MAYUR FF- OS- BAS EK PAL

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(phone pr mayank & samrat)

M : Hi samrat

S : Hi mayank, meri yaad kaise aa gyi

M : wo baad me btaunga, pehle ye batao k wahaan ka mausam kaisa hai????

S : Mausam kafi garm hai, dimag ka pressure high hai, aur ye jalwamukhi kabhi bhi kisi pr bhi blast ho skta hai..

M : hmm. Fir thik hai..

S : what???? Ye thik nhi tumhari sehat k liye achcha nhi hai. Tum usse kyun satate ho.

M : oye tu mera dost hai ya fir uska…..

S : Pr syad tum bhul gye ho k nupur meri behan hai…

M : achcha kiya bta dia.. agar tum nhi batate to mujhe pta hi nhi chalta

S : cool… meri behan ko gussa dila kar, uska gussa stave aasmaan pr chada kar, Khud has rhe ho, stupid jokes bana kar…

M : hmm lag rha hai gunjan k sath ka asar ho rha hai. Samrat aur shayri????

S : shayri wo bhi gatiya wali…..??? Pta nhi kab main itni achchi shayri kar pauga K gunjan ko shayrana andaz me purpose kar saku..

M : haan.. aur tab tak meri behan ko koi aur psnd aa gya to.

S : fir tum kis kheti ki muli ko.. fir tumhara mere dost hone ka kya fyada.. Ye sab chodo ye btao kab aa rhe ho..

M : Aa rhe ho.. Main Mumbai me hi hu…

S : what????? Pr tumne to nupur ko kaha tha k tum nhi aa paoge.. aur pta nhi kitne din lagenge. Main abhi nupur ko btata hu..

M : oh ruk jaa… ussi k liye to surprise hai.. tu usse kuch mat bolna.

S : ok thik hai.. Fir jab tum ghar aaoge tab hi baat hogi

M : haan thik hai.. bas sham ko khayal rakhna nupur apne room se bahar naa nikle

S : kabhi usse nikalte dekha hai, wo ghar pr jaakar bas apne room ki ho jati hai, dinner bhi badi muskil se karti hai,

M : thik hai sham ko milte hai…

(mayank cut the call..ussi whqt nupur samrat k cabin me enter karti ahi, samrat usse dekh kar smile karne lagta hai, nupur jo already kafi gusse me hai, usse aur irritation hone lagti hai)

N : bhai mujhe dekh kar itna muskura kyun rhe ho

S : bas aise hi. Mera mann kar rha tha

N : gud.. To gunjan k pyar me itne diwane ho gye ho, k apni behan ko dekh kar muskura rhe ho..

S : wo actual me main soch rha tha k agar mayank aaaaaaaaaa(interrupted by nupur)

N : kaun mayank??? Main kisi mayank ko nhi janti… aur ajnabiyo k bare me mujhe se baat mat kiya karo

S to himself : sach me mausam kafi garm hai

N : kya kaha tumne????????

S : kuch nhi. Meri himmat k main tumhare saamne kuch keh jau.. specially jab tum itne gusse me ho

N : gud for you. Aur haan main gusse me nhi hu.

S : main soch rha tha k aaj ghar jaldi chalte hai..

N : kyun??? Tere rishteydaro ne aana hai kya??????//

S : nhi.. wo actual me aaj soch rha hu k gunjan se mil lu..

N : haan to tu chale jaana.. mujhe kafi kaam hai. Main nhi aane wali

S : As u wish………..

(evening me samrat pehle ghar pahuch jata hai aur nupur office me hi hai. Samrat mayank ko ye baat phone karke bta dena hai.. nupur kaam ki wajah se kafi derr tak office me hi rehti hai.. mayank ko nupur k office ki ek ek cheez pta hai, to usse pta hota hai k nupur ka cabin kahaan hai. Mayank nupur k office pahuch kar uske office peon ko kuch paise de kar usse kehta hai k nupur k cabin me pani le kar jaye aur peon aisa hi karta hai)

P : mam pani

N : nhi chahiye.

P : mam pani pee lijiye naa…

N : tumhe dikh nhi raha k main kaam kar rhi hu aur mujhe paani nhi pina hai…

(mayank enters in the cabin)

M : kyun mera gussa iss bechare pr nikal rhi ho.

