U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello ppl.......
sry fr late update.I ws a lil busy wid my collage n wrk.....soo cud nt update.
Sooo.......here is 2nd part of my SS.hope u all enjoy it reading.........




EXCEL COLLAGE
..............9:00 am

Nupur ws walking in d corridor towards her clsroom........sleepy n yawning 🥱 (remember she cud nt sleep d whole ni8).........suddenly she felt like some1 is following her.......she turned back to c who it ws.........der ws no one..........
again she started walking.......again she felt d same..........she turned back again ws again shocked to c no one..........n den suddenly wen she turned shews shocked n scared 2 c...........

N : Arey Purab tum..........
P : kyun???.........tum kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi???
N : aisi koi baat nahi hai.........aur kaho kaise ho?
P : arey bhaii!!!.......subah-subah aapka khoobsurat chehra dekh liya........aaj ka din to bas bahut acha guzrega
N : Purab tum bhi naa.....!!!!kaafi din hogaye naa........tumhara corse kaise chal raha hai?
P : haan bhaii!!!.........theek hai aur waise bhi aapke paas kaha waqt hoga humse milne ka............hum jaise purane aashiq to kab se aapki raah tak rahe hai
N : mere paas waqt nahi hai.....??? arey waqt to aapke paas nahi hai hum jaise ordinary logon se milne ka.............aap to iss collage e star hai...........aap kaha aur hum kaha.....😉
P : kyun hamara mazak uda rahi hai madam......????........😉 😉 😉

Purab n Nupur share a laugh 😃........dey were soo busy in each others talk dat dey dint notice dat.........some1 ws cuming der wayyy
M :
PURAB..........(shouting)

Evry1 were quite shockee to hear Mayank shouting dat wayy..........as dey alwayss saw a calm n quite Mayank
Mayank came near dem n...........

M : Purab......tu yaha kya kar raha hai???........pata hai main tujhe kabse doondh raha hoon
P : kabse???......par ujhe lagta hai ki tu to abhi aaya hai na collage........phir mujhe tabse kaah doondh raha tha.......hawan mein???
M : dekh main mazak ke mood mein nahi hoon
P : ek baat bata.........tu mazak ke mood hota kab hain
n winked at Nupur........😉 😉 😉
Mayank ws again burning........😡 😡 😡

M : tu chal........mujhe deodhar sir ke project mein teri help chahiye
P : areyy!!!......project to tera hai.......main kyun chaloon?
M : tu chal raha hai ki nahii???????
P : acha thhekh hai.........aata hoon
Byee Nupur............😊
Phir kab milogi???

M : ho gaya???...........ab chale?
P : chal........bye Nupur
N : Byee Purab........c u later

Mayank n Purab left frm der.....................
Bt Nupur ws still gazing at d way by which dey passed.............expecting some1 to turn back.......
Nupur suddenly heard a voice frm backk.........

S : kya dekh rahi hai?????
N : Suhaani.......tum kab aayi.?main to bas aise hiii............
S : Nupur dear........ tum janti hona ki tum mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti to phir koshish kyun karti ho?.................Mayank gaya tha na abhi-abhi uss taraf
N : Nahi Suhaani..........woh to bas..............
haan..........Mayank hi tha
S : Nupur tum apne aaap ko ithni takleef kyu deti ho????
Dekho main tumhe bayhut baar samjha chuki hoon aur phirse kehti hoon..................MAYANK DONT DESERVE U
main maanti hoon ki Mayank bahut acah lkadka hai......usme woh saari qualities hai jo ladki chati hai........infact I ws d one who wantd 2 c u both 2gether.............n now I am saying dis thing.............
Dear....!!!! Mayank ne tumhe apni life kabhi imporance nahi dii hai.usne kabhi bhi tumhare feelings ki kadar nahi ki haii.......agar woh tumhari thodi bhi parwaah karta na to woh tumhe aise chod ke nahi jaata.....aur woh bhi tab jab tumhe uski sabse jyada zaroorat thi..........
woh tumse pyaar to karta tha........par kabhi tumhari importance ko nahi jaan paya
Nupur..........kuch to bolo
N : kya bolu???
S : tuu samajh rahi hai naa main kya keh rahi hoon

N : haan.......main samajh gayi (wid a sad face 😔
S : Offffooo!!!!.......ab pls hindo filmon ki heroino ki tarah face mat banaoo pls
N : theekh haio meri amma...!!!! ab chale cls ko warna shukhla sir ke baare mein to tum jaanti hi hoo
S : haan woh actually I huv some wrk in office room sooo I'll catch u in d cls ok
N : yaa sure.....Bt cum fast
S : ok okk.....

