Sajan - Jaane - Epilogue Pg96 (06-26-11) - No PM - Page 62

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox

Res!😳


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Me first again...🥳 Gosh, this one was truly romantic..☺️ Not much to say! But it was awesome and perfectly executed!👏 I loved it...😳 I did not even give you a chance to PM!😆 And I don't think I need to call Daya or Fredex..🤣 I just need to call the CVs😉 to have a look how perfectly one can write!😳 Awesome Miketa!👏

Please Continue Soon and Read my Update if you have time!😳 I will love to see your feedback..😃
Best Wishes. Nivriti❤️



I've thought we'll need CID, but maybe next time...
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank you so much
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ambika..

awesome...

perfect yaar..



Wow... its getting closer to the end.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

AAAhhh!!!

its like a fabulousss update!
grrr888! i mean i really enjoyed reading thsi one!
i would say at last sajan scenes! loads in ur ff! warna peechle baar kaam that! :P
well sweet nice update!
at reminded me of MJHT Sajan while they were also enjoying the same song in the rain! similar incidents! and yeah one of my fav songs too!
now i am waiting for the next part ! waiting to know wats next in schedule and some mysterious that have to be opened by you!
all in all a gr8 update!
its like reallly awesome!
continue soon! :)
btw i didnt recieve the pm for the latest chapter :(
no probs i read it ! :)
keep rocking!
continue soon



Was it enough aur you need more Sajan... Anyways thanks for the replies.. I'm shedding tears...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kins103

awesome update

waiting for next update



Thank you so much...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety88

mindblowing update...awww sajan finally became one...poor isha was scared of rohan...cont soon



Yes, they have became one now par I know Isha its painful but Rohan...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saduf

awesome updates...lovely and romantic



Thank you so much...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow tht was so cool and romantic parts 30 & 31



Was it outstanding or not? See I am not the best in writing those type of scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Friends... this is the second last part of this fiction.

Part 32
Reality of Truth

Samrat drop Gunjan home on his way to college...

Gunjan enter the elevator, but suddenly feels as if some one is following her. Quickly when the elevator came to halt she rushed inside her apartment.

Gunjan with shaky hands pick up glass of water, but drop the glass in fear when she felt someone touching her her shoulder.

-Scene Change-

Armaan doesn't miss a chance to fallow Riddhima around Sanjeevani. Riddhima feel totally embarrass by Armaan's craziness.

Sister Lovely doesn't loose a moment teasing Riddhima along with her friends. When she notice the quietness in her cousin sister's face.

Riddhima excuse herself.

-Scene Change-

Rohan complete his duty and sit on the terrace of Sanjeevani thinking over his cruel behaviour towards Isha who's dream he shattered last night.

Rohan feel someone tapping his shoulder...

He look behind him and found Armaan smiling at him.

Rohan gave him weak smile afterwards his smile switch to frown when Riddhima slap him. Rohan hold his left cheek.

Armaan: Basket!

Riddhima: Armaan stay out of this! Its between me and my dearest Juju.

Armaan: Par

Rohan: Nahiin Armaan! Riddhima Bhabhi is right. Its between me and her and I deserve this slap. In fact I deserve more.

Rohan take Riddhima's hand and make her slap him crazy.

Armaan: What's wrong dude?

Rohan break down "I want to move on but the guilt inside me is killing me" Riddhima and Armaan stood shock while Isha had tears streaming down her face.

Armaan: What do you mean? Rohan your quietness is scarring me to death? Say something?

Rohan: I've never thought one truth of the past can shatter the person inside me. What I did last night with Isha was wrong, but I was dying in the grief of loosing my child.

Trio stood shock...

Rohan: Haan Armaan! Mayank's cousin sister Pratigya and Shuniya Bhabhi's younger sister meant the world to me. We were getting engaged with one another when Pratigya came home married to some guy name Krishna Singh. I vowed i'll never see her face again. For my sake Shuniya Bhabhi broke every ties with her sister for me. Afterwards I never saw or thought about her until last to nights ago. I don't know something was killing me inside when I decide to talk with Mayank. I never thought I would discover to cruel truth about the past and why Pratigya left me.

Riddhima wanted to question Rohan but Armaan stop her "let him finish what's locked inside his heart" he whisper in her ears.

Rohan stood up and walk toward Isha "Isha if I knew the truth before you entered in my life than I would have never dare to fallow in love again. But you brought happiness in my life and I'll always love you but you need to know what happen to Pratigya and my child if I didn't overheard Mayank sharing his grief to Niru " Rohan holds Isha's hand in his hand "Pratigya was rapped by the same person who destroyed my Shona's life. Because of that incident my child lost died" Rohan fall down holding Isha's hand "please forgive me. I love you so much" Isha hugged Rohan tightly.

Armaan smiled and hugs Riddhima who was also crying. Afterwards they all hugged each other in one huge group.

