait karna waste nahi gyaa .

It worth.

Just waiting for next pls jyada late mat karrna

Awesome ! ( just one word to whole update. Im surprise that every time I found there is new aspect in ur ff)

Hey mansi,

Sorry for late comment.

So much workload ,shayad kaamdev kuch jyada khush the.

" sabar ka phal meetha hota hai " ye jisne bhi kaha hai ye baat tumhara update padhke 100% sach lagti hai.

What an update ! I think u r Just excellent writer.

The way whole unfold drama u wrote it was just awesum.

I think vivek is disgusting he is selfish person.

I just hope now ridz will not blame to ami for all this.

Ami is just perfect husband. (just hope ridz will realize it soon)

" No, I think I'm the lucky one to get him "- mindblowing dialogue from today update ( just hope it will come true soon)

I think wait karna waste nahi gyaa .

It worth.

Just waiting for next pls jyada late mat karrna

Awesome ! ( just one word to whole update. Im surprise that every time I found there is new aspect in ur ff)

😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

bye

Take care

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey mansi ,

galti se coment jyada paste ho gye

woh main word main type karke phir paste karti hoon na.

isliye wo thodi galti ho gay

sooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry,

i hope u understand.😔

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part di
congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 15 years ago
The covert operation and the concealed factor of the ff almost on the verge of exploding the protagonists' lives....sigh! the whole part was wonderfully penned.....each line given a thought...the best thing being u r probably the 1st writer on ff to acknowledge vivek as a sumwat good character, nt many have the courage to do so...lol i might as well say i don't despise him he's just putting up a fight, but then any weed or interruption in AR's story is a subject of hatred! Armaan- go guy! the right decision he tuk bck then....of marrying her, poor soul cud never confess either fr himself or his sudden devilish demeanor but the guy cud have resisted with the first kiss...but then he had to prove he was the menacing creature fr her to trust his intentions...we r coming to a full circle nw which makes me both nostalgic and extra epinephrine-charged! Good, to know this riddhima, unlike the real one from 2010 isn't as dumb lol! Now that the confusions behind his sudden urge to marry her clear away, there's hope for reconciliton...to the level of intimacy they shared just a few months bck bfr marriage bck wen riddhima's memory hadn't strted pointing out flaws in armaan, the guy, finally, hopes for what he deserves! Moreover, I like this ruthlessly virtuous guy Rohan, personally I love Rockefeller nd hence, the Rohan guy might be shrewd but suave! The way I see it riddhima will take sum tym to open up nd let it all out nd then take another era or so to go bck to nrmal...bck to falling in love with her husband! HUSBAND MAKES ARMAAN LOOK OLD ROFL!
The imagery was at it's best nd well poor Cathy being deceived by her knight in shining armor-Gabe, although, stands a chance!....well u didn't explain or throw light on the fact if Cathy was aware of the game he was playing, nt being the propreitor of the DNA found in her daughter's cells!The face whether cathy knew it all along abt the image of a very generous Vivek was all but to keep the act of passion behind the covers fr both herself nd vivek...I was wondring if Armaan heard all the good things riddhima had to say for her cuz his reactions to her defend-armaan-mood were not explicitly shown! Although, we can w8 for the tremors yet! lets c what future holds for the clique of - love-each-other-but-won't-confess/ the Triple alliance lol!9 triangle sounds too common let's say the 3 sided parallelogram!)
thnx for the pm...was a nice rollercoaster ride through the sea of emotions, perseverance (armaan) nd the truth unfolding before the gr8 girl's eyes! hope wen they return...they go bck as friends-knit-together....Love, nd don't u dare stop updating nw...nd don't u dare give us dates! Buh-bye!
Edited by repercussion - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mansi ji aap next update kab karengi
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Posted: 15 years ago
congratx for this new thread...... ⭐️ ⭐️ luved the way u xpressed everythin...transition ov characters... emotions everythin was so well written ... 👏 this was the best part evr 👏 gr8 job gal 👏 👏 👏 now w8in for TRUE AR UNIOIN 😆 😆 THANKX FOR THE PM [:D/]
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Posted: 15 years ago
congrats 4 the new thread
love this ff
cant wait 4 the next update
con soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: namita18

hiiiiiii mansi diiii... hii sweetheart

first of all,...i m really sorry.. becoz we guys troubled u a lot in last few days for update but kya karen.. it was most awaited part after all..and iske liye to we all can do anything dat time😆 oh i can see what you people can do 😉 but you see the reason behind making a new thread was that there were so many pages already filled that rest would have taken for the replies and soon there would have been another thread, so i thought to avoid any confusion make a new thread and no need to say sorry had i been angry wid you guys i would have told you so.. trust me i can... but everything is forgiven for my loved ones and u r one of them...😃 and about d part it was just amazing...thanks sweety glad u like it

i was really speechless after reading d part....and actually dat night, i don't know wen i slept while waiting for part...just 5-10 min before u updated...and first thing in d morning , i did was reading ur part...and after reading i was in d imagination of ur parts for some hour and it was really fantastic part yaar,, i never thing dat.. vivek will be married and go such an extent for money.....i hate vivek....every body hates him dear but you see he is not all black just too much of dark gray. he was wrong in some areas and those were crucial but the end was fine after all we would never fear anyone with ridhhima except armaan can we ??

the meeting moment of vivek and ridhima was superb...and thank god she finally saw true face of vivek...which i doubt in d beginning dat she will behave like dis... but i just love her faith in armaan.... she really deserve him...yupp see the changes in the coming parts there would be a complete surprise for you all

and i was soo sad for ridhima..becoz i don't know how will she take dis betrayal.she has done so much for vivekk.but he is such a ass... totally agree with you, he lost the most precious thing he could ever ask for

i hope armaan will handle her..
and most importantly our hero of d part was armaan⭐️ i just love him.he love her a lot.His plan to save ridhima from getting hurt by vivek was really amazing..he has done so much to see her happy..he has suffered her hatered for him just to save her by getting hurt by vivek.....muahhh for him.... yes you are right here too he is a man of action rather than words , moreover the situations didnt let him spill out what he felt and the truth as well but now that the things are clear enough you will se many things happening,,

and i was kinda worried,if she misunderstood armaan also,as vivek has told her about armaan ....
pls now don't create any misunderstanding between dem...he deserve to be loved by her so pls give him his love.. he has suffered a lot for her happiness.... dont worry you will be very happy in coming parts and surprised too by now you must be aware that i am not in a habit of doing things easy way so there is a surprise too just wait and watch cant disclose it now 😆 😉
pls make her realize her love for armaan soon and i know armaan will handle her in dis bad phase of her life.. yes dear dont worry lot more to come now that one mystery is cleared we have another to take care of... armaan's nightmares...
and thank you so muchhhhhhhh for dis great part muahhh for u ...😉😉
and now i really don't need any pm for ur part becoz main pehle hi padh leti hun...😆 thanks for d pm

thank you soo much dear i really appreciate your love and muah to u too

luv u me too
tc




Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

that was awesome

thank god u updated
dont worry u made it all up with the good part
cant wait to see AR scenes now
con soon



hey dear thanks for the comment... it was a very important one and thats why it took so long and yes also add my laziness to this factor... but so happy that you liked it... you are going to see lot of AR now but hey when did i deprive you of AR except in some ?? dont worry i'm desperately trying to save myself from morcha gang and update soon 😆

Edited by mansibharti - 15 years ago

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