den Suhaani goes to office room n Nupur fr clsroom

Mayank N Purab were in d library.........Maynk ws going through soem books while Purab ws watching him seriously........😡 😡

M : aise kya dekh raha ho?
P : woh .....mujhe nkahin jalne ki booh (smell) aa rahi hai.......lagta hai kisika dil jal raha hai
M : kya bakwaas kar rahe ho???
P : arey ab too aur zyada aa rahi hai
M : matlab??........tumhe lagta hai ki main jal raha hoon
P : haan
M :
aur woh bhi tujhse
P : haan
M : kyun????
P : kyunki main Nupur ke saath hasi-mazak kar raha tha
M : wat???.........mujhe kya tum Nupur se baat karo ya oske mom se
P : acha..??? to tyumhe koi farak nahi padta ha??
M : Nahii (trying to say it confidently more dan he actually felt)
P : okk.......mere sawwaal ksa jawaab de
main agar Nupur ko date pe leke jauon to..........NO PROBLEM
M : Na....hh...ii..... (stammering)
P : hmm...ok agar main use uski fav SRK ki movie leke jaun to bhi........tujhe no problem naa?
M : woh nahi aayegi tere saath
P : Dude!!!!.......its my problem.....u juss temme u dont huv any prob naa
M : Arey!!! jab woh mere saath nahi aayi to tere saath kyun aayegi?
P : kyun koi rule hai kya ki woh tere saath nahi aayio to mere saath bhi nahi aayegi??
M : Okkk...5n.go ahead I dont huv any problem ok........
P : gr8...!!!!!

den Purab ws going out of library......Mayank held him by his shirt frm back,pulled n asked.......

M : kaha ja raha hai???
P : kitna sara kaam hai yaar.......Nupur ko date pe le jaana hai aur uske saath movie bhi to jaana hai
haiyy!! yaar....juss imagine........sirf main aur Nupur.......main usko apni bike pe beethaunga aur wooww!!!!...kithna mazaa aayega

Mayank now lost his temper...........
he held purab's collar n...........

M : khabardaar...!!!! ek aur baar agar Nupur ke baare mein kuch kaha tooo.......
P : RELAX Dude!!!!.......abhi to tune kaha tha ki u dont care at alll...........n now dis?
sooo.........u were jealous naa?
M : Nooo.....aisa kuch nahi hai
P : okk....to phir main Nupur ke paas ja raha hoon
M : dont u dare go near her..........(stopped fr a while)
yessss.........I ws jealous
P : okk.....
tu use bata kyun nahi deta ki u still luv her yaar
M : chod yeh sab baatein aur kaam par dhyan de.........

Purab ws going out frm d library.....
Mayank stopped him.........

M : kaha ja raha hai???
Nupur ke paas??
P : arey yaarr!!!......bhabhi lagti hai woh meri samjha...........
mens loo jaa raha hoon........chalega???
M : jaldi aa.......I need ur help

Purab came out n ws walking in d corridor n saw dat Suhaani ws cuming in dat wayyy
as soon as he saw her.........he set his hair n shirt perfect n went to her
P : Hio Suhaani
S : Ohh!! Hi Purab......
P : aaj shaam ko tum kya kar...........

Purab dint evn complete wat he ws trying to say n SUhaani stopped him in d middle

S : Okkk b yee Purab
P : ...........Suhaani....Suhaani
(to himself) bachuu!! teri dal yaha nahi galne walii..........u shud try some1 else

heyyy Sonia.......waise aaj shaam ko kya rahi hoo?
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okkk !!!
thats it fr 2dayyy
thnk u sooo much fr reading
I hope u like it 😊






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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maloo19

will love to read plz add me to pm list


yaa sure
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wiiippppppppppppeeeeeee
thank god i am some where first to comment.......


wellllllllllll............

woooooow!!yash its really good really good loved it........................... but i want MN sceans pls patch up kar do naa.............................................. loved PS 2222222222
Edited by ravs143mayank - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Toooooo gud Yash.....Fabulous update👏👏👏 n thnx 4 the PM dear

Edited by ashmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovley update yash
plz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
lovleu update
i love maynk's jealous expression
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kamal ka update tha yaar.......
i luv it.......
i have fallen for your ff........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome yaar yash!!!

loved it!!
upd8 soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was fab yaar...loved it...update it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb part
jealous mayu is so cute

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