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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one yaar'
u know what u can do is u can surprise party from armaan to ridhima aur wo bhi akele wali

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Nyc uptd!! Love it =D
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sammy,sorry shayad last part me comments nahi kar payi..actually a little busy and net prob...anyways nice part...arman to jarur apne 1st anniversary mein ridhz ko surprise party dega...i am sure...cont soon dear...
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soryyy f4r sooo late reppp..
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hiii
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r sooo cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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i'm so sorry guys i know bahut time hoagya update kiye...but laptop kharab hochuka hai...hope back up miljaye..aur mera laptop jo repairing ke liye specially delhi gaya hia sahi salaamat wapas pooore back up ke saath jaldi hi aajaye... but then i thought mein computer se update karti hu..so maine chotasa part update kiya hai..hope you guys will enjoy


part 30 (1st installment)

Mallik mansion

Ri:armaan...armaan

Ar:hmmm

Ri:kya hmmm...chodo mujhe aur utho kitni subah hogayi hai

Ar:nai hui koi subah... sone do.

Ri:armaan plz dekho 11 bajte aaye ...uthona abhi

Ar:ummhmmm

Ri:accha mujhe toh chodo.

Ar(tightening his grip):woh toh aur bhi nai

Ri:armaan

Ar;sone dona basket..maine humare liye half day liya haina.

R:still utho...armaan?...abhi!!!

Ar:umm..sone dona

Ri:armaan

Ar:hmm jaan

Ri:armaan

Ar:hmm jaan

Ri:armaaan

Ar:jaan

Ri:utho

Ar:nai..sone do

Ri:armaan

Ar:thanx...sone do

Ri:huh?...armaan

Ar:

Ri:arr...so gaya.pagal meri koi baat nai manta'armaan tum abhi nai uthe toh..toh ..main tumse baat nai karungi..armaan'.kuch nai bola😕...fine ..bye...mujhse baat mat karna tum

Riddhima uthkar chali jaati hai...to take her bath

Wapas aati hai tabhi bhi armaan soya rehta hai.

Riddhima glares at his sleeping form

Ri:huh..abhi tak nai utha.

She goes from there

one hour later

Kitchen

Ri;nai utha na...theek hai main bhi armaan se koi baat nai karne wali aur yeh sab jo banaya hai ...yeh toh smell karne bhi nai dungi😡...nai nai😕..armaan ko kitni bhuk lagi hogi..kahana khane dungi...bas baat nai karungi..thode der ke liye hi ofcourse😳...waise bhi kal armaan ne kitna accha arrangement kiya tha ...uss sab ke wajahse itna kum kardungi ki bas baat nai karungi..phir usse jo bhi karna hia kare.

Then she starts thinking about the surprise given by her beloved husband on their wedding anniversary..the day before.

ri:Aur kahan mein yeh soch kar darr gayi thi ke kahin armaan humari anniversary na bhul jaye.

Ar(hugging from behind):hi..jaan.

Ri:aagaye tum😡...I mean..(she starts making a plate for him)

Ar:array jaan kya hua😕...okay.😊

Ar(thinking):kya yaar basket..aaj half day liya ki..kal ki surprise aaj bhi continue karenge...aur tum ho ki ...😕

Ar:umm..jaan...breakfast bahuuut acha banaya hai.😃

Riddhima just smiles at him

Ar:come on basket aise nai karte.😕

Ridzi glares at him.

Ar:array ab kal surprise ke baad mein bhi..aur kitna kaam kiya tha😉 ...tum kaise nai thaki 😉...god knows

Ri:armaan.😳

Ar:finally😃..so tum ab mujhse baat kar rai ho..right.😊

Ri:wrong😡..waise armaan besharmi ki hadd hoti hai.

Ar:what besharmi ..main apni wife se kal raat ke surprise ke baaremein hi toh puch raha tha😉.

Ri:haan haan malum hai😡..aur actual mein jo pucha uska'😳

Armaan ka phone baje lagta hai.

Ar:ek minute haan.😕

Ri (nodding her head):hmm

Riddhima then again starts thinking at previous night.

previous morning

ri:armaan utho...armaan!..armaan? (moving her hand on his side)yeh kahan gaya?..armaan ..armaan

armaan comes out from washroom

ar:kya baat hai jaan uthne se pehle hi armaan jaap shuru.

ri:tum kahan gaye the?

ar:naha raha tha..shave kar raha tha..kyun?

ri:armaan abhi sirf 8 baje hain.

ar(brushing his hair):haan i know

ri(getting up from bed):armaan tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na...itne jaldi uth gaye

ar:yaar neend khulgayi so uth gyaa.

ri:oh.

ar:accha basket tum tyaar hoke aajao.i'm going

ri:par armaan...(armaan was already gone)

ri:bhulgaya na...mera darr sahi tha...well main toh yehi daalungi.


