Kitani Mohabbat Hai (AR & AA & SG) last part@Pg138 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Loved the charactersktch cont. soon



thnkxx... yeah sure!! 😊 wid a sweet smile
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome

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thnks! add me in ur friendss aise main tume pm kar loungi!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeah sure but i don't know kaise so can u add me in ur friend!!
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Originally posted by: ammykhan

nice cs

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thnkxx!!! yeah sure but can u add me in ur friend
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome cs
loved it
cont it soon
n add me to ur pm list
thx
dhruvika
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Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

awesome cs

loved it
cont it soon
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thx
dhruvika



thnkx for ur comments and yeah don't worry main pm tume zarur karoungi!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part1:

(raat ka waqat: 10:00) Gunjan beth kar book phar rahi hoti hai apne room mein koi uski ankhon pe haat rakhta hai

Gunjan: samrat!! tum itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe ho?
samrat (haat hata tha hai): tum kaise mujhe pehchaan jati ho
Gunjan: main tume chahti houn aur jab bhi tum mere paas hote ho to mujhe alag sa mehsus hone laghta hai
Samrat: main tumare liye phool le kar aya houn aur woh bhi tumare favourite color ke, pink!!
Gunjan: thank you hamesha tum kuch na kuch dete ho aur meine tume kabhi kuch nahi diya
Samrat: to isme sad hone wali kaunsi baat hai?
Gunjan: dekho tum mujhe roz kuch na kuch dete ho to mera bhi
to haq banta hai na tum jo mango ke main tume doungi
Samrat: to thik hai phir jo main mangun ka tume woh dena parega, promise karo?
Gunjan (with a sweet smile): i promise!!
Samrat: ok, main chalta houn
Gunjan: samrat main tume batana bhul gayee pichla darwasa bahir se hi khulta hai andher se koi probleme hogayee hai
Samrat: agle darwase se gaya to uncle sawal puchne laghe ge
aur balcony se gaya to hamesha ke liye upher chala jaounga
Gunjan: balcony se jane ki zarurat nahi hai aab chup chap agle darwase se jao papa kuch kahe to tum keh dena main gunjan se notes lene aya tha

Samrat niche jata hai to gunjan ke papa amit samrat ko dekhte huwe usse puchte hai
Amit: bethe tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Samrat: woh main gunjan se notes lene aya tha
Amit: itni raat ko chalo aagaye ho to kuch khaa phii lo
Samrat: nahi uncle woh notes copy karne hai to time chahiye
Amit: acha thik hai, waise samrat ek baat batao tum kab aye meine to nahi dekha
Samrat "think: aab kya boloun!! yaar samrat tu to kissi bhi prob ka solution dhund sakhta hai aur yeh to chotti si hai": uncle tab shayad aab bathroom mein the!!
Amit: oh han han abhi todhi dher pehle main gaya tha
Samrat: thank you uncle "bathroom jane ke liye"
Amit: kiske liye???
Samrat: notes!! notes ke liye...

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Next day (subhe ka waqat hota hai: 9:00)
shopping mall ke samne ek car rukhti hai usme se ek ladki nikal thi hai
Ladki: driver, tum jao main wapiss apni friend ke saat aoungi
Driver: ji ridhima mam
Ridhima: aur han suno mujhe ate huwe dher hojayegi tum mini ko school se le ana
Driver: thik hai mam

ridhima shop ke andher jaati hai apne friends ko hello bolti hai phir ek kabron ki dukaan mein jaati hai
Sania (ridhima ki friend): ridhima yeh dress kaise rahe gi
Ridhima: han achi hai tume pasand hai to lelo
Sania: main apne liye nahi tumare liye baat kar rahi houn shaam ko anisa ki birthday hai tum nahi jaa rahi kiya?
Ridhima: jaa rahi houn lekin kabre to mere paas bohot hai
Sania: wahan pe bohot handsome boys hoge ache se kabre pehen lo ho sakhta hai iss party mein tume koi mil jaye
Ridhima: oh to yeh baat hai!!
Sania: haan yehi baat hai meine to saree li hai pehene ke liye
Ridhima: saree kyon???
Sania: mom bol rahi thi ke aaj kal ke ladkon ko aise wife chahiye hoti hai jo san... kiya kehte hai?
Ridhima: pehle tum bolna sikhlo phir sanskaari banna!!
Sania: haan yehi sanskaari!!! (dono hasne laghti hai)

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todhi dher baad (10:00)

college mein kuch ladke hote hai ek dosre se baat kar rahe hote hai
Ladka: yaar arjun bohot din se tumne koi bet nahi laghayee
Arjun: kaisi bet mere yaar??
Ladka: simple jo bhi gate se pehli ladki ayegi tume use pathana hoga aur uske
saat koi ek mahina to natak karna hoga pyar ka
Arjun: to har baar ki tarah arjun hi jeetega!!

ek ladki andher aati hai arjun uske paas jata hai aur kehta hai
Arjun: hi, tum neyi ho is college mein??
Ladki: haan aaj pehli baar ayee houn
Arjun: main arjun houn aur tum ??
Ladki: arohi! Arohi Sharma shimla se!!
Arjun: nice to meet you, tume coffee to pasand hai na?
Arohi: haan pasand hai!!
Arjun: to phir ek hojaye i hope you don't mind
Arohi: nahi isme mind karni ki kiya baat hai
Arjun: to phir chale!!
Arohi: haan chalo!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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good one
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
nice
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
wow!! Arjun Punj' character sketch...! awesome...:)
keep it up...!

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