N : aap kaun?????

P " mam yeh mayank sir hai.. aap itni jaldi bhul gye

N (with lots of anger) : tum inhe jante ho??? Main kisi mayank ko nhi janti…aur ye office k ander enter kaise hua

(mayank peon ko ishara karta hai cabin se jaane ka.. Again nupur)

N : tum yahaan se jaoge ya tumhe dhakke de kar nikalu

(Nupur try to push mayank, but she lost her balance. Mayank caught her in his arm.there is eyelock.. after few mintues.. nupur realized she is in Mayank's arm. She broke the eye contact & see in other side)

N : chodo mujhe..

(Mayank realized nupur is in his arm. He loose his grip. Nupur fall down on the floor. Mayank smiles at her)

N : Teri to… niklo yahaan se…….. abhi k abhi

M : tere sath hi jaunga.. ab chal…

N : gud. Main apni car se jaa rhi hu.. aur tumhe lift nhi milegi…

M : koi nhi. Main sammy ki bike laya hu..

N : what???? To matlab samrat ko bhi pta tha k tum aa chuke ho.. uski kahir nhi..

(at that time peon enter in the room)

P : mam.. mere ghar me zaruri kaam hai, kya main jau

M : haan jao jao.. tumhari mam ko main le jaa rhe hu.

N : tumhare sath main nhi aa rhi hu

M : tum aa rhi ho ya utha k le jau…

(nupur irritated… )

N : this is not done. I really hate u.

M : But I still love u.

(Again nupur so much irritated. She picked her bag & go to parking area. Mayank follows her. In the parking nupur saw her car is puncture. )

N to herself : Uff. Isse bhi abhi puncture hona tha. Ab main ghar kaise jaungi

M : main hu naa. Chalo main bhi tumhare hi ghar jaa rha hu.

N : tumhare sath jaane se achcha hai k main taxi se chali jau.

(nupur hire a taxi.. & mayank follows the taxi by bike. )

TD : madam ji.. wo banda kab se taxi k aage piche chal rha hai.. uska accident naa ho jaye.

N : bhaiya aap apne kaam se kaam rakho. Karne do uski jo marzi hai

TD : madam ji.. main to bta rha hu. Aap to Mumbai ki traffic ko jante hi ho.

(Nupur is so much irritated & she stop the taxi & come out )

N : kya hai, kyun meri jaan kha rhe ho.

M : listen nupur.. I am sorry.. I know sari galti meri hai, mujhe aisa nhi karma chahiye tha.. Per kya karu tumhe to pta hai naa k career bhi to important hai

N : Maine kab mana kiya. Main tumhe kuch keh rhi hu kya?? (nupur apna face dusri taraf kar leti hai taki nupur ko uska gussa aur aasu mayank ko nazar naa aaye)

M : yahi to problem hai tum kuch keh nhi rhi ho. Ek baar dekho meri taraf (mayank nupur ko pakad kar uska face apni taraf karta hai, to dekhta hai k nupur ki aankhon me aasu hai)

M : Hey sweety.. Tumhe pta hai naa k tumhari aankhon me aasu nhi dekh skta main.

(suddenly rain started. )

N : I am ok naa. Dekha jab bhi tum mujh se emotional baatein karte ho to kuch naa kuch ajeeb hota hai.

M : barish hone me kya ajeeb hai.

N : January me barish??? Ye tumhe ajeeb nhi lagta hai..

M : point hai baat me…

(tabhi barish kafi tez ho jati hai.. jiske chalte dono bus stop k shed k niche rukte hai. Nupur barish dekh kar kafi khus hai. Wo continuous barish ko dekhe jaa rhi hai)

M to himself : dude.. yeh inn 2 saalo me aur bhi khubsurat ho gyi hai..I can't control myself. Jo baat baad me karni thi.. abhi karta hu..

M : bas karo nupur.. fir yeh kehna muskil ho jayega k kaun zyada khubsurat hai, tum ya barish..

N : mere liye to barish hi hai

M : to chalo fir

(mayank nupur ko khich k barish me le jata hai, aur barish itni tez hoti hai k dono kuch seconds me hi gile ho jate hai…)

N : ye kya kiya tumne… main puri gili ho gyi

M : sach bolo kya tumhe ye psnd nhi hai

N : haan psnd hai.. pr iska matlab ye nhi k road pr start ho jau..

