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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: khahani

Hey Richa

Finished reading all the parts although I should be studying🤔

I love the simplicity if your writing, it is so simple yet breathtaking which keeps the reader drawn and yearning for more. Mr-I-don't-give-a-damn seems to be very much smitten by his beautiful pray who he constantly likes to have a jab at. Ahh the awkward moment in Rahul's bedroom, so much for vouching not be affected by each other ehh?

I like Smrithi and believe she will be the catalyst in the budding relationship of AR.

TC and continue soon :)

Hello 😊
Thanks so much for liking my FF. Comments from you readers really go a long way in helping me carry the story forward.
Referring to "Mr-I-don't-give-a-damn" (interesting way to put it 😉), he is smitten by Riddhima and knows it too, but it would take some good effort to make him accept that. Same goes for Miss Gupta 😃 It's just a matter of time before destiny, their friends and also Smriti make them realize that they are meant to be together...after all it can only be AR forever 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome girl, it was such a fab update. Hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww such a sweet part... armaan's mom seems relle nice n i hope she helps bring AR together... n can u update soon with a longer part plzzzz.... newayz loved this update
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Posted: 15 years ago
a brilliant part...well if we, here are referring to iravati harshe playing smriti gupta back in 2002...lol i loved her to bits that calm, serene look and her soulful smile...her motherly affections towards riddhima..well i cn very unambiguously visualize them the interaction, though short was beautifully penned and well both the protagonists are too shy to let the moment pass...i wud have considered suicide nd digging my own grave as well had it been me...lol...but the fact that armaan gets affected a lil more and realizes a lil earlier makes my heart burst into flips of joy...a very disturbing pd of 2 weeks came to the most ravishingly capitulating end lol..they just stood (ummm gaping nd staring at each other)...nd forgot all abt reflexes i have no idea but such things happen naturally...no clue-no science wrks here when ur lumbic brain sends its hormones rushing up nd down...moreover it was heartwrenching to hear abt ahana especially i learned bout Junko Furuta's 20th death anniversary..the purgatory ending she lived through ...i m nt too sure but the story was a lil vague abt the fact that either muskaan made an excuse to go out eith rahul 9the man) or ummm genuinely was needed at home...i mean y wud she consider ice-scream nd some intenese scenes...anywys the prt was again enchanting( ya i no i use that wrd a lot..cnt help it though) and armaan u have big mansion don't u...get the hell out of riddhima's way..bathroom mein kya tha ki u decided to embarass her lol...ARsleep on it..u'll get to know more abt the ridiculously dumb but inanely awesum feeling budding in ur atium nd blood enriched ventricles( aftrall the heart sends the blushes)...the prt adds to MY MOST EMBARASSING MOMENTS EVER FR both AR lol...keep writing srry fr the delay was tied up in quite a many exhaustive tasks...thnx fr the pm nd may u live forever9 ya sounds like a curse but u gotta live to give us more of the coupls i love nd succumbed to aftre RAJu..rahul-juhi lol!
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Posted: 15 years ago
btw u a sanjeevani- a medical boon fanatic huh?
they copied the first couple of scens lol..morgue sceens the camp scenes too lol! armaan strted with ketchup..rahul with orange juice rofl...huh bck then i was so into it but hen things went haywire all though the starcast remaines intact except fo the 1st rahul nd shilpa kadam guess wat cinevistas cnt really wrk with ppl named shilpa ...i mean pehle shilpa kadam in 02...shilpa anand in 08...shilpa tulaskar as well rofl!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi,
Nice part. So finally somebody is planning to act as cuppid for the two. Good for them lest they will remain oblivious of their own feelings.
thanks for the PM
Shveta
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
loved it
it was soo good
contd soon
sorry for the late comment
eagerly waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey there:
This was an awesome update....
Loved RM's cute fight....
Oohh....loved AR together in that state...that was awesome....
So Armaan's mom already sees the connection of AR...wow...
Nice update...
Pls continue soon & thnks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: repercussion

a brilliant part...Thank you!! well if we, here are referring to iravati harshe playing smriti gupta back in 2002...lol i loved her to bits that calm, serene look and her soulful smile Her face did come to my mind while describing Smriti, though I must admit that I wasn't a regular viewer of Sanjeevani...her motherly affections towards riddhima..well i cn very unambiguously visualize them the interaction, though short was beautifully penned and well both the protagonists are too shy to let the moment pass Yup they are, coz being in a denial mode never helps...i wud have considered suicide nd digging my own grave as well had it been me...lol...LOL 😆 but the fact that armaan gets affected a lil more and realizes a lil earlier makes my heart burst into flips of joy...a very disturbing pd of 2 weeks came to the most ravishingly capitulating end lol ..they just stood (ummm gaping nd staring at each other)...nd forgot all abt reflexes i have no idea but such things happen naturally...no clue-no science wrks here when ur lumbic brain sends its hormones rushing up nd down...Whoa! I love the way you use your words moreover it was heartwrenching to hear abt ahana especially i learned bout Junko Furuta's 20th death anniversary..the purgatory ending she lived through .Read about her...really tragic..i m nt too sure but the story was a lil vague abt the fact that either muskaan made an excuse to go out eith rahul 9the man) or ummm genuinely was needed at home...i mean y wud she consider ice-scream nd some intenese scenes...She was needed at home but when Rahul sensed the underlying tension in the air, he decided to use the ice-cream offer as a means to defuse it......Muskaan saw his desperate attempt to gain a semblance of the comfort level they used to share and hence readily agreed to it anywys the prt was again enchanting( ya i no i use that wrd a lot..cnt help it though) and armaan u have big mansion don't u...get the hell out of riddhima's way..bathroom mein kya tha ki u decided to embarass her lol...Call it being at the wrong place at the wrong time (though I feel that he was at the right place at the right time...what say? 😉) ARsleep on it..u'll get to know more abt the ridiculously dumb but inanely awesum feeling budding in ur atium nd blood enriched ventricles( aftrall the heart sends the blushes) LOL ..the prt adds to MY MOST EMBARASSING MOMENTS EVER FR both AR lol...keep writing srry fr the delay was tied up in quite a many exhaustive tasks No worries, really appreciate the fact that you took some time out to post your comments 😊 ...thnx fr the pm nd may u live forever9 ya sounds like a curse but u gotta live to give us more of the coupls i love nd succumbed to aftre RAJu..rahul-juhi lol! Oh, a "RaJu" fan.......good to know that 😊

Edited by richa_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Hey there:

This was an awesome update....
Loved RM's cute fight....
Oohh....loved AR together in that state...that was awesome....
So Armaan's mom already sees the connection of AR...wow...
Nice update...
Pls continue soon & thnks for the PM

Thanks so much 😊
Yup, Smriti sees the connection already, but sadly the two people who should have been the first ones to see and accept it are still denying its existence. But again, that moment will also come.

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