MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30)

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Hey this SS is great, just caught up on last 3 parts, can't wait to read next part, update soon. :)

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Hey just read all 3 parts and all were superbly amazing!!!!!!!
Pm me! want to read more update soon.....

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

hey! sorry for not being able to comment on 2nd part.....i actually loved the 2nd part whole heartedly.....i just now read that one! it was really very beautiful....awesome type....and i loved what rati said......besides arjun had already forgiven him......

i loved when Arjun asked Mayank for forgiveness......this is really the best thing......i loved the mom son convo....it looked heavenly......oh man! i too love arjun, mayank and alekh.....i love three of them.....i loved when arjun said that mayank was more handsome than him.....i really enjoyed this dinner......beautiful update......

do continue soon plz......

p.s- plz whenever u pm me, do keep this name as the subject.....cause then i mix it up with my other unread pms......and i don't want to do that.....so do pm me with the name "plz forgive me".....its a kind request......

love,
Mahak

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Updated my comment on pg 10

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

r u updating now????

coz i wanna be first!!!

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

All three parts were fab

Liked that Arjun cared for him so much but itna Gussa Same as Mayu

Liked that he went to Rati n spoke to her

Rati was really sweet n adorable

The gals washroom line was jus too good

Liked that Arjun was working on forgiving His father

Hop Evn Nups do that but its not that easy i feel

It was fab wen Arjun was getting jealous of Alekh due to Rati n his Mum'

Love all three parts

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
r u updating now????

coz i wanna be first!!!

not now sweety.. i still have to write the chapter.. i wrote that OS na .. so its going to take a little time.. Sorry...
But whenever i update ill see to it that you are online when i update. ill send you the pm first. i promise...