M : main hu naa

(iss se pehle nupur kuch aur kehti Mayank nupur ko waist se pakad kar apni taraf khichta hai aur dance start kar deta hai, barish kafi tez hoti hai.. mayur puri tarah se gile ho chuke hai.. Mayank feels k nupur sach me bahut sunder hai.. mayank chahta hai k ye lamha yahi ruk jaye aur sari zindagi yu hi kat jaye.. pr nupur kya sochti hai wo yeh bhi nhi janta.. mayur dance kar rhe hote hai k achanak nupur ka balance bigad jata hai aur wo mayank ki baahon me gir jati hai. Then eyelock)

M (little bit loundly) : kash issi lamhe me sari zindagi khatam ho jaye.. main apni sari zindagi issi lamhe me jee jaana chahta hu.. Nhi chahta ye lamha kabhi katam ho.

(Dono ek face ek dusre k itne kareeb hai k ek dusre ki saanse mehsus kar skte hai.. Nupur apni aankhen band kar leti hai, mayank feels she look so cute.. ek chote bache ki tarah. Jo kisi se naraz nhi ho skta. Tabhi ek car mayank k back se horn deti hai.. dono sense me aate hai. Pr mayank already lost in Nupur's beauty. Wo road se side hone ki jagah nupur ko gale lga leta hai)

N : mayank are u ok naa?????

(mayank nupur k sath road k side me ho jata hai.. Jate jaate car driver bol k jaata hai. K ye ishq baji karni hai to ghar pr karo.road to chod do. Mayank & nupur feels embarrassed . Dono ko lgta hai k ghar chalna chahiye. Dono ghar ki taraf chal dete hai. But again problem. Bike start nhi hoti.

N : mayank tum aur tumhari bike. Uffffffffff

M : uff nupur mere liye to achcha hai

N : isme achcha kya hai

M : yahi k main tumhare sath hu

N : tumhara kya hai tum aaj ho aur kal nhi. 15-20 din k liye aaye ho. Aur fir issi ko yaad karte karte main roti rahungi.

M : iss baar aisa nhi hoga Jaaneman

N : Jaaneman????/ aur iss baar aisa kyun nhi hoga.. tum ab kya jaoge nhi

M : You know naa. Maa, baba wahi shift ho gye hai, Gunjan yahaan hai wo bhi isliye k uski studies baki hai..

N : wahi to keh rhi hu.. fir inn sabko yaad karte huye main raoungi.. tumhe pta hai naa k tum mere special friend ho.

M : haan. Isliye tumhe leke jaunga.

N : matlab??????

M : tum puri budhu ho…. Waise mauka bhi achcha hai, mausam bhi hai dastur bhi hai

N : ab ye kya bol rhe ho

M : tumhe kuch btana hai..(mayank apni knees pr baith jata hai) in do saalo me maine bas ye jaana hai k maine har saans me tumhe miss kiya hai, band aankhon se tumhe dekha hai, inn nazaro ne sirf tumhe hi dhunda hai, Har pal mujhe aisa lagta rha k kahi se tum saamne aa jao. Aur bas tum kehti jao aur main sunta jau. Tumhari baato k bina main kuch adhura sa hi tha.. ab bas main aur adhura nhi reh skta.. main yahaan tumhe le jaane aaya hu. Chahta hu k tum mere sath chalo.(mayank apni pocket se ek ring nikalta hai, aur nupur ki taraf badha deta hai). Pls marry me.

(nupur is so shocked & surprised k jis din ka intzaar usne tab se kiya hai jab se wo mayank ko janti hai wo din aaj hai, pr mayank kabhi usse ye kahega ye usne socha bhi nhi tha. Nupur ko lagta tha k mayank usse iss tarah se psnd nhi karta. Aur mayank usse shadi k liye purpose karega ye to usne socha hi nhi tha. Wo bhi bas iss ek pal)

(AS ALL U KNOW K NUPUR KA ANSWER KYA HOGA……SO The end)

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Loved it Annu

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Heyyyy anu
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Nupur ka gussa baap re baap
Rain scene was really nice
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Hey! Its awesome Annu!! I loved it to the core. 😊

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It was fab
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Liked how Nups was angry n the way Mayu purposed here was Aaye haaye
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