'''~luck or desiny~'''

-Ishita- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#1

okkkk guys this is my first piece of writing...!!

this is story abt two ppl totally opposite frm each other, they never thought something like this would ever happen to them and will fall for a person to whom they were always careless abt each other but as time changed their paths crossed ant they beacem inseperable souls...!!
the story starts...................
As the sky broke into beautiful morning, the warming sun rays entered her room.....
thr room was very beautiful there was a large picture of a beautiful girl smiling widely and priceless emotions on her face...
as the sun rays fell on her, she got with shear innosence on her face, opened her beautiful eyes which was a replica of her heart... further she thanked god for the peaceful sleep and smiled at the pictures on the other side of wall which had trapped her beautiful memories with her close friends and faily members...
suddenly a though crossed her mind and the smile vanished, the beautiful smile was replaced by a nervous and anxious emotion.... she was scare.......
today she was to enterr a different phase of life...
she was stepping into college life..
she is very vocal ans joyous when it comes to her friends but when it comes to unknown people a strange fear comes in her mind and heart......
with fear in her heart she got hersely ready and looked stonished in white kurta and blue jeans which she considered lucky for her...
looking to her mom and trying to give her a smile of aasurance that she is f9 she left her home and at the gate she saw her best buddies waiting for her with flowers and goodluck cards as they very well knew her and her nervousness...
ater abt 15 mins she gave a tight hug to her best friend and wave them a good bye
nupur shouted all the best "gunjan"...don't worry jst smile and all problems will vanish...
within no time she reached college....
the gate was closed and hundereds of new faces appeared...
some happy, some nervous while some curious...
a person came forward and shared a hiiiiiii with her
she gave her a casual look and a friendly shake but someone was observing them......
first she thought he might be a senior student of the college bt no he was'nt then who was he....
constantly staring in a weired manner yet so enchanting...
blue jacket and blue jeans having cell phone in his hand and his eyes searching for someone...
gunjan moved a bit backward to have a clear look of that guy his eyes were searching for something, his expressions seemed he is unsatisfied with something she wanted to know more..
but why.....
was she ever intrested in any stranger before bt what attracted yeh that is a perfect word u can use for her feeling, there was a lump in her throat but yyy and for whom................
he was just a stranger.............
guys i know it is mahabakwaas
plzzzzzzzzzzzz feel free to criticise
and feel free to pm me ur ideas that would really help..........

Created

Last reply

Replies

50

Views

4.3k

Users

26

Likes

55

Frequent Posters

marisol45 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
wow. really nice intro.
nd it ws nt at all bakwaas.
continue soon.
n pm me when u do😊
aashizin thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#3
hey ishi 🤗 superb starting yar gun's first day and sajan's first meeting can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm by the way it was not bakwas ok it was mind blowing 👍🏼
-Jyotika- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#4
grr8888888 starting dear...
its awesomeeeeeeeeee....
luved it....
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon...
MoNaYaRoX thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
Great Part!!
lemme guess?? THE COOL DUDE SAMRAT?? Lol
oh n dont ever sya ur writing is baqwaas cause it was very well written ok??
plzz continue soon
and add me to ur PM list!!
THANKS!!!!
-BrokenDreamer- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#6
omg...ishi🤗...so well written!!...
looking forward for furthur updates....pm me hon!😉
Niyu- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#7
hii ishita
is awesome
continue soon
and pm me
luv
pari
x..Anki..x thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#8
hey ishi...awesome start...
do continue soon...
thanks for pm
tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#9
heeeeyyy ishitaaaa nicee partt andd ff i mustt sayyyyy soo cont soon dearrr
charmee_sammy thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#10
CONGO..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
awesome jaan..
superb start..
loved it..
do cont soon..
n no thanx for d pm..!!😉

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".