Mayur FF: Ek Duje Ke Vaste - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god koi mayank-sheena scenes nahi thae
i hope sheena realises that mayur are made for each other
jalddi yeh sheena ka chapter bas end ho jaye
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part
love Sheena getting jealous😉
i really love MayUr bond
waiting for ur next update
do continue soon
thxs for the pm😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Sresh

fab update
loved mayur a lot
they were really enjoying the tour
the beach scene and then resaurent scene was very nice
Loved caring mayank
awwww poor Sheeeena
mayank was totally ignoring her.....


good update sresh
waiitng for ur Dhamal................

update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow fab update
mayur were so adorable
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii shreyu...amazing updt
so mayank is really giving much important towards nupur
thats great...n sheena bad mood..lol...loved it!!
i hope mayur come more closer
n mayank doesnt propose sheena
lets see whats gonna happen
love yaa..mmuuaahh
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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay friends… I know some of you might be ready to kill me… Some might have forgotten me or at least, what was going on in this FF… 😆😆

So here is the small precap and story line:

Mayank-Nupur, meet for deciding their future, marriage. Mayank denied for marriage, but Nupur and Mayank became best of friends. Then Nupur went with Mayank and his friends to Goa to help Mayank with his love life with Sheena. Now, Sheena also comes to Goa, and is jealous of Nupur because of the friendship and understanding, Nupur and Mayank shares.

Next part is below this small precap…. Enjoy…

All of them finished their lunch.

M: Thank God! Kab ki bhukh lagi thi.

N: Sachhi…

Sh: Hmm…

Yuvi: Hey, guys… Let's have some fun. Let's go and see Goa! Come on!

Sid: Okay… But we will have to do some arrangements for bike, Yuvi…

Arman: Don't worry, dudes… Mene kal hi samne ek shop dekhi thi. They give bikes on rent. I had checked the fare. They are good enough. Let's go. Its not far away. Here, you can see the shop from here itself.

Benji: Okay then, let's get going, friends.

They all went to that shop. And boys checked the availability of bikes.

They wanted 5 bikes for 5 couples and one scooty for Nupur alone. But there were only 5 bikes. So Mayank told that he would manage triple seat with Nupur and Sheena.

They paid the rent and took the bikes from garage.

The girls were waiting outside. Sid-Tamanna, Yuvi-Naina, Benji-Simmy and Arman-Ridhima all sat on their bikes without hesitation. With Mayank, Sheena sat first and then Nupur climbed.

They started the race and enjoyed a lot. They reached the farthest beach from the place.

There was a nicely decorated cruise. They parked the bikes and went in that cruise.

They all had their dinner, and drinks.

Then everyone went to the dance floor.

They all danced on song It's the time to Disco… With fooltoo masti and enjoying. In the dance, Mayank and Nupur enjoyed a lot. Sheena was left alone for more time. And from Sheena's face, Nupur got a clear idea of what was going on in Sheena's mind. She started feeling guilty. Finally, it was 12:00 and the party finished. Then they went from there for their hotel.

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Sheena was removing her make up and applying cream.

Mayank came and sat on a hair besides her.

M: So?

Sh: Yes?

M: Bolo.

Sh: I am tired, Kal bat karege.

M: (Dejected) Okay. (Just then he realized that Nupur was not there. He got worried for her safety.)

Sheena combed her hair again.

M: Hey, bahar chale?

Sh: Abhi?

M: Haan.

Sh: Nope dear… I am really tired. Please…

M: Okay.

Sh: Tum jao, if you want to…

M: Haan? Sach?

Sheena nodded in yes. She thought Mayank was just joking, and he won't go without her.

But Mayank was on his feet by now. "Okay, me yun gaya, aur yu aya… Okay?"

Sh: Oh…ok…

Mayank took his handi cam and went outside of the room. Sheena went to bed quietly. She was upset because of Mayank's ignorance towards her.

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Mayank went outside of the hotel and looked here and there for Nupur. He found her sitting in the garden on a bench. Her back was facing him. He went from behind and put his hands on her eyes.

Nupur was startled by this act, but then a smile crossed her face. It can be only Mayank doing such childishness.

N: Mayank! Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Mayank sighed. He removed his hands off her eyes and came to sit besides her.

M: Kash kisi dusre ladke ka naam bol deti. Tumhe chidhane ka kitna maja ata yar!

N: He he… very funny…

M: Vese me uske liye itna soch kyo raha hu?

N: Vo hi to… Chhodo na!

M: Vo hi to! Mujhe sochne ki jaroor hi nahi he… Vese Nupur… Poorab kesa he?

N: MAYANK… I will kill you…

M: He he he…

N: Tum na, kabhi nahi sudhroge!

M: Hellow… Me bigda hi nahi. Okay?

N: Ya ya… right… (She smiles)

M: Itni late tak yaha kya kar rahi ho?

N: Vaha se jo samandar ki lehro ki awaz aa rahi he na! Vo hi sun rahi hu.

M: Wow! Miss Nupur Bhushan…

N: Kya hua?

M: That was the most FILMY dialogue of the millennium… I must say… Tumne filmy banne ki koi exam pass ki he kya?

N: MAYANK…

Nupur hits him lightly on his shoulder.

M: Okay, okay, sorry.

N: Hmm.

M: Hey, main baat to hum bhul hi gaye…

N: Kya?

M: Sheena kesi lagi tumhe?

N: Tum Sheena se kya bol ke aya ho?

M: Yu hi bahar ghumne jaa raha hu. Kyun?

N: Kyu ki… actually, Mayank. Mujhe lagta he ki…

M: Kya? Bolo na!

N: Mujhe lagta he ki, Sheena agar tumhe yaha mere sath dekhegi, to use accha nahi lagega!

M: Kya? Ye kon sa angle he? Esa kyun?

N: Kyu ki vo mujhe jyada pasand nahi karti.

M: Lekin kyun?

N: Of ho! Boys can be so idiots…

M: Bolo bhi yar.

N: Because she thinks ki tum mujhe pasand karte ho.

M: (Laughed) What? Listen, usko ye pata he ki me tumhe reject kar chukka hu… Ok?

N: Hmm…

M: Aur phir bhi esa sochti he, fir to pagal he vo. Lekin me Sheena ko janta hu. Vo esa soch hi nahi sakti he. Ok?

N: Listen. I am a girl. Aur in mamlo me, hum girls tum se jyada smart hoti he.

M: Tumhara bhashan sunne ka mann nahi he mera.

N: To kya mann kar raha he aap ka?

M: Vaha par vo pahadi he na?

Nupur looked at the mountain he was indicating. She had got her attention to that mountain she came here. But never told any one.

N: Haan…

M: Us pe chadh ke, us light house tak jane ka mann kar raha he…

She tried to show that she was indifferent by this offer.

N: To jao na!

M: To chalo…

N: Me kyun chalu?

M: Marr rahi ho tum vaha jane ke liye… I know, ok? Ab chalo.

N: Listen, tum Sheena ke sath aye ho, vo chahti hogi kit um uske sath raho…

M: Sheena ke sath to puri life padi he, he na?

N: Hmm

M: Lekin tum! Is ke baad hum kaha milenge?

Nupur didn't speak anything. (Or she couldn't respond at the thought of separation. 😉)

M: So chup chap chalo. Ok?

N: Haa. Chalo.

Now I can't write more… Sorry… Will try to update soon…

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Suggestions and criticism is welcome…

Love,

Shreyu

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks for PM.



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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update!
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome dear.🤗
all parts is too good.⭐️
pm me dear.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
update soon.

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