fallen in love with you forever(SG MN)part19 pg139

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SaJan-SaJan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#731

awesome update.... read both d last 2 parts now....

was havn exams so cud nt cm online....

loved gunjan being jealous n d mayur parts....

do cont soon....

thaanx 4 d pm...

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan
awesome update.... read both d last 2 parts now....
was havn exams so cud nt cm online....

loved gunjan being jealous n d mayur parts....

do cont soon....

thaanx 4 d pm...

thnx a ton...
okay thats not a problem... 😊 i am glad u liked those parts.. and i would continue soon... 😊

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#733

Heyyyy pragya
Loved ur update
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyyy pragya
Loved ur update
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

thnx a ton dear... will surely continue as soon as i can.... 😛

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#735

PART 16

Hey guys.. i a mback with yet another part of my ff.... hope u guys like this part too..and yeah this part just for u sana... u can take it like a birthday present sorry that i cudnt update on that day...

MAYUR
nupur was in tears seeing whatever mayank had done for her...
N: mayank tumne yeh sab...
M( cutting her off) Sshhhh.....(putting his fingers on her lips)
M: kuch mat bolo nupur.... please... mujhe kehne do... main janta hoon ki maine apni harkat se tumhe bahut dukh dia hai... par.. main sachi dil se tumse iske liye maafi magta hoon... main apni is galti ki wajah se apni sabse achi dost ko nahikho sakta.... please... main waada karta hon aaj ke baad tumhe kabhi dukh nahi dunga.. tumhe kabhi jhoo nahi bolunga. please mujhe maaf kardo nupur
nupur jus hugged him tightly..
N: pehle dil torte ho ho aur phir aisoi harkate karke maafi mangte hoon
braking the hug
N: par harbar toh main tumhe maaf nahi kar sakti naa..
mayank got sad
N: ha.. main har bar tumhe maaf nahi kar sakti.. lekin aaj aakhri baar kar rahi hoon
mayank smiled
N: main hamesha tumhara saath doogi ek achi dost ke tarah aur har woh farz nobhaungi jo ek patni nibhati hai.... jab tak mummy ki tabiyat theek nahi hoti...
Mayank hugs her
M: thnx nupur
N: ab main phirse gussa ho jaungi
M: kyun?
N: kyunki frendship main no sorry no thnku...
M: acha toh tumne mujhse sory kyun bulwaya?
nupur opened her mouth
mayank grinnned
M: mazak kar raha tha
both laugh

SAJAN
gunjan put her hand on samrat's
G: sorry samrat.. mujhe nhai pata tha yeh sab.. shayad meri galtihai maine over react kiya...
S: please chashmish tum sorry mat bolo isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai... yeh meri kismat aisi hai..
G: samrat please aisa mat bolo.... tum chinta mat karo.. main hoon na tumahre saath... HUM MILKAR SAB THEEK KARENGE.. EK SAATH... HAMESHA.. PROMISE..
samrat smiled at her slightly...
S: thnks chashmish aaj agar tum meri life main nahi hoti toh shayad..
G cutting him off): pehli bat tumhe thnks bolne ki zarurat nahi hia.. tuumne bhi toh mere liye itna kiya hai aur dusra agar main na hoti ka toh swaal peda hi nahi hota hai.. kyunki main yahi hoon tumhare paas
sajan smiled at each other..
waiter comes and serves them...
s: acha ab yeh sab chodo..... hum kuch achi baatein karte hai...
G: hmm.. good idea...
S: toh chashmish tumhari hobies kya hai.. ?
G: meri.... mujhe books parhna bahut acha lagta hai... aur gaane suna... aur tumhe..
S: well agar main pehli ki baat karu toh samart aur books ka dur dur tak koi taluk nahi tha... par abh waisa nahi hai.,. main kabhi kabhi books par sakta hion par most of the time mujh boring lagta hai.. and jahan tal gaane ka sawal hai... mujhe bhi gaan suna bahut pasand hai... and meri college main fav hobby basket baal khelna tha...
G:wow basketbaal.. tumhe dekhkar lagta nahi hia ki tum bb main interested the...
sam smiled..
S: janta hoon... most of the time mujhe jo pasand hai... dusro ko lagta hai mujhe woh pasand nahi hai... par
G: aisa nahi hai... jaanti hoon...
sajan smiled and they were chatting and having fun till they finished lunch..

MAYUR
M: toh nuur madam aap mujhe bataye aapko aur kya karna hai...
N: hmm.. pata nahi.. tumhi batao..
M: movie?
N: nahi..
M: wah pehli baar nupur ko movie nahi jaana...
N: nahi...
after few secs
N: mayank..
M:hmm.
N: mujhe pari se milne ka man kar raha hai.. ky hum uske pass thore dere ke liy chal sakta hai... uske bina reha thora ajeeb lagta hain...
M: yeh bhi koi puchni ki baat hui nupur.. offcourse hum chalege.. infact main soch raha tha.. uske liye kuch leke jaate hai...
N: hmm.. chalo maal chatle.. wahi kuch pasand ajayega
M: okay.. chalo...
they go to the mall...
after searching for sometime
N: mayank mujhe toh samjh hi nahi araha hai ki main kyaloon.. uske paas toh alost saare khilone hai...
M: umm... ek kam karo hum clothes setion main chalte hai waha kuch milega..
N: ha.. chalo...
and they both showing each oteh dresses for princess.. but they were not liking...
suddenly both see an amazing dress...
both go towards the dress they like.. and both take the same dress togtehr
mayur laugh...
N:wah yeh kamal hai.. atlast hum dono ki pasand mil gayi.. by god...
M: toh yeh lele
N: koi shaq?
Mayank nodding his head in no...
nupur smiles..
N: chale conuter pe
M:ha
they started walking
M: acha nupur
N: ha
M: main soch raha tha.. ki tumhe bhi shooping pasand hai apne liye bhi kuch khared lo..

