MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30)

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

Wow!!!
A perfect treat for ending this story so fast....!!
Very beautiful Epilogue...
Mayur are still the same!!!
And Arjun-Rati were just marvellous...
Loved Mayank's mischief @ the end....
Awesome....!!!
You write soooo welll....
PLS PLS keep writing more..... Would luv to read your works....!!!

- Pooja

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abb01

@abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

This is was an amazing epilogue Akansha

I just loved it

Main shocked hu ki Tumhare ideas kaha se aate hai ,they are simply superb.

They are plain simple yet touching

I mean i do not find a comment for ur FF's Sweety.

IT is really too good ,

Trust me i was sad for end but now feeling truely happy ki tumane ise continue kiya aur wo bhi itne achhe se ki kya kahu??

I am really happy for this part and more than that hats off to you Dear

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

ARJUN i love him yr!!!❤️❤️
not the bijlani one i m talking abt right now but this sweet mayank-ish arjun in this part. who actually read romantic novels to plan perfect proposal for HIS girl. but most of i loved his out-of-blue proposal.❤️
wat a heavenly kiss!! ahem ahem... point to be noted-kitchen is not at all bad place for romance 😉 specially when ur parents are sitting just outside and u are kissing ur girl shamelessly... 🤣

just give me a tight jhappi for this arti dedicated part!❤️
i so loved it to bits... which i actually mean to every word and every dialogs, even the scenes without dialogs... i liked the latter more 😉 u know ..... crazy soulsis!!

i bet u must have been rolling on floor while writing arti fights! it was so humorous and chweet!!!

love u my sweetest sweetheart...❤️
mwaah...❤️
mwaah...❤️
mwaah...❤️
mwaah...❤️
❤️
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@Mrina-PMs

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Posted: 15 years ago

#234

Fabulous Akansha...

Loved it to bits yaar...

Truly amazing epilogue..

The bond between MayUr and ArTi was PERFECT!

Do write more SS like this one and without mentioning! I'm already in ur PM list so do PM all updates!

Love ya loads

Mina

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Divya

@myownarea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

Beautiful one akansha 😍
It had that heart-warming feel to it :)
aaaah 20 year old Arjun n Rati ..are so adorable and they maintained that friendship along with their subtle romance ...just lovely!! :)
@Nupur's reaction, I realised this a while back..when we do forget and forgive...somethings still stay at the back of our minds..but its not bad and mostly can be easily ignored but some marks r so permanent that, though we forget its still there somewhere deep down....glad MN are happy together...cos love can heal:D (What am i blabbering 🤣 )

ignore me, i just want to say it was awesome :) :) :)

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

Hey Akansha...

this was a very pleasant surprise.. i didn't know u were writing an epilogue.. 😳

it was lovely... so happy Mayur are so happy together and Arjun-Rati are so cute... so nice that they maintained their friendship too.. they are exactly like Mayur... Arjun like his dad knows exactly how to manao his girl.. so cute.. 😆 Liked the way Arjun confessed his love too... first to Rati and then to his parents.. sudden but sweet all the same..

And lol at ArTi in the kitchen... Arjub the hypocrite... now his parents will have to make audible noises to let them know they are coming coz Arjun forgets the kitchen isn't his bedroom.. 😛😆

Enjoyed a lot.. thanks.. 😃

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#237

whoa...arjun n rati r together!!!!!...dats seriously some great news...luved it akansha...arjun proposing to rati in an arjun-ish way was supercute.....luved d entire thing....😃