U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
hey!

i just read both the parts....

beautiful yaar!

dono ko hi pyaar hai........bas ikraar ki der hai!

do update soon na plz.......

Heyy Mahak
thnks fr reading
yeahh...u r ri8.......pyaar bhi hai par
will update soon
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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Mari-ARtian
it was fab yaar...loved it...update it soon...

yaa sure Mati
glad u liked it 😊

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: ravs143mayank
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thank god i am some where first to comment....... </font>

wellllllllllll............

woooooow!!yash its really good really good loved it........................... but i want MN sceans pls patch up kar do naa.............................................. loved PS 2222222222

yeahh......I know Ravali
every1 is waiting to see MN 2getehr.....bt u huv to wait
thnkss fr reading
glad u liked it 😊

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Will be updating it soon
thank u soo much my lovely friends 😊

Edited by yash.dilse - 15 years ago

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

I am really sorry for updating it soo late but I was busy from 2 months preparing for my exams soko could not update it........but from now I'll update it time to time.

Edited by yash.dilse - 15 years ago

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yashasvini

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SHASHI BHUSHAN : He is Nupur's dad.He is a sucessful businessman.He belongs to a small town of Morena.He has always taught his children that only hard-work can give them sucess.He is a very disciplined man and has taught the same to his children too.

RAJSHRI BHUSHAN: She is Nupur's mom.Like every mother,she is very sweet and caring.She is very emotional by nature and is worried about her children especially Nupur.She blindly believes in things like god,destiny and luck unlike her husband which is always a reason for their cute knokh-jhoks.

UDAY BHUSHAN: He is Nupur's younger brother.He is sweet,naughty,caring brother.He loves to tease his sister.He loves her very much and is concerned about her but never shows it (like every brother 😊)

ADHIRAJ MISHRA:He is the son Excel college's principal.He has done his diploma in adverstising from a established university of London.After his graduation he is back to India to help his father.He joins Excel college as teaching faculty.After somedays he also finds his true love in Excel college.(dont ask me who 😉)

DIA SEHGAL : She is a fashion designer by profession.She is cute,beautiful and the "DIVA".She is related to Mayank.....how??....u'll come to know in next parts.

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EXCEL COLLEGE: (9:30 am)

Nupur and Suhaani leave for their class and Mayank and Purab after thier discussion regarding project leave for their class
Nupur,though in class is still LOST in Mayank's thoughts.suddenl;y she realises and comes back to senses.She tries very hard to concentrate on Shukhla sir's class but is unable.She finally loses her patience and sits down hlding her head giving shukhla sir a "I'll kill u" look 😡.Suhaani notices her and asks "what?" by ishaaras

N: (in a low voice) yaar.....kitna pakaata hai yeh.......mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki aakhir kehna kya chahte hai?.........mera class sunne ka bilkul mood naho hai
S: class sunne ka mood tujhe hota hi kab hai?......now pls dont disturb me and keep quite........sirf 10 min bache hai class khatam hone mein OK
(Nupur to herself) 10 min......OMG!!!!....aisa lag raha hai ki 10 min nahi 10 saal hai.......heyy bhagwan!!! mujhe uthaley........duniya se nahi iss class se........pata nahi yeh shukla ssir kiss janam ka badla le rahe hai

