~Until The End~ 'AR' - Chapter 20 ( Pg. 92 )

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shireen sukhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Adaab,

this part was great,

love how Armaan comforting Riddhima,

love AR scenes,

with love,tc.

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swetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#152

wow great update,still waiting for the party and absolutely loved the KaSh line,if problems are ur best friend,i am their worst enemy
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

@ Nidha

Awhh it used to be so cuute when Armaan was jealous of Rahul! I'm glad I reminded you of KaSh, and looove the KaSh eyelock <3 Thanks so much

@ ARMAANKSGFAN

Your welcome! Of course, AR chemistry makes you go crazy 😳 Keep reading and commenting ^-^

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Heyaaa, first of all, long time no see! xD Your comment really made me smile!! Thanks so much hun! I really hope the next part will be as good or even better than the last part. Keep reading and commenting !! <3 <3 <3 *hugs*

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Yep, there is a secret to it which will be revealed soon-ish. Till then keep reading and commenting =3

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Awhh thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you liked it, I'll try my best to upload it soon.

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Yay you finally commented! *party time* 😆 No, Riddhima is not older than Armaan, in the character sketch I've written their ages in brackets =] Thannnnks so much for the first comment, keep reading ^-^

@ anumeha_rajat

Firstly, what can I call you ? I'm glad you read my story and found it good. Makes me sooo happy! I'll continue soonish when I get time to write, right now I have a test tomorrow, so no time :(
Thanks for the comment!

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Wow, all in one go? Amazing 👏 Who doesn't love Armaan ^-^ Sanskar, Hmmm we'll see that later! I'll PM you, no problem! Thanks for commenting and reading hun.

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Awhh thanks for your comment, I was looking forward to it! Haha yes Armaan is falling, but keep reading to know what happens next D: !

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The adaab made me laugh for some reason =3 Very unexpected hehe! But thanks so much for commenting and reading, and yes the way Armaan comforted Riddhima ... Ahh <3 <3

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shireen sukhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Hi Wish,

Thanks for respousing me.

YOUR update waqai main buhat buhat achhi hey,,,,, thanks kahien tu AR togather naazer aye just for a moment hi sahi .

yeh nice move , I like it .

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with love

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Hey Hina
Great update,short one but's its OK 😊
Riddhima hallucinates in the dark?
Anyways thanks for the PM
Take care.....

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

awesome update

loved every bit

con soon

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@debby_11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

fantastic update
good to see armaan jealous
and also thinking about her :P
lovely part
update soon
thanks 4 d pm

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Aesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

hi itzz really gd i cn jus imagin it gna keep readin....

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~ Chapter Eleven ~

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Hmm!! Not much to say about this one, just go on read it and be sure to give your feedback. =]

Here's Chapter Eleven!

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" Armaan, finally you're here." Sanskar sighed.

" Uhm..Yes, so what do I do now?" He replied looking around the huge park.

" Well, I want you to help me with the Halloween Maze. I'm very sure that you know how it works and all right?"

" Yes sir.. No one could be better than me in that game!"

" I see. Anyway, here's the map, I want you to set it up this way. Do you know the rules?"

" Of course! At night, students can challenge themselves to find the right way out of the map. They have to come in and find their way, while all of the helpers will be dressed up into ghosts and things like that to scare them. They'll have to pass through all the obstacles, CRAZY obstacles to win. But sir, what does the winner gets?"

" I'll decide that later, usually winners are rare yeah? The traps are so scary that eventually students give up!"

" Do the students have to go through the map individually?.. I mean if there's someone who keeps hanging on to his/her friends, then what do I do? That will be no fun!"

" Of course, but do it in a clever way Armaan. Let them come in as a group, as they go on, there will be different ways to choose from. If they still go together as a group, I'm sure the horribly dressed 'ghosts' can help us!" he grinned slyly.

" Awesome! Now let's get started. Oh wait, sir can I ask my band to help me with the maze. Come on don't say no.. They will do a great job scaring the students!"

" Haha, sure, but remember. Don't cross your limits OK ?"

" I won't sir.

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Armaan called his band to help him out. Suddenly, he thought about what happened between him and Riddhima. He decided that he should tell them.

" Guys... I have a really important thing I want to tell you all..."

" What is it now Armaan??" Rahul moaned.

" That teacher Ms.Gupta and I, we uh... " Armaan was trying to find the correct words to say, but somehow it was just too hard for him to speak.

" Just say it dude. Let it out!" Atul urged him.

Armaan went on, and told them the whole story. Just about everything that happened ; the way he was mad to see Sanskar and Riddhima ; the part when he just gave up, but then her voice made him vulnerable ; the way she fell into his arms again by an excuse ; the way the lights turned off and she used all the force she had to pull him close to her ; the part when he surrendered and reassured her... Everything. He didn't know if it was the right thing to do, but at that time all the new feelings haunted him deep inside. He really needed someone to share with his problems, to let out all his feelings.

" My my Armaan, did that SERIOUSLY happen? Or are you just making things up?" Rahul questioned.

" I'm like so serious here and so freaking confused. Did you REALLY thing I would make this crap up myself? URGH!" he groaned.

" Armaan, this was an amazing move dude! She's so falling in your trap! Why are you regretting over what happened. It made you just inches away from your destination yaar."

What?... The plan?? I totally forgot about that... But thanks for reminding me Rahul. Thanks for getting me back on track. Exactly! All this just made me closer to my goal. Why was I even confused or worried?

" Damn right! I had totally forgotten about that. Anyway, let's just get back to work and get rid of this topic for now."

" But Armaan.." Atul protested.

" No Atul, please don't bring it back up."

