Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

omg am so happy that I was the first reader of this OS *grins*

LOL Like I told you already, It was beautifully written!

The poetic lines have great impact on the story.

really loved it loads

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Mehek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Hey Mahak..!

Its an awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee upd.

its simply awesomee..!

loved it to the core...!

thnx for the pm..!

do write more OS..!

-Mehek-

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

mahak honey wonderful update as these days we don't get mayur scenes in the show but u made my with mayur i can't express how much i loved ur ff. dear write more n we wait 4 ur update thank u so much love u

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Awwwwwwww Mahak

I just love the way u describe everything

n the peoms are great

so Nupur geeting married to Adhi

bhi she loves Mayank

and she realizes that while she is with Adhi when the priest askes her to take the vows

I am just in love this OS

sachi mein

Itzzz hard to describe this OS!

n then she runs to Mayank and then she says

that she married Adhi

awww and then he is completly heart boroken

and is about to go

when she stops him

and then tells him how much she loves him😳

Awwwwwwww

too cute😍

amazing work na Mahi🤗

-Lina-

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

very well written, actually till nearing the end i was like no, this one is gonna be sad but you made it have a happy ending.. it was soo good!

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jasmeet

@jasmeet khaneja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Wow that poem suited the situation so well.....

Loved ur update....

keep writing mayur one shot along with ur FFs...becaoz its nice to read something short and nice.

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Rafa.LunaPotter

@Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Wonderful!!!

Its totally perrrfect Mahi!!!

Great job!

The verses were really nice and full of meaning!!

It was really very very emotional also..and I totally loved it!

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shruti

@-Nymphadora-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

amazing OS...i loved the poetic lines in between...the style was awesum....good job!

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wind453

@wind453

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

mahak it was just awesome

fabulous work mahak

loved it

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#170

OMG mahak superb OS yar loved it to the core you deserve this 👏 you rock yar i mean the way you put all emotion of nup is superb yar thanks for sharing this OS with us and thanks for pm 🤗