SAJAN
after having lunch... sajan go to the office... they work... and its almost evening..
S: bas chashmish aaj ke liye bahut kaam kiya... baa main ek dum thak gaya...
Gunjan smiled at him
G: main bhi tori thak gayi.
both laugh
G: toh ghar chale... mummy wait kar rahi hongi...
S: nahi.. ghar nahi jayenge
G: kyun..
S: kyunki aaj hum bahar jayenge
G: theek hai.. par samrat ke bar tum mayank se baat karlo agar woh bhi nupur ko bahr le ja raha hai.. toh acha nahi lagege.. mummy gha par akeli hain
S: akeli kahan adhitraj aur suhaani hai na..
G: toh bhi samrat... aise acha nnahi lagta hai na..
samrat smiled
S: tum sabki kitni chinta karti hoon
gunjan smiles
samrat calls up mayank.

SAYANK
Mayank picks up the call
M: ha bhaiyaa.
S: tum is waqt kaha hoon
M: shopping mall main... woh hum pari sey thora dermilne ja rahe the...toh sicha uske liye kuch lele...
S: oh.. nuour bi saath main hain
M: ha.. kyun?
S: woh mujhe laga ki tum sirf pari ka bahan de rahe. 4 din baad nupur ka birthday hai... toh tum uske liye luck khared rahe hoge
M( in mind): oh no nupur ka bithday 4 din baad.... maine kuch decide nahi kiya...
S: kya hua? chup kyun hogaye
M: kuch nahi.. bhaiya aone kisi zaruri kaam se phone kiya tha..
S: ha.. main puch raha tha.. tum log dinner ghar pe hi karoge na.
M" pehle bahar karne waal the par abghra pe hi karenge
S: kya bol raha hai tu...
M: kuch nahi.. hum gharhi jayenge
S: okay.. toh phir main aur gunjan bahar dinner karke ayege,, mom ko bh bata dena please.
M: h theek hai bhaiya main bata dunga
S: bye
M:bye
call ends

MAYUR
M: nupur shooping chodo pari ke paas chalte hai
n: par abhi toh tume kaha kuch kharid lo
M: kah tha.. par abh nahi chalo jaldi
and aynk goes from there
N: pat nahi ise kya hogay hai...
she to leaves

SAJAN
S: so chale?
G: kahan?
S: DATE PE
G: kya?
S: uff.. chashmsih kitna sawal puchti hoon... tum bas mere saath chalo..
G: theek hia.. jaisa tum kaho
both smile
both leave
they come to a movie hall...
G: hum yahnk kyun aaye hai?
S: tumhain shahid kappor pasan haina.. aur abhi uski movie realise hui hai.. toh i am sure tumhe in woh dekhna hoga..
G: ha magar,.. tumhe movie dekhna toh pasand nah hai...
S: kabhi kabhi dekh bhi sakta hoon na.. ( going near her) tumahre liye( in her ears)
gunjan just looked at him
S:ab aise dekhna band kar.. warna movie miss ho jayega..
they g oto watch badmash company
enjy.... and then they go for dinner...
enjy themselves and come back....

MAYUR AND SAJAN are in there room trying to sleep
their POVS
gunjan: samrat kitna acha hai.. itne kam samay main woh mera kitna acha dost ban gaya... mera sabse SPECIAL FRIEND...
Samrat: chasmish meri kitni achi dost ban gayi hai itne kam samay main... meri sabse SPECIAL DOST.... kash woh mere saath hamesha rahe..
nupur: mayank kitna acha.. main gussa hui toh usne mujhe manaya.. par sirf ek dost ki tarah kash woh mujhse pyaar karne lag jaye...
mayank: nuour kitni achi hain.. maine jaane najanae usse kitna hurt kiya... kash main uska saath hamesha de pau. ek ache pati ka dharm nibha pau...
thats itguiys hope u liked it...

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#736

*edited*

first of all thanx jaan

for such a cute n sweet gift

ur ff update is the best gift for me

thank u thank u so much........

n now about the update

im glad sajan r friends now

n dont want to leave each other side

have a request for u

can u plz add some more jeolousgunji

like a scene where sheenah n sam talk

n gunji gets al grenn

it will worth to read

anyways mindvlasting update this was

plz plz plz try to continue soon

n thanks for the pm

lots of love

sanu😳

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
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*edited*

first of all thanx jaan

for such a cute n sweet gift

ur ff update is the best gift for me

thank u thank u so much........

n now about the update

im glad sajan r friends now

n dont want to leave each other side

have a request for u

can u plz add some more jeolousgunji

like a scene where sheenah n sam talk

n gunji gets al grenn

it will worth to read

anyways mindvlasting update this was

plz plz plz try to continue soon

n thanks for the pm

lots of love

sanu😳

Sana u r welcum....
and thnks for loving the upadte..and apka request sar aankhon per i will defo give more scenes like that... and i will continue as soon as i can
love you.. hope i entertain u more with other updates... 😛