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Posted: 15 years ago

helo selo jee.....😛this iz my 1st ff on mayur...😳 i'll include other characters 4m mjht too....i'll post the characters...... right below....

the banner is awsomee...i know...cause its made by dolly....thnx dolly....luv ya a lot.❤️...

thnx mahi....luv ya loads...❤️..

they both r rockstars....👏😎

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Posted: 15 years ago

TITLE: SINCE AGES

CHARACTERS:

Mayank:he has noone....akela hai..ma-papa,bhai,behen koi nehi hai....bap ko khoyajanamki kuch mahine pehle....or maako,das saal ki umaar me...in short, akela tha akela hai..jab tak nupur nehi aa jati...

Nupur:patli sarir...bade or mysterious eyes..gane kale sundar baal..sansar kise kehte hai use maat pucho....uski life became hell after she came to live with his uncle....she was pressured to come....bt her life changed when she meet mayank.....

ok guys these r the main leads or character...😛

baki saree characters saamne ayenge jese jese kahani age jayegi...:)

hope u'll like this ff....:)

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyyyy nupur
Nice concept
Do continue soon
N add me to ur pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 1:

badii sii saapki tarha ak sarak dhan khet ki bech mese gujarti hai...

kehte hai kisi samrat ne yaha se gujarne ki waqt hazaaro majduro se banwaya tha ye sarak....

iske dono side pe bohot saare pipal ke per...patanehi kabse apni saar ko garbse uthaye huye khare hai ye per.....ye log jese sadiyose is ki raksha kar rahi ho...

khet ki bech se gujarta hua nazar ayega sirf paani or paani....isi paani me saar hilaye nach ti hai phool(water lily).........

subhah hone se pehle aspas ki gaon se bacche bhure sab ate hai.....ho jati hai phool torne ka compitition.....ise leker kabhi kabhi jagra, yaha tak ki maar pit v hoti hai....bazaar me bechne se 4 paisa milte hai...par kuch log aise v atee hai jinhe bechne ka sokh nehi hai...par phool torte hai....

Mayank, Nupur unhi mese hain.............

ye log ate hai raat dhalne ki baad.....jab asmaan mein taaree jagmaka tehe....chand ki dhimi roshni se ye log apni manzille dhond leti hai....nupur khari rehti hai....

mayank paani me utar jata hai....

phir dher saare phool lekar upar aa jata hai...baaki saab aane se pehle oha se chale jatee hain....

kuch der visrsm lete hai dono...

M:"bhudde ko agar pata chal gaya to wo mera jaan le lega"

N:"Iss main bhudde ka naak kat dungi"nupur kehti hai...

M:"naak katne se agar bhudda maar gaya to?"

N:"to acchi baat hai,,main panchi ki tarha urke apni ghar chali jaungi.."

uski haasi ki kil kariose puri digi gunjti hai...or mayank usei dekhti rahti haii...

(to be continued)