Armaan, why are you doing this to yourself... I know that you love her, it's clearly in your eyes, then why are you running away from the truth. Why are you trying to cover the truth by your lies. This is not right. What should I do? But Armaan won't even listen to me, his ego is too dear to him. I feel so sorry for Ms. Gupta, I just hope she doesn't fall for him or else...

Atul was still thinking about the situation, but he had no hope. He couldn't do anything about it because he doesn't have the right nor the power.

***

The afternoon was very busy and crowded. There were people everywhere, since it was an open party, people from all around the city had joined in the fun. The atmosphere couldn't have been better ; music ; dance ; drama ; fun ; excitement, everything was there.

Armaan had tried his best to look for Riddhima, but he couldn't find her. She is a teacher after all, and would be busy for the afternoon. He decided to wait for the night as he knew there would be fewer people and usually teachers are given a break at night, so that would be a perfect time.

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At night in the girls hostel room, Riddima, Muskaan and Sapna were getting ready. Sapna was dressed as an ancient girl from Egypt ; with a scary edge to it while Muskaan selected to be a girly and bold devil. However Riddhima on the other hand was objecting the dress which was selected for her. It was a nurse outfit with a slightly revealing touch to it.

Suddenly Anji gave a call to Riddhima.

Riddhima explained everything to her, about Rahul and about Armaan.

" Look Ridz I cannot talk about all these serious issues on the phone. I might be coming over to visit you in a week or so. Then we'll talk patiently OK ? Don't worry, I'm always here, if matters get worse, give me a call. Don't worry I won't tell mom about it."

" Thanks Di, you're so understanding. But what about the dress part?..."

" Just go for it and wear it for a change. Mom will never object Riddhima. And I'm sure even with such a dress, you won't forget your limits. It's just for ONE day Ridzi! Come on, even I've worn shorter clothes than that for parties. It's OK!! "

" No...How can I wear that? And the heels to it.. "

" Riddhima come on, enjoy yourself for once. And I'm sure you will have fun. Please? Look, your friends will feel bad if you refuse. At least for them agree? Please?"

" Okay fine Di, as you say so, I gotta go now, I'll call you later."

As soon as she cut the phone, there were laughters and screams in the room. Muskaan and Sapna were so happy that she agreed. They quickly helped her dress up and put on makeup for her.

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The three girls went almost everywhere to enjoy themselves and had a great time. There was only one place left to visit now - The park where Halloween Maze is in.

" Miss for this game, even we're scared, so just stay together. NO MATTER what happens keep holding on to one another. We have to win!" Muskaan whispered.

" Yes Miss, we're serious, HOLD on to one another and never let go."

" Uhh but?"

" NO BUTS" Both of them ordered.

Uff.. What's gonna happen now... I mean if they both are scared of this Maze then I'm so dead...

***

They stepped in the maze through a very big and rusty door which immediately closed after their first step. Riddhima had already started panting, but the girls were so supportive to her and always held her close and in between them. It wasn't completely dark, but there was always a dim light trying to show them creepy things on the wall, but none of them bothered, or had the courage to look at things on the wall.

Until now there was only one trail, so all of them could go pass the maze together. As they were heading, suddenly they felt water droplets on their heads. But when they looked at it closely, it was actually droplets of blood. This freaked them out but when they looked at the ceiling they saw a skull which was going to fall on them. They quickly ran front.

" Omg, if this was that scary why did we even come!!" Riddhima said childishly.

" FOR FUN of course, b..but this is even scarier than I thought!" Sapna managed to say.

" Come on don't stay in one place for so long, who knows what other things may come in?" Muskaan suggested.

They kept on walking and walking, while things disturbed them. However they stopped when they saw a staircase.

" WHAT? A staircase? This wasn't even there last year. Who made this whole map?!!" Sapna moved even closer to Riddhima.

" It's OK, just go on..." Muskaan encouraged.

They climbed up one stair at a time, when suddenly Muskaan saw a snake on the stair.

" AHHHHHHHHH AHHH OMG OMG OMG A SNAKE DAMNIT NO OMG OMG OMG"

" Shhhh! Muskaan it's fake! Relax.." Sapna said.

Riddhima was just too shocked and scared to even speak now. But this wasn't the worse part, when they reached to the top of the staircase, a door closed at the back of them so that they cannot escape.When they looked ahead of them, they saw three entrances of a cave.

" What now? .. How do we go in?" Sapna asked.

" What do you mean how... Let's all go through the same entrance..." Muskaan replied.

" Y...Yea... I think that's a good idea..." Riddhima agreed.

" Who will go first?" Sapna wondered...

" Me... And then after me, Riddhima...Lastly you OK?" Muskaan said.

Sapna simply nodded.

Muskaan was going through the cave while Riddhima and Sapna were trying to get in. But before they could, 2 figures immediately grabbed them from the back and forced them to go through a different entrance. Before Muskaan could go back, someone also pulled her forward.

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" MUSKAAN, SAPNA?!?!? Where are you?!?!" Riddhima tried screaming while still being dragged by someone.

" SAPNA!!! RIDDHIMA!!!!!" Muskaan tried, but failed to hear any voices.

" RIDDHIMA??!?! MUSKAAN?!?!? Where are you all!?!?!?" Sapna's attempt too was in vain.

Even though they were so close, they couldn't hear each other's voices, maybe the trap was set up in such a clever way, that they could have used sound-proof walls.

But that wasn't their first priority at the moment. All three girls were now with someone mysterious, all alone in different parts of the cave. What were they going to do now? How are they going to manage all alone in the maze? None of them had the slightest idea.

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Edited by .-Wish-. - 15 years ago

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Nidha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#160

woah Hina its really a cute update atul understand so well Armaan but now what is going to happen as Ridhima is alone and who is with her i wish it Armaan plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago

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