Kaisa Woh Pyaar Tha? : [Mayur] : Part 6 : Page 111 - Page 27

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Posted: 15 years ago
After reading your valuable replies, i have decided to update this more faster. So i am updating this today!

Guys, i really owe a lot to u! u have been my basic reason to publish my work and ur comments always make my day!

These days, when i am not allowed to sit on my computer to write things, ur comments make me sneak out and do so!

Thanks for being there with me!

Thanks.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry mahak 4 late comment...
i loved it yaar....it was truly amazing....
plz update it soon dear..
eagerly waiting 4 next update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry soryy
for the delay
mahi
lovley part
i lvoe to read more
soon continue
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Thanks a lot.....

i am updating right now!
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Originally posted by: maria88

sorry mahak 4 late comment...

i loved it yaar....it was truly amazing....
plz update it soon dear..
eagerly waiting 4 next update....



Its ohk.....

Thanks for loving it......

i am glad that u found it amazing.......

i am updating it right now!

thanks a lot........
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

sorry soryy
for the delay
mahi
lovley part
i lvoe to read more
soon continue



Its ohk aditi.........

i can very well understand......

thanks a lot for liking this part...

even i would love to update this ff!

i am updating it right now!
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@ people who commented- guys, thanks a lot for ur valuable comments.....i have replied to them individually! Thanks a ton guys...ur comments made me blush....and ur comments even made me happy! infact, after reading ur comments, i had a smile back on my face after so many days! thanks a lot! i owe u everything!



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Posted: 15 years ago
After reading your valuable replies, i have decided to update this more faster. So i am updating this today!

Guys, i really owe a lot to u! u have been my basic reason to publish my work and ur comments always make my day!

These days, when i am not allowed to sit on my computer to write things, ur comments make me sneak out and do so!

Thanks for being there with me!

Thanks.......

i don't know how to show my feelings through words, but i mean each and every word i say.

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!

love,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago


i know that i promised to update more sooner than this......but i really can't help it.....my parents are acting a bit more strict these days......they are concerned about my career......but i can't live without writing.....and they know it......so they have allowed me to use net for one hour daily....or i can have some more hours daily if i study hard.....so i was a bit busy....

but all i can give u up is this update......i know my responsibilities.....if i have a repsonsibilities towards my parents to become what they want.....i have a responsibility towards u all to update my stories and not leave u hanging......

Purple is present
Pink is past



You know what? I was a fool not to notice what others could. He even used to save me from teacher's wrath. Its not that I used to get beaten up by teachers, or I was a bad girl, I was always the loved one in the class. But the fact was that, there was a teacher who God knows why didn't like me. I still wonder why, maybe because I hated Sanskrit and loved English.

So once it happened that I forgot to bring my book of her subject and I knew that she beats people if anyone forgets their books. I was damn scared, and being my partner and best friend, Mayank asked me the reason to it. I told him that I forgot my book and a lone tear fell from my eyes. He wiped it away and asked me to take his book. When I denied, he gave me his oath to do so, and I had to do so. I hated when the teacher beat him up on his hands and I couldn't see that! I felt like thousand tears engulfing my eyes but I had to compose myself until her period gets over.

After her period, I just went out feeling dejected more than ever. It was my fault that Mayank got punishment and I hate when I become the cause of anyone's pain or anything. And this time, I got my best friend beaten up just because of me! I knew that I wanted sometime alone so I went at the terrace of the school.

After sometime, I saw Mayank coming towards me and he sat besides me. He tried to wipe my tears as usual but this time I didn't let him so. I asked him, "How did you know that I was here?" and to this he smiled and said, "Don't I always know where you are? I know you well enough to know where you would go to hide your tears."

He knew me more than I knew myself. And I knew this! I couldn't help but say, "why did you do that?" and he only smiled. But this time his smiled hurt me more than anything. He replied in his sweetest voice, "You know that I can do anything for u. You know that you mean a lot to me. I can't see tears in your eyes and you that I lov- I mean I like you."

That time I didn't paid any attention to his unspoken word. I didn't even thought in my wildest dream that he loved me. I could never think that! And besides, I was sad enough to notice what he preferred not saying. When he didn't continue that word, I had no brains that time to think about it. I am very emotional, and that time, I was completely emotional. I was broken to think that I got my best friend beaten up for my mistake.

I said, "yup you stupid! I know that you like me but what was the use of getting punishment for a thing you never did?" and he replied, "so what? I can't see you getting the punishment either. I can do anything for your happiness. And no more discussion on this." I smiled but I still had tears in my eyes.

He then wiped off my tears and said, "Nupur, I hate to see tears in your eyes. I love your eyes, they speak a lot. And seeing these tears in your eyes, I just can't tolerate. It hurts me more than anything. Your tears give me immense pain and it also hurts me to think that I am here then also you are crying. So can stop crying atleast for me?"

I let him wipe off my tears and I hugged him. It was the first time I hugged anyone in school....and that too a boy. But this boy, whom I knew as Mayank, meant a lot more to me than anyone else mattered. It was not love but a feeling of contentment....a feeling of security that if he is there, I will be alright. He always took care of me and was very possessive for me. I wish he was here now!

Kaisa woh pyaar tha jise main samajh na saki? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jise maine dosti samjhi? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jise main mehsoos karke bhi pehchaan na saki? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo mujhe dard se bachaane ke liye khud dard sehta raha? kaisa woh pyaar tha jisne mujhe har mushkil se bachaya? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jisne kabhi khud ko nahi bataya? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo meri khushi ke liye sab kuch sehta raha? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo meri ankhon me aason nahi dekh sakta? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo mujhe sirf pyaar karta raha? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo itna sacha tha? Kaisa woh pyaar tha jo bina bataye sab jaanta tha? Akhir kaisa woh pyaar tha? Kaisa?

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That's all for today!

i know this is a bit short.....but i really can't help it....

but all i can say is that i would definetly provide u with a bigger update next time!

and now u can see how their relationship is moving....so i would love to know if u want me to give any kind of suggestions.....

and DO press the LIKE TAB!



love,
Mahak

P.S.- Thanks guys for the beautiful comments.....i really loved replying back to them.....do keep telling me abt my work.....and asking me any question u want to ask.....i really would give u an answer [don't ask where is mayank now etc......coz that's the secret]
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mahi!!!!!!!!!!!

gosh mayank is soooooo shweet

i love him yaar

hes damn adorabkle

ohhhhh he took the punishment for nupur

anf he loves her soo much

your very parts attract me

they are soooooo goodi know u dont want me to know where mayank is

plz tell that in the nxt part

i m glad u updated atleast witin an hour

ii know u re too good in studies

as well as writing

llove yaa pebbzzy



Ps im gfirst for the first time
Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago

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