My Mr. A... (AR ff)NOTE Pg 148 - Page 18

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey saniya

awsum ff hun

i have read till part 3 yet

and i'm loving it

love ridzy and muskan they r hilarious!!😆😆😆

will read other parts soon

do pm me

-sanam-

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

heya sani jaan...!!

so u bak wid d updt...!!
hehehe...!!
i've nt even started writin d epi for JMM...!! :P

nyways cumin to d part...!!
d first part where ridzi meet his so called boss armaan...
it was so funny yaar...!!

n d whole para....after d convo b/w ridzi n armaan...cracked me up...!!

den mom kickin outta house....n homeless ridzi...!!
hehehehe...!!

n finally Mr.A....!!
lol...she doesn't noe abt dis but we do...ryt...!!
*wink*

do updt soon...!!

--radz--

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

fantastic 😊

Originally posted by: blessing-beauty

hey saniya

nice update

loved it

cont soon

n thanx 4 da pm

Originally posted by: ArmaansGirl

Aghhh the promo was rocking..sigh my mr.A...opps..ridzi's! D: 😭 dnt wnt to give him awy!! hi sad. aww am so solly that u don't want to give ur armaan away, but how bout if we all share him😆.

and yaar the upd8...nycccccx! :D lol the baldy's cabin! :p 😆 but u kno whats fuuni? i cnt imagine armaan giggling..lyk realli..laffing yes..mockin..yes...chuckling..yes..but giggling? NO! lol even i was imagining armaan gigglin. and it was funny to imagine that. and glad you find baldy's cabin bit funny. wonder how ridz will give respect to her boss?😆

its just not him yaar. giggling is so girl typz. sorry yaar, kk fine imagine him as grinnin kk. khush ab meri maa😆 armaan khanna? whaaaaaaaat? hmmm where this going girl? well tha's a raaz of armaan, u;ll soon find out bout it aswell.😉 and hahah poor thing it hurts that she kicked him? oopz...the plce that she kicked hurts! LMAO 😆 well ridzy is too hard for a girl, armaan should learn his lesson, but no armaan is armaan, now he wants to take his revenge. tch tch wonder if they r going to murder eachother or wat?😆

oohh i think pplz tke armaan for his money and all so hes gonna pretend to be some1 eelse...not the MR.Mallik...heir and all..i get get..!maybe maybe not.😉 :D hahaha pipez? wow ridzi..sadli we dnt hve pipes lyk that in cali! damn! D: so i never got to try that..sigh how sad is that? heheh ridzi...i dnt wanna die virgin aswell 😆 even u don't want to die as virgin😆. man u cracked me up and for having no pipes in cali, i think ur lover will regret more than u, how will he sneak into ur room😆.😉

aghhhhhhhh past life? reincarnation? now that is cool swtheart..thats cool! wow! didnt xpect that twist u kno cuz of the ff being so modern..but its better than i though! wow! ar in the past life huh? 😲 did i dissapoint u sweetheart with the whole past life thing? tell kk.

omgsh im crying! im crying 😭😭 that was so sad...arsh&radhika...where did u get the idea? wow. i was thinking one day that how come i always write 'A' around the house and the answer from my heart came 'reincarnation'. thats how i got the idea.

so beautifully swt..! wow i cnt w8 for the next part!thanks sadi sweety.

&boring?? ooof where in ur right mind did u find this boring? it was a complete shocker for me!!! 👏no its just that people usually prefer more AR scenes and this part was mostly Mr. A mystery, so i just thought that may be people might find it boring.😳 but thanks hun. ur comment made my day. always write loooong coments like this one kk. love u😳

-sadi

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

wow Saniya tht was an amazing part

first of all

i love Ridzi's banter wid herself

all is so cool

Armaan n Riddhima scene was awesome too

then, the Padma scene, hillarious as well as cute,

finally, the angel Riddhima, or Radhika, it was a touchy story

awesome over all

Originally posted by: coolgal96

OhhHhHhHHH...awesome yaar..
Plzzzzzzzz continue.....
Now tell us if Armaan also has the same dream
Plzzzz continue soon!

Originally posted by: aishar

woah man recarnation!!!! man i mean i m speechlesss. gr8!!

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

its a damn unique story......
i m loving it...my god.....now wats with the mangalsutra???
interesting...update soon

love
debadrita

Originally posted by: Tahmina96

Hey saniya jus read the intro...i wil edit my comment after catchin up wiv the parts

tnx for the pm

Tahmina😉