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gunjan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

awesome concept!!!!!!!!

add me to ur pm list and continue soon

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affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey dear me too in add me inur pm list...

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Tasnim

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

hey

nice concept.

do cont n pm me

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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

congo dear..
for a new FF
loved the ontro..cont soon..=)
love
prachi

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey plz continue nd pm me............

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simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

hey hi

fist off all congrats for this new ff , just read the intro

sounds really cool ,

wow mayur loved each other and got seperated , mayank hate her and she did that , hmm very interesting , and nupur is halat ?? , means ,

really would love to read it ahead doo try and update with this soon

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Hey nice concept
Im in ur pm list

THNX DEAR FOR LIKIN

U R IN MY PM LIST

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

hi frndz
sorry for not updating
but i will post 1st part tommorow

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

character sketch
mayank:

a well known computer engineer
a strict person
broken hearted
dont talk much
recently shifted to mumbai to join job

nupur bhushan

nyc girl but dont talk much
some problem is with her ( revealed as story go on)
a good bussiness woman

frndz this is short character sketch of my ff
with this some more character will be ther
samrat
gunjan
benji
mayank mom

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

part 1
mayank was in Bangalore and returned after two years with having a biggest pain in his heart
the pain was given by one girl whom he had loved a lot for whom he can cross any borders but alas! that girl deceived him
flashback
2 yrs before
mayank got admission to pursue his further studies he was too much happy he wanted to share his happiness with his love his life to whom he proposed one year before in college trip
mayank decided to call her and share this news with her but
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her cell was unreachable
he was worried for her a lot
weeks went by but nupur didn't called him
1 month later
a leter was delivered at mayanks house
it was from nupur......................
" hi ! i hope you r fyn hey ! congrates for getting admission in topmost university in bangalore you deserved it
(while reading it mayank felt so much happy he was feeling her in her letterbut next line mad him shocked)
mayank i admit you lov me a lot a lot and a lot but i dont love you
i justed acted to love you you know na nobody can win from me exactly that happens i confessed my love for you as a result of bet with samrat i never thought you as anything else hope that you will understand
pz dont get offended b/c it was just a bet and you will find better girl than me"
nupur
after reading this letter he was completely broken becoz he has dedicated his whole life for her and she left her alone it was a unbearable pain
m: kyun nupur kyun tum ne mere saath aisa kia lyun mjhe itna bara dukh diya maine to tum se sache dil se muhabat i thi but tum ne mjhe tor dia main hamesha kehta tha na k main kabhi tuut nhe sakta congrates nupur tum ne mjhe tor diya
till two days he was completely broken he didn't go out just limit himself to his house
afer two days
m: ab ye ansu aur nhe bahenge ab mein us bewafa k liye aur nhe rauga bus ab njhe aage barhna hai aur peeche kabhi mur k nhe dekhna

in these two years he never smiled he had now becum a rock who doesnt feel anything he was a complete angry young man but he was a succesful man
flash back ends

precap
mayank retuned to mumbai
sajans entry
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a biggest revelation abt nupur

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friendz i have updates first part hope u lyk it
it seems to be bit boring and sad but things will get better
do comment and hit lyk button
criticism is alway accepted