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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Great!!!Please continue with the first part soon....
Posted: 15 years ago
#32
waiting for ur FF..
sana sush nd dolly

do PM me:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
uff...as usual..start bhi QUESTION mark se...!!!
well lage raho....tu kabhi nai badlegi...
awesome concept...mai to aaj bi sheena aur rv ko lucky charm kehti hun...well...mujse acha kaun jaan sakta hai...ki agar ye lucky charm sajan ki lyf me nai hota...to sajan ka kya hota..????
nyways...do cont soon..
congo n all d best for ur new ss...dolly sana n sush..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
awesoooooooooome.......
superb....
fantabulous........
excellent....
wonderful...........
just simply the best.........
and thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
awesome.....
superb.....
mindblowing.....
please continue soon....
thanks for the pm.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
gr8 story
cont karo plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Loved ur idea Sana, sush n dolly. i always wanted such a track 2 happen in MJHT itself b4 samrat realized his love 4 Gunji. But its ok. i think u guyz r gonna fulfill my wish.
thanx a ton sweeties n waiting 4 ur update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hello everyone .ab mere paas is ss ke bare mein kehne ke liye toh kuch hai nahi
sana ne sab kuch toh aap logo ko bata hi diya hai
so without any further delay here comes the first part😃



part 1



After ishq hua sequence



Mayank-"gunjan actually main aur tumhari di college ke baad practice ke liye mere yahan jaa rahe hai tum bhi saath chalo"

Gunjan-"nahi mayank tum log jaao mujhe music room main thoda sa kaam hai"

Nupur-"lekin tu akele kaise jaayegi ."

Gunjan '"di aap chinta mat karo main auto se aa jaongi"

Nupur-"thik hai lekin zyaada late mat karna "

Gunjan-"ha di"




After sometime in music room



Gunjan looking at cds

Samrat-"hey chashmish kya kar rahi ho"

gunjan-"tum yaha???"

Samrat smiles-"kyun mujhe kahi aur hona chahiya tha kya"

Gunjan-"sorry mere kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha .sheena kahan hai"

Samrat-"yahan main tumse milne aaya hun aur tum sheena ki baat le kar baith gayi."

Gunjan-"lekin samrat....."

Samrat-"koi lekin nahi...............waise aaj tumne rehersal main kamal kar diya .itna accha improvise kiya scene main tum jaanvi hoti toh kitna aacha hota "

Gunjan-"par main janvi toh nahi hoon naa....aur waise bhi i am good in music selection.acting is not my forte"

Samrat-"par aaj tumne toh kamal ki acting ki "

Gunjanto herself-kash tum samjh pate ki woh acting nahi thi.

Samrat-"chashmish....chashmish ..kaha kho gayi accha yeh sab chodo,tumhari music selection kaise chal rahi hai.koi help toh nahi chahiye naa"

Gunjan-"sab thik hai samrat aur maine kaha naa mujhe tumhari zaroorat hogi toh main tumhe zaroor bataongi par tumhe is waqt sheena ke saath hona chahiye.usse aura chi tarah se samjna chahiye"

Samrat-"dekho chashmish.................(interupted)"

Sheena-"hey samrat hello gunjan......samrat main tumhe kabse dhund rahi hoon aur tum yaha ho bhul gaye hume jaana tha"

Samrat really couldn't understand what to do-"haan woh chashmish se.................."

Gunjan whispers-"go"

Samrat '"lekin tum ghar kaise jaogi"

Gunjan-"woh main di ke saath chali jaongi"

Sheena-"bye gunjan chalo samrat (and takes him with her while he doesn't want to leave)"

Gunjan-"bye..............i am sorry samrat maine tumse jhoot bola ....nahi kehti toh tum nahi jaate*signs*"

Sometime later.............

