Tumko Na Bhool Paiynge ( SAJAN) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Nice one!
liked the pairings!:D

continue sooonn!! pm me weneva u update next:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome updt...
loved it..
wo gal jisse sammy ka accident ho gaya...wo gunjan hai kya..??
plzzzz do cont soon..
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr888 start....
Loved it...
Please cont soon...
I think its Gunjan...
Right????

Love
Sana... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb yaaaaar cont sooooooon!!! thanxs for PM!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i love u yaaar...waaaatt an FF..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely ud sonal....gunjan hurt???....pl cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very interesting start. Love the song too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Sona...the concept and the update both are really amazinggggggggggg...
it was superbbbbbbb...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!!! Dekho Sonal. Agar tumne ASAP continue nahi kiya tho...tho...tho main tumse buhot naraaz ho jaongi!! Yaheen pe rukhna tha kya????? Main already tumse buhot zyaada gussa hoon! This is not fair yaar! Just not fair!!!!!!! Now I soooooo wanna know what happens nxttttt!!!!!!! Love ya loads!
babydoll!
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Sam turned her around n was shocked

S: yeh to wohi larki hai, isse jalde hospital lekar jaana hoga

Sam picked her up n putted her in the car n took her to the hospital

Scene shifts to the gang

B: guys, yeh sam abhi tak nahi aya

N: han mujhe chinta hone lagi hai, usse cal kar k poucho wo kahan hai

Ad: chill guys, sam ajayiga

M: han nupur, abhi samrat, car mein hoga, usse call mat karna

Scene shifts to sam

Sam was waiting outside the ward, just then he felt somthing on his cheek, he touched it n it dried, it was a tear

S : ek anjan larki k liye, mere ankho se ansoo kyun gir rahen hai, mein to usse janta tak bhi nahi, kyun howa uske sath aise, kash k mein break mar leta to ussse chot nahi aati, kash k wo meri gadri k samne nahi aati, lekin mein yeh sab kyun soch raha hon.........

Sam was in a deep thought, just then the doc came out, sam came outt the thoughts n went upto the doc

S: doctor kya howa unhe, wo theek to hain na

D: unhe chot kam ayi hain, lekin unke sar pe ghairi chot ayi hai, abhi hum kuch nahi keh sakte, jab tak unhe hosh nahi ajata

S: kya mein unse mil sakta hon

D: sure, lekin wo abhi bhi behosh hain

S: its ok, thankyou

Sam went in n sat beside her, he looked at her innocent face n again got lost, he looked at her sleeping angelic eyes, her beautiful pinkish cheeks, her rosy pink lips, all these together made her face so inoncent, he thought, just then her eyes started to move up, she slowly opened her eyees, she looked at sam

S: tum theek to ho?

She sat up, holding her head

S: arre laiti raho, tumari tabiyait theek nahi

S: tumara nam kya hai

She didnt respond to any of his quesions

Sam thought that she was avoiding him

S: ook tum yahan raho, mein doctor ko bula k lata hon

Sam called the doc

D: kaisi ho beta

No reponse, she just sat there holding her head, sam looked at the doc

D: acha apka nam kya hai

No response

S: dostor, yeh kisi bhi sawal ka jwab nahi derahi hai, yeh theek to hai na

Just then she spoke up

Girl: mein kahan hon?

Both sam n doc looked at her

D: beta yeh hospital hai, tumara accident howa tha na

Girl: accident?

D: han, beta apka nam kya hai

She holded her hhead

Girl: nam?

D: han nam

Girl: mujhe mera nam nahi pata

Sam n the doc were shocked

D:acha yeh batou k ap kahan rehti ho?

Girl: nahi pata

D: yad karne ki koshish karo, beta

She tried to remember, she saw sombody running, in black n white, she cant see the face, sombody slapping the girl, she remebered one thing, she holdded her head in pain, she started to cry

Girl: tum mere pati ho?

Sam was shocked

Girl: shaadi, mujhe bas shaadi yaad ayi hai, kya tum mere pati ho

S: hu....

Before he could say anything, doc spoke up

D: han beta, yeh apke pati hain

Sam was more shocked

Doctor singaled him to calm down

Girl: agar yeh mere pati hain to mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi araha

D: apki tabiyait theek nahi hai na, islye, abhi ap aram karo, mein zara apke pati se baat kar k aata hon

She lyied down, sam n doc went out

S: doctor, yeh apne kya bola

D: dekhen mr samrat, its a case of memory loss

Sam was shocked

D: unki yaaash kho chuki hai, unhe kuch yaad nahi k wo kahan se hai aur unka kya nam hai, unhe bas shaadi yaad ayi hai, isliye wo apko apna pati samjh bheti hai , agar mein unko bolta k yeh apke pati nahi hain, to uske demak pe aur asar parta, isliye ap unke pati hone ka natak kariya, jabtak inke ghar wale nahi mil jate

S: lekin doctor, yeh dhoka hua, unhe to sachai nahi pata, lekin humhe to pata hai na

D: agar apka aisa karne se kisi ki jaan bach jaati hai to yeh dhoka nahi hua, agar ap unhe nahi rakhna chahte, to unhe chor dijiye kahin road pe

S: mein aisa nahi karunga, theek hai mein inhe lejaoga

D: good, mein abhi unhe discharge kar deta hon

Scene shifts to the gang

D: guys bohot hogaya, sammy ko call karo, its almost 12

N: han, mujhe kuch theek nahi lagraha

Benji called him but he wasnt picking it up, his cell was in his car

B: wo phone bhi nahi utha raha

N: ab to zaroor koi baat hai, mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai

B: chill girls, ek kam karte hain, hum sab uske ghar jake dekhten hain, k wo hai kahan

M: yeh great idea, chalo

Scene shifts to sam

Doc had discharged gunjan, sam went in her ward

S: chalen

Girl: kahan?

S: ghar

Girl: chalo

They both went to sams mansion



End
ok thankyou all for ur awsome comments
hope u all like this part
love you all
enjoy
from
Sonal


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