~When Dreams Come True~ - Chapter Three!

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-When Dreams Come True-

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This is my first time writing a FF, so I hope all of you will support me by giving your feedbacks and comments. Constructive criticism is welcomed too! I was just inspired to write this FF from my dreams hence the title. The characters of this FF are not from any TV soap, so you need to visualize their looks all based on your imagination.
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~Character Sketch~

- Diya Rai (19)

A girl from a local middle-class family. She lives with her mother and younger sister.

Having lost her father at the age of 10, Diya had been the sole support to

her mother and would never dream of letting her down. She is very hard-working,

smart and cultured. She loves her sister and helps her with any problem.

Inspired from this, Diya is focused on her career ; to be a teacher.

Diya is rather short and petite. She has big round black eyes which show no emotion ;

perhaps that is why she manages to hide her true emotions from people most of the times.

Her long silky waist-length black hair contrast her pale skin beautifully. Occasionally, Diya

wears a pair of glasses ; usually when she reads.

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- Tamana Rai (18)

Even though she's the sister of Diya, they hardly share the same interests. Tamana ;

pet name Tamz has big dreams and is very ambitious. She believes we only live once

and rather than struggling hard to get a better place in life, one should enjoy what they

have to the fullest. Tamz could care less about how hard Diya works to earn money,

instead she is in her own world ; outgoing and loves partying with her friends.

Tamz is tall and probably the fittest girl on Earth. She has deep green expressive eyes

which match well with her brown short hair. She has a lightly tanned complexion which

she considers hot. She knows that she's blessed with beauty and often takes advantage

of her looks.

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- Narupa Rai (49)

Being the only parent of Diya and Tamana, Narupa has lots of responsibilities. She wants

her daughters to have perfect husbands so that they won't face the same fate she did.

However, beneath all her smiles is hidden a secret ; a truth which she had burried in her

heart for ages. She is a rather lenient mother and values her daughters' dreams and

gives them freedom to a certain limit.

Narupa is also tall but slightly over-weight. She dresses in simple plain sarees, but

never complains. She has almond-colored eyes along with brown hair.

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- Neil Sen (20)

A handsome hunk, born lucky ; having the most luxurious house and never

runs out of money. People describe him as the spoilt brat of a rich businessman.

He has repeated his final year of college since 2 years, but still failed. He can

get any girl he wants, but he never misuses his looks. Instead, he enjoys life with

friends. "Love" does not exist in his dictionary.

Neil is tall, big and muscular. He has dark blue eyes with chestnut-colored hair.

He has a good fashion sense and loves collecting necklaces and wrist-bands.

He has only one dimple on his right cheek which he finds very annoying although

everyone else thinks it is unique and cute. Neil also loves music and has his own

band group.

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- Karan Gupta (21)

A perfect cultured boy ; the kind of guy any girl would wish to have. He is

smart, innocent and rather quiet. He is a teacher and is very strict on his own

rules and principles. He cannot tolerate jokes or lies and expects all his

students to be disciplined. However as a person, he can be very understanding

and generous.

Karan has an average height and is not super good-looking, but is cute in his own

way. He has chocolatey eyes and an olive skin-tone. His hair is short and black ;

usually very messy as he can't be bothered to fix them. He's into plain shirts

and jeans.

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I really hope you all will enjoy it and like it as much as I love writing this.
I will post Chapter One soon so don't miss it! 😃
Edit : My layout is a bit messed up. I don't know why..I'll fix it later <.<
~Hina~
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Really Good Character Sketch ..
I'm Looking Foward to Reading the First Part 😊
Hope You Continue Soon !
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~ Chapter One ~

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Translations to some hindi parts are in pink.

Nothing much really happened, but it is important to show the relationship they share!

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" Sis!! Diii !! Where are my blue sunglasses??? You know I don't leave home without them on such a sunny day...Di !!!"

Diya was making tea for her mother and she was late to go to her Institute of Teaching too. Diya wakes up at 5 a.m.every day to make sure that all the breakfast is ready and that Tamana gets everything she needs. Tamana, on the other hand, is lazy and very dependent on her sister. If she doesn't get the thing she needs on time, she gets very angry.

Where could of she kept the glasses??... Diya thought.. Uff, I'm already so late for my course, if I don't reach there in time sir will kill me!

" Tamana, it's in the first shelf of the green wardrobe." said Diya quickly remembering where Tamana kept them last time.

" Di, don't call me Tamana! It's Tamz, got it ? " She said, annoyed.

" Kyun subha subha meri Diya ko daant rahi ho?? " (Why are you shouting at her early in the morning) said Narupa defending Diya.

" Yaa mom, you're always defending her ! Anyways I gotta go to college, after that I'm going to the cinema with my friends so I'll be home late." said Tamana quickly leaving the home.

" Ye larki bhi na!! Kabhi nahi sudregi !" (This girl will never mend her ways) , exclaimed Narupa.

