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SoniRita

@SoniRita

Viewbie

+ 60

Posted: 15 years ago

#271

Wow dis ff is jst awesome wid superb concept haha 1st part was so funny sayank were so funny hahaha n how cuteeee sajan in train loved it so so much n haha mayur nups daiy rupees one lol n omg dat diay ruppes one reminded me of mohobattein where dis same happened lol anyways awesome concept awesome updates jst loved it

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sush

@sushups

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#272

muah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love u dear for this update
dil khush kar diya
par bahut galat jagah roka woh bhi sajan time par not fair
haye re ab kya hoga gunjan toh akeli hai
but i know samrat phirse hero wali entry marega
plzzz intezaar mat karwana
love u guys

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493009

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#273

mindblowing update jaan👏👏👏

plz continue asap😊

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#274

Hey! Awesome dear!!luvvd it! But just one think...in CJ's dialogue- samrat quran band karo....sumthing of the sort.....pls change tht...i mean samrat quran...i find it..i dunno ....its not right.
abt the rest of the chap...well RV ki to dhulaye hogi....coz the gang on one side n sammy on the other *cackles madly in laughter*

i loved mayur scene, the one where he is holding nup's magz n bangles ROFL!! tht was too good!

SAJAN scenes were fab!

also i loved CJ by god! she's too good :D:D

continue soon!!!

waiting for ur next update!

thnx for the pm

luv

ZeeJay!

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cuteangelgirl95

@cuteangelgirl95

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#275

awesome update
loved it
cnt wait till u update
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#276

omg

sanu n dolly i'm just loving ur updates

kya likhte ho yaar

fida hogayi

thanx 4 d pm

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#277

oh my god in such a short time itna sare replies aa gaye by god we r sooooooooo happyyyyyyyyyyyy

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ramramramram

@ramramramram

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#278

Oksay from the beginning

Firstly it was such a cute update,

Liked how dia said sorry and shouted at the ticket checker for Benji 😲

MaYur were just hilarious with nupur sneezing and Mayank's dream,

And s usuall saJan the cutiepies.

But it was Funny to see all the couples fighting but SaJan were sooo sweet

Countinue soon

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#279

Hey guys,
That was wonderfull,
I have read it first time and really it was just fabolous,
All parts are just so nice
Plz continue very soon
And big thanx for doing pm