-Scene Change-

Mayank and Nupur submit their assignments before taking leave for their vacation. Mayank hold Nupur's hand while walking back home.

Nupur: Mayank before going home can we

Mayank notice the hesitation in Nupur's voice "why are you hesitating? I miss my wild cat who loved to argue with me" Nupur playfully smack Mayank on the shoulder.

Mayank: Alright I give up. Now what were you saying before going home where would you like to go?

Nupur: I was thinking can we go and meet Gunjan. I wanna ask forgiveness for behaving cruel with her when she was only trying to help me.

Mayank nod his head and wave his hand for taxi.

-Scene Change-

Samrat submit his and Gunjan's leave papers forever. Principal began to get tears but understand that its time to let go of his students.

Principal: I wish you and Gunjan both happy married life.

Samrat bend down and touch his principal's feet before answering his cell.

Samrat: Haan Mayank...

Mayank narrate something to Samrat in mute mode afterwards Samrat speed away in fear of loosing something.

-Scene Change-

Armaan stays for night duty while Rohan take Riddhima and Isha home... Riddhima doesn't want to stay at Isha's place par she can't say "no" to Isha.

Samrat arrives home and saw his flat totally shattered.. everything was destroyed and Gunjan was no where to be seen only trail of blood stain left behind.

Samrat bang his fist on the shattered glass...

Mayank and Nupur tries to comfort Samrat but Samrat's eyes where burning with anger. Mayank was afraid so he quickly text message Rohan and Armaan.

Within a second Rohan and Armaan rush to Samrat's house with their wife (before Rohan leave with Isha and Riddhima... his cell vibrate along with Armaan in their locker. Armaan check his phone and Rohan done the same afterwards they rush into Armaan's car) Isha and Riddhima shock to see trail of blood on the floor and everything broken into pieces.

-Scene Change-

Dark and dusty place is shown where you see two people thrown inside a room. Slowly one of them gain conscious and gasp in horror.

With much difficultly she gets up and walks toward the person afterwards take her in her lap "bhabhi" cries the person. Trying to wake up her sister-in-law "Gunjan bhabhi" finally Gunjan slowly gain conscious and hugs the person "Suhaani"

-Scene Change-

Police force come to Samrat's flat and investigate the crime spot. Officer Amit question Mayank and his wife...

Mayank: I was paying the auto driver when I heard my wife scream.. afterwards when I enter the flat I saw everything shattered and my wife notice the trails of blood.

Nupur: Yes afterwards we called Samrat and he came here.

Officer Veer came and whisper in Amit's ear "alright than we'll start our own set of investigation and if you guys find any short of clues than please calls us" Mayank and Rohan nod their head.

-Scene Change-

Suhaani and Gunjan gasp in horror when two people came inside the room and rough pulls them up and blindfolds them.

Afterwards rough pulls them and throws them on the ground... after some moment they can hear foot step of someone. Suhaani and Gunjan hold onto each other.

Blindfolds are untied... Suhaani and Gunjan hug each other...

Gunjan: Kaun ho tum? Why are you doing this?

Suhaani: Bhabhi

Voice shout from behind "You wanna know who I am? You already know me Gunjan Beta" Gunjan's eyes wide up in shock.

Gunjan whisper "Ravi Uncle" Suhaani holds onto Gunjan tighter...

Ravi: Haan main... because of you my daughter shut herself away from me. Aur Samrat who I welcomed with open arms destroyed my daughter's life.

Gunjan: Par what's my fault if Samrat and I love each other Uncle.. aur Suhaani

One of the thug tries to pull Suhaani from Gunjan, but Gunjan holds onto her tightly "I said bring her towards me" Ravi shouts.

Suhaani: Bhabhi.. hold onto me

Gunjan: Nahiin Uncle... do whatever you want with me but not with meri Suhaani

Ravi grab Gunjan by her hair "tumhari Suhaani" he throws her "ouch" Gunjan scream when glass cuts into her skin "hurts right! That's how I felt when Samrat married you, but now I don't care because soon you'll say good night to this world" Ravi turns toward Suhaani "aur tum" he grabs Suhaani roughly by her hair "don't you remember how I destroyed your childhood by splitting your family up" Suhaani's eyes wide up in shock "oh please! Don't look at me with those big eyes?" He throws Suhaani toward the broken glass but Gunjan caught her "I never knew that you could be such jerk" Ravi slap Gunjan "your whatever action take place will be harmful for your pati and jeetha (older brother-in-law)"

Suhaani begs "please don't harmful Samrat Bhai and my older bro Armaan" Gunjan totally shock to know that Samrat and Armaan are siblings.

Ravi: I just love it

Ravi laughs and explain his men in mute version what to do with Gunjan and Suhaani.



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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...ravi is sooo evil never expected him to be like this..wow samrat armaan and suhaani are siblings...i cant believe this is the second to last update...cont soon

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