" Kya mom?? Bachi hai...Sudar jaye gi. Abhi mujhe jaana hai Institute nahi to woh kharoos professor mujhe zinda nahi chorega!" , rushed Diya and left home.

(What mom?? She's still a kid, she'll mend her ways. Now I have to go to the Institute or else that mean professor will not leave me alive!)

Today I'll surely be late...This will be the 5th time already...Professor will be so angry...What do I do?.. Diya was so scared on the way to her Institute.

Diya arrived in the room and the Professor was talking about some sort of Psychological theories and facts. Teachers often had to receive such trainings in order to be able to understand students' feelings through their emotions.

" Diya! Come in and have a seat " said Professor Khan.

He is not even furious ? But why? I am late...He should be shouting at me or worse ; giving me a lecture on how important is punctuality in the career of teaching. Strange... Diya thought to herself shocked.

" Sir I'm so so - "

But before she could complete, the professor cut her and said -

" Diya, it's OK! Now listen, I have something very important to tell you. You know the famous Cambridge Highschool right ?"

"Yes, that's one of the best schools of India sir." answered Diya.

Firstly, he's not angry and now he's talking about Cambridge Highschool?? What is wrong with sir today?.. She thought making a confused face.

" Well one of their teachers' parent had a heart attack, so they want a capable student-teacher from our Institute to take his position. And I believe that you, Diya deserve this teaching experience!" said Professor Khan with a delightful voice.

What?!?! Me ? Teaching in Cambridge Highschool? That is like a dream!! This has to be one of the most precious experience !! Thank God!!

" Sir! I cannot believe it. I'm so happy and I'd be more than honored to teach in that school." Diya said while having one of those genuine smiles.

" But you as the substitute teacher will only last for 1 or 2 months and after that the original teacher will be back." said the Professor.

"It's OK sir. I'd love to spend these 2 months in that school." said Diya ; still lost in the thought of teaching in Cambridge Highschool.

"So get ready to pack, you will leave tomorrow and will stay in the Girls' Hostel there." Professor said with a smile.

I wonder how this experience will turn out to be... This will surely change my life. I cannot wait to go to Cambridge Highschool...

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~ Chapter Two ~

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Translations to some hindi parts are in pink.

Bump!! I guess I'm not writing well enough! Doesn't matter I'll continue and try my best to impress the readers x3. Please comment because it really helps me to improve my writing <.<

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" WHAT?!?! A student teacher for final year college students?? " said Neil with a frown.

" It's not like it matters to you...This is your 3rd year repeating..I bet you've been taught by many different teachers already." replied Sneha.

" Mind your own business Sneha!" said Neil as his cheeks started burning with anger. Neil doesn't like people teasing him by his weaknesses.

" Students, I believe you all are very mature, so please behave yourselves in front of the new teacher. Don't give her a hard time." said Karan.

The crowd of students started yelling "OOOOHHH ... Ohhhhh"

" HER...A girl! Ab ayega na mazaaa!" (Now it'll be fun!) said Rahul ; the flirt of the class and apparently Neil's close friend.

" BEHAVE yourself Rahul." shouted Karan at Rahul's disrespectful comment.

" At least tell us her name sir!" said Sneha curiously.

" Her name is Ms. Rai... Diya Rai." replied Karan as the bell rang loudly.

"YAYYYY!!! RECESSS!!!!" The crowd screamed.

Seems like Ms.Diya Rai will have a hard time handling these students. It's okay...I'll help her with anything she needs.. Especially with all the repeaters..His look turned disgusted as he imagined Rahul's comment. Karan thought.

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" Diya!! Phone rakliya?? Waha ponch ker mujhe phone karna mat bhulna. Zyada kaam mat karna...Apna khayal rakhna...Khaana time pe khaalena. Time pe so na. Mai to tumhare bina - "

(Have you kept your phone??? As soon as you reach call me. Don't work too much...Take care...Eat on time and sleep on time. Without you I'll - )

But before Narupa could complete -

" She's not going FOREVER mom...And she's not a kid. She can take care of herself for god's sake!!" Tamana cut her annoyingly.

" Haan maa... Main apna khayal theek se rakhun gi aur phone bhi karti rahungi." Diya said gently. ( Yes mother...I'll take care of myself properly and I'll call you from time to time )

" Abhi main chalti hoon. Phir se late nahi hona ! I'll miss you." she said as her eyes started getting moisty. ( Now I'll go. I don't want to be late again. )

" Bhagwan tumhe kaamiyabi de aur mushkilo se door rakhe." Narupa blessed Diya. ( May god give you success and keep you away from obstacles. )

" I'll miss you di.. How will I ever manage without you... " her eyes too got wet. Afterall, behind that attitude of Tamana, there was a soft spot for Diya.

" Aww...Give me a call if you need help " Diya replied as she hugged Tamana. " Bye maa...Bye Tamz "

And she left ... On her way there were so many expectations, so many dreams for this new journey in Cambridge Highschool.

