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I am really sorry for late reply

wow Gunajan and mayank are superb

aknsha
lovley update
i love it
mayu and sammy is so sweet
per yaar poor ar tum ne dono ke he old ker diya lovley update

or ha muje pm jaror ker den ok next part

@ Mahima..
Thanx a ton dear.
I am glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Akansha
congo for starting a new ff
Nice Cs
and Awesome part 1
so arman- and ridhz r mom -dad of nups. lol😆
loved the CS
and about ur first part- it was very good
maynk and party- wah wah
and he is flirty too(ye tou true copy of arman)
loved sayank convo and their bonding.
goonji was also very good.
and the beach scene was so nice.
]the girl was our nupsi-right.
lovely part.
keep it up.
add me to ur pm list
(anything u write on mayur pls count me)

thanx dear

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva

hey aki...
gr89 start
gr8 speed ;)

jio jio mere laal!!

keep writing like this

love ya loads<3

Was it Gr8 speed??.. Ohk i'll take care in future😉
Thanx buddy!!!

Originally posted by: Tapoor

nice starting
loved it
keya wo ladki nups hai?
do cont soon

thanx for commenting dear

Originally posted by: maloo19

very very interesting plz cont

thanx😊

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice one
continue soon
& plzz make index also



love
Riddss

thanx. yeah ill make the index

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

on the concept:

awesome concept dear

its too god

waiting to read more

love pebbzzyyy

Thanx pebo.. glad you liked it..
AR are old, But ROMANCE is ageless.. Right?
neways, they are not much important in what ive thought about the story..(Frankly, have not thought much.. as whatever i write, turns out to be the exact opposite of whatever i think)

And AA.. umm ill try to add some scene of theirs..😊