#5Kya Pyar Aisa Bi Ho Skta Hai??(AR)note-153

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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

Ada'ab,

ok finally you updated and finally i commented,

sooo the part was good at the biggning but soon it becomes a sady one,

well defined and scripted,

how Armaan can think negatively about Riddhima for those stupid images,

i seriously wanted this track to be in detailed coz k jab koi cheez hoi hai tou usse purre tareeke se khatam kia jayye kyun k ye issue real life ka hai,

aek galat fehmi se dunya badal jaati hai log becharh jate hain,

ab tumhari FF mein dono (AR) k point of veiw melinge aur discussion hoga isse buhat logoon ka bhala hoga,

soch mein positiveness ayegi tou pl take your time ,

ab tou exams hain lekin after exams update jaldi dena ,

"DUKKHI DILON KI DUAEIN LO"

don't worry EXAMS mein ache numbers se pass hogi,

with love,

take care.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#262

Very nice update.. Loved the moments between AR. I never really imagined situations to be like this. Hope everything settles down nicely soon.

All the best for your exams..

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saloni

@angelina_2005

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#263

hey loved d part ankita :)

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komal

@scarlet.moon

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Hello Ankita 🤗
Just caught up with you ff....
Simply loved it....
great concepts and all the parts are nicely written.....
It took be about 3 days to read the ff.....
Each and every scene is nicely detailed and written...
all the AR movements and their love greatly described and written.....
Continue soon plz....
add me to ur pm list.....
take care....
Komal 😃

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karans_angel

@karans_angel

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#265

read all d parts.....its awesomeeeeeeeeeee.....

AR love each other soooo much....lil upset coz of their misunderstanding...

plsss unite them soooon......

update superrrrrrrrrrr sooooooon......do pm me....😃

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bueaty

@bueaty

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

loved the part and ar moments. plz ye track JALDI FINISH KAREN i cnt see them in soo mch pain... and yeah i didnt recieved the pm fr this update 😭 😳

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Kyun Zindagi Ki Raah Mein Majboor Ho Gaye
Itne Huye Kareeb Ke Hum Door Ho Gaye

Excellent...Very moving, and very well-written yet that was so freaking sad .....
numbness could be expected in someone so young who experienced such difficulties in life.. my poor AR 😭 nd my poor baby shonu

Hum Jise Gunguna Nahin Sakte...Waqt Ne Aisa Geet Kyun Gaaya

The way you have developed everything n the way you write is soo awesome ..
The feeling is different yet known in these sadder updates...they seem to compare emotions so much better than the happier..
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dont know wht else to say....
jussssstttt 🤗let my emotions speak coz I feel like you got all the emotions for each person out..
Very detailed and real.. I am amazed at the depth and introspection offered.

Keep it up....😊

ps: Dont let anyones flames(coz of this track) discourage you...If they are knowledgable pieces of criticism then be thankful for people attempting to help you... this does not mean you have to listen to them ..I really like how you are going about it with this ff and I don't think you need flames at all.. but always consider where they are coming from.😊😊

LOVE YOU Ammi🤗
urs Nehu...