I hope main achi teacher ban saku... Aaj daddy jaha pe bhi honge bahut khush honge... ( I hope I'll make a good teacher...Today, where ever daddy is, he'll be very happy )

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After the exhausting long train ride, Diya had to take a taxi to reach Cambridge Highschool. However, the taxi broke down in the middle of nowhere. It was almost midnight and how can she ever reach her destination...But the worse part was that she was trapped with a taxi driver who now didn't seem to be very nice and gentle to her.

" Come on baby! Let's have some fun." said the taxi driver with an evil grin on his face.

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Edited by .-Wish-. - 15 years ago
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Hey, Just Caught Up With Both Your Updates ..
thanks so much for th PM
Great Parts !
I can't wait to see what happens when Diya reaches the School and Neil.
Hope You Update Soon ! 😊
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Originally posted by: liza16

Hey, Just Caught Up With Both Your Updates ..

thanks so much for th PM
Great Parts !
I can't wait to see what happens when Diya reaches the School and Neil.
Hope You Update Soon ! 😊

I'm glad you liked it !
I'll try to update soon =3
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~ Chapter Three ~

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Translations to some hindi parts are in pink.

Bump!! Another update. I guess the story is not that interesting right now but, it's important to build up the character.Silent readers please comment! I need your support!!

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Diya quickly got out of the taxi and started running. However she could not take big steps nor run fast due to her physical structure ; she was just very petite. Before she knew it, there was a thunderstorm and now she is starting to get all wet.

What do I do...I don't even know this place and where do I go...God please help me. I only have you with me now.

Suddenly headlights beamed onto her face and she had fallen unconscious after the car had hit her.

" Where am I ?!?! Help me..Please..." Diya screamed.

" Shhh.. It's OK Ms.Rai, you are safe now." said Karan ; almost a whisper.

She rubbed her eyes and found herself on a bed with a man and an old lady.

Who are they? And how did I get here?..

" Ms. Rai.. I had a small accident with you last night, but what were you doing there? And why was that man after you?" Karan said curiously.

" He was the driver...Nowadays you can't trust anyone.. How can I thank you... But who are you and how do you know me? " Diya said suddenly realizing that Karan knew her last name.

"Oh I'm your colleague. Professor Khan told me about you and I'm here to help you with anything." replied Karan.

Diya widened her eyes and observed him. He looked very honest and nice. His chocolatey eyes were sincere and had that innocent twinkle in them.

" Thank you so much Mr. Uh..." She paused and looked embarrassed as she still didn't know his name.

" You can just call me Karan" He replied with a smile.

Awhh...His smile is really sweet. Thank god that such people still exist on Earth.. After that horrible experience it's just so hard for me to trust anyone...

" Kaha kho gayi Ms.Rai ?" (Where are you lost?) He continued after the long silence.

" Nothing...Oh and please call me Diya." She said with a friendly expression on her face.

"OK...Diya, this is Manju kaki, if you need anything, please feel free to ask her. I'll bring you to the college tomorrow as you need some time to get over the shock." Karan said realizing from Diya's expression that she might not be over the terrible night.

" Thank you Karan...Main tumhara ye ehsaan kaise..." (How can I ...Your favour) Diya said quietly.

" Shh, that was my duty Diya.." Karan said looking into her eyes.

I have never seen eyes that dark. Usually I can guess what people feel by looking into their eyes...But with Diya...It's just so different... She is so small and cute... I hope the students don't take advantage of her personality...

" Ahem Ahem." Said Manju kaki, breaking their intense eye-lock and bringing Karan back to reality.

" Well take some rest and I'll be back later Diya." Karan said with his eyes looking away in embarrassment.

What a different person. His eyes tell me that he is so honest. But there is something behind that smile of his. I don't know what...Anyways I better call maa... Or else she will be so worried.

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In the boys' hostel room, guys were discussing about the new teacher they were going to meet.

" If she's hot then she's mine, I'm already warning you guys." Rahul said in a firm tone.

" If she's that hot, then detention mein to maza hi maza hai na!!! Hahahaha" Mahesh laughed.

" Whatever, let's see how she teaches.. We'll make these two months very hard for her!" Neil mumbled.. " These student-teachers are useless, they can never match good professional teachers! And a girl younger than us, handling our class... IMPOSSIBLE!" He laughed at the thought..

" Anyways...We shall see that tomorrow! I'm very tired now ...Going to bed" Rahul said as he turned off the lights.

I wonder how this new teacher will be like... Diya Rai...Naam to theek thaak hai ( The name is okay okay ) .. Hope she teaches well..

Neil thought to himself...
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The story will start getting interesting from the next part. Don't miss it! =]
Edited by .-Wish-. - 15 years ago
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really nice FF and cant wait to read what happens during diya's first day!! continue soooon pls.

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