Gunjan-"lagte hai mujhe abhi nikalna chahiye warna bahut late ho jayega.aaj toh kaam khatam nahi hua.tamna maam ko phone karti hun"

Gunjan-"tamana maam main gunjan bol rahi thi...woh actually maam kaam khatam nahi hua ,mujhe lagta hai kal shop jana padega....par maam meri classes"

Tamana-"tum jao ......tum classes ki phikar mat karo meri principal sir se baat hui hai aur jab tak play khatam nahi ho jata classes suspended rahengi toh tum college nahi bhi aao toh koi problem nahi hai.lekin mujhe music ke bare mein inform karti rehna"

Gunjan smiles-"thank u maam"



Outside the college



Gunjan didn't get any auto so she is going home by walk busy in her thoughts

Chalo accha hi hua mujhe regular time pe college jaane ki koi zarurat nahi

Issi bahane samrat se dur toh reh paaongi

Takleef toh hogi lekin samrat aur sheena ko saath main dekhne se zyaada nahi

Samrat ke liye mujhe ye karna hoga

Hume ek dusre ke bina rehne ki adat dalni hogi warna samrat aur sheena ke rishte main khatas aa jayegi

Plzz bhagwan mujhe himmat dena

Khayalo mein gum hone ke karan gunjan samne aate hue truck ko notice nahi karti par jab karti hai toh der ho jati hai

But at right time someone pulls her preventing the accident

The man-"tum thik toh ho"

Gunjan still speechless at what was about to happen

Man-"hello"

Gunjan recovering from the shock-"hun!!!!!!!!.,haan main thi...thik hun.thank u so much"

Man-"thnk god,par tum itni late akele"

Gunajn-"woh main ghar jaa rahi thi auto nahi milli toh socha jab tak auto kahi nazar nahi aati paedal chali jaaon"

Man-"toh thik hai ,main tumhe tumhare ghar tak pahuncha deta hun"

Gunjan-"nahi main chali jaaongi aapko waise hi mere liye itni takleef uthai hai...."

Man-"pehle toh tum mujhe aap maat bulaao .aisa lag raha hai jaise main 60 saal ka Buddha hun.....aur rahi baat takleef kit oh yeh main tumhare liye nahi apne liye kar raha hun.....kamse kam tum ghar safely pahunch jaogi toh mujhe tension toh nahi hogi naa....aur phikra maat karo jab tak tumhe auto nahi miljata tab tak saath chalet hai..."

Gunjan smiles-"ok,chalo"

Man-"ek minute ek minute...tab se bakar bakar kiye jar aha hun aur important baat toh ki hi nahi"

Gunjan gets confused

And he brings out his hand-"hi I am sidhharth and u ?"

Gunjan-"mera naam gunjan hai."


siddharth:


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After some more time

Siddharth-"so itni late ko kaha se aa rahi thi"

Gunjan-"college se "

Siddharth-"mujhe nahi patah tha ki aaj kal colleges iss time par..."

Gunjan-"are nahi college main kuch aur kaam tha "

Siddharth-"oh ..tum yaha ki rehne wali ho"

Gunjan-"nahi actually main morena se hun par padhne yaha apne cousins key aha hun...aur tum"

Sidharth-"well main bhi yaha ka nahi hun.i am from delhi.aur aaj hi yaha aaya hun"

Gunjan-"tum aaj Mumbai aaye ho"

Siddharth-"yup.par jab main chota tha toh yahi apni dadi ke saath rehta tha but then i got transferred......are woh dekho ek auto aa raha hai"

And then siddharth waves and so the auto stopped nearby

Sidharth-"anyways it was nice meeting u"

Gunjan-"same here"

Gunjan sits in the auto but then once again calls out '"siddharth!!!"

Siddharth-"haan"

Gunjan-"thanks"

Siddharth 'kis liye maine toh tumhe ghar tak bhi drop nahi kiya"

Gunjan smiles-"for being there"

Siddharth smiles too . exchanging goodbyes they go back to their respective path

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On the other place

Samrat finishes talking to nupur

Samrat-"chashmish ne mujhse jhoot kyun bola ki woh nupur ke saath wapis aayegi jabki nupur mayank ke saath nikal chuki thi????"


kya samrat kabhi yeh jaan payega ki uski chashmish ne us se jhooth kyun bola?

kya gunjan samrat se dur reh payegi?

kya siddharth aur gunjan ka phir amna samna hoga?

in sab ke jawab ke liye wait kariye agle update ka




Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
AWESOME UPDATE SUSH!!!!!!!!
wow!!
cont soon guys will be waiting!!!!
sid is probebly going to join Excel collage and then there will be sid gunjan friendship thet will make samrat jealous......am I right???
And good that samrat found out that gunjan lied abt how she was going home.... i think that will make him more protective of her!!!!
continue sooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awesomeeeeeee updt dear...
mindblowinggggg..
luved it..
nw i think sid will join excel... n den sam jealous seeing sid n gunji together... 😳
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon..
cant wait to read further..
n thnxx for d pm

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