Nupur keeps on blabbering and 10 mins passes off and bell rings.As soon as bell rings Nupur feels as if she is set free from a prison after ages.Nupur goes to Suhaani
N: uff..!!! thank god class khatam ho gayi.aaj class kitni boring thi naa
S: tujhe aakhir achi lagi hi kab hai? (putting her books into her back)
N: achaa..!!! ab tera plan kya hai?
S: kuch nahi.........kaise bhi Ms.Aha ki class postpone ho chiki hai to I am just planning to take rest
N: offoo!!! tum bhi na kitni boring hoo.......aisa lagta hai ki tum jawani mein budhe ho gayi ho..........(she suddenly remembers some past memories and is lost)
S: kya hua??........okk then u tell me what shall we do?
N: yahan paas wale theatre mein SRK ki nayi film lagi hai........chalo naa........bahut mzaa aayega
S: Noo yaar........moo nahi hai
nupur makes a sad face 😔
S: okk....par ek shart par..........tu Deodhar sir ki project emin meri help karegi..DONE?
N: Done 😃
S: Ok.....I have some books to return in library we'll go there first and then leave to movie ok
Suhaani goes inside while Nupur is waiting outside the library in the corridor.Mayank and Purab aftr their classes are also leaving for their homes from the corridor but on the opposite side.Nupur tries a lot not to look that side but ends up looking at Mayank.Mayank also looks at her.Purab notices all this and to make mayank jealous....
P: Nupur........(he shouts) byeee (waving at her)
N: Byeee (with a sweet smile 😊)
Mayank was now red 😡.As soon as they reach parking place Mayank kicks Purab from back 😆
P: Ouchh...!!!! what are u doing dude?
M: yeh question to mujhe poochna chahiye.........what were u doing there?
P: maine kya kiya........I just said bye to her naa
M: haan haan.........achi tarah se jaanta ho ki tu kya kar raha tha.ab chal
Mayank and Purab leave to their homes.Nupur and Suhaani go to movie and on their way back to home
N: the movie was good naa?
S: yaa.....it was
N: acha.........why did Ms.Aha's class got cancelled?
S: Hmm.......princi said that she was not feeling well so she could not attend the college today
N: okk......to phir Maya.......I mean Purab kyun chala gaya? unki class bi cancel ho gayi hai kya?
S: Hmm.........pata nahi kyun Maya.....wahi Purab kyun chala gaya *winks 😉 *
N: okk......mera gahr aagaya haui byeee Suhaani
S: I know ki tumhara ghar aagaya hai.........byee n pls meri maa jyada soch ke apne mood off matkar......thank god aaj SRK ne tera mood theek kar diya............agar sochna hi hai to SRK ke baare mein soch "DOOSRON" ke baare mein nahi OK........take care dear byee
N: Byeee.........😊

BHUSHAN HOUSE (9;00 pm at Dinner table)
Everyone is silently having their dinner.Nupur is just not in a mood to eat and so her plate is full and has not even started to eat.Nupur's dad notices this n
Nupur's dad: Nupur beta........baat kya hai?
N: kuch nahi Bauji
ND: to phir tum khana kyun nahi kha rahi hoo?
N: woh bas aise hi.........mann nahi hai
NM: mann nahi hai?........Nupur kal raat bhi tune kuch nahi khaya tha beta.........teri tabiyat to theek hai na
N: haan maa.......I am fine
ND: to phir khao........iss tarah ann (food) ka apmaan nahi karte.Khao
Uday: Maa.........mujhe lagta hai ki Dids ko na pyaar ho gaya hai
Nupur is shocked and is just staring at Uday 😲
NM: Uday....yeh kya bakwaas kar raha hai?
U: haan maa..........saare movies aur serials mein aisa hi hota hai.........jab heroine ko pyaar ho jaat hai naa to woh na to kuch khaati hai aur nahi soti hai
NM: Chupp..!!! bekaar ki baatein band kar aur khana kha.........ye TV par ajeeb-ajeeb se shows dekh kar yeh ladka bilkul bigad gaya hai 😡
Nupur takes a breath of relief.Everyone finishes off their dinner and go to bed.Its almost 11 and Nupur is not sleeping yet and her phone rings.Its suhaani
N: Hello
S: soo rahi thi kya?
N: nahi........bol
S: I just called to tell you tat I will not be able to come to collage with u in the morning.I'll join u later after the break OK
N: kyaa??.........but why?
S: ahh..!!! nothing got soem work to do
N: Ohh...!!! nahi nahi........main akeli collage nahi jaaungi......main bhi tere saath baad mein hi jaaungi
S: pagal mat ban..!!! bachpan mei kya school bhi main tujhe chodne aati thi.........Nupur u have to go.........aur bina matlab ke tu apna class kyun gawayen?
N: Par........
S: Par war kuch nahi.......bye good night
N: Okk.......good night 😔(in a low voice)

Nupur thinking of the next day in collage goes to sleep.After her break-up everyone keeps on asking many question to Nupur that why did she n Mayank break-up and everyone thinks that Nupur might be wrong as Mr.Mayank Sharma cannot be wrong.But its suhaaani who alwayss used to save her from such questions soo she is now worried that what will happen tomorrow

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Thats it guyss for today.....hope you enjoyed reading it.I know its a very short but I promise to give u a big update next time.I wote it as fast as I could soo if u find any mistakes please ignore.

THEY REALLY MEAN A LOT TO ME............😊

Edited by yash.dilse - 15 years ago

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sriravali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

hi yash no need of saying sorry i know that u r busy and that's OK😉....c i am first to comment so u will not do what do u said naa???... 😉 i jus loved today's epi don't know why its sooo cute!!!