she goes down.armaan and prem were busy in files.

ri:hi buddy

pr:hi.

ri:armaan kya khana hai woh toh bolo.

ar(busy in his file)umm..kuch bhi banalo...ok noodles banalo

ri:hmm..aur buddy tum?

pr:poonam alreadypahunchgayi snadwhiches.

ri:okay.

kitchen

ri:poo...kya chal raha hai?

poo:sandwiches bangaye..aur haan maine noodles wahan nikal ke rakhe hian.

ri:thanx..she turns from there.

poo:ab jab tak tu aur armaan ek dusre ko wish nai karoge (turning towards her)toh humlog kaise karenge hmm?

ri:but...(poonam hugs her)

poo:bas.

ri:thanx.

poo:kya muh latka ke baithi hai...sham tak yaad aajayega..pakka.

ri:i hope so.

woh log breakfast leke jate hain.

on idnning table.

armaan aur prem kaam ki baatein karne mein lage rehte hian.

poo:kya kaam ki baatein laga rakhi hain..shanti se kao na.

ri:haan armaan itna kya kaam?

ar:basket aaj company jaane ki fursat nai milegi isliye abhi karke le raha hoon.

poonam signals riddhima...ridzie becomes happy.

ri:accha...kyun aisa kya kaam hai?

ar:woh aaj sanjeevani mein bahut kaam hia.

ri:oh

poo:okay guys main chalti hu.

ar:basket tum nai jaa rahi?

ri:nai maine aaj chutti li hia.

ar,pr:kyun?

ri:aise hi.

ar:basket tabiyat wagere...

ri:nai armaan ...bas aaj jaane ka mood nai hai so...isliye

she also goes from there

AR's room

ri:haan di.

anjie:happy wedding anniversary dear

ri:thanx.

anjie :kya hua?...don't tell me aaj bhi bekar ki behes leke baithe ho dono.

ri:nai aisa kuch nai hai..abhi uthi na isliye.

anjie:ok chal bye...and enjoy...chutti toh waise bhi le rakhi hai

ri:hmm bye...kya enjoy karun di..meri toh chutti waste hojayegi..

armaan comes there

ar:accha jaan bye main chalta hoon.

Ri;armaan

Ar:hmm

Ri:bye'aur..kuch nai

Ar:ok bye.

He goes from there.

Ri ab main kya krungi ghar pe.

Half and hour later

Riddhima baithi baithi bore ho rahi thi

Ri:mujhe chutti leni hi nahi chahiye thi'armaan abhi sanjeevani gaya hai..main bhi chali jaati atleast humlog ek jagah par toh rehte

Ting tong

Ri:uff ab yeh kaun aagaya

She opens the door but only finds a bouquet placed on doorstep

Ri:yeh kaun chodke gaya?..kaun hai?

Ar(holding her from behind and whispering):main.. aur kaun?

Ri:armaan'tum'sanjeevani nahi gayee?

Ar:sanjeevani nai mood nai hua

Ri:aur who kyun

Ar:achtually meri duties cancel hogayi'toh socha apni jaan ko hi khush karlun

Ri:bas?

Ar:haan ..toh chalo ghumne chaltee hian

Ri:ok

They went for shopping and bought many many things for each other

Ri:armaan bas abhi main thak gayi ..aur bhuk bhi lagi hai

Ar:ok then pass hi mein restraint hai wahan chalte hain ok

Ri:ok

While having there food

Ri:accha armaan aaj kuch hai toh nahi na ..i mean aaj tum wapas ghar aagaye aur humlog ghumne bhi aaye..toh?

Ar:just a lucky day jaan..warna humhe time spend karne bhi kahan milta hai.

Ri:hmm..(dhat tere ki 'maine socha ki armaan ko yaad hai..janab ko toh kuch bhi yaad nahi hai)

Ar:ok so aur kuch shoping karni hai

Ri:nai bas

Ar:ok..kahin ghumne jaana hai

Ri:umm.(shrugging her shoulders)

Ar:ok 'dekhte hain'tum chalo main aata hoon

He made a call and goes to riddima

Ar:chalein

They sit in car and start towards their home

Ar:jaan main soch raha tha ki aaj jaake maa aur nani se mil lete hain..what say?

Ri: (thinking)oh no agar ghar gaye toh mumma aur nani anniversary ki wishes denge toh armaan ko bura lagega na) ..umm nai mera aaj mood ,phir kabhi jayenge

Ar:nai na jaan aaj jayenge plz

Ri:arrey par

Ar:chalo yeh sara saamaan ghar par rakhte hain aur chalte hain

Ri:ok fine'(I just hope maa aur nani bhi anniversary bhul gaye hian)

They reach gupta house

Ar:nani'.maa..kaise ho aap log?

Na:hum toh theek hian beta'.(armaan takes her blesings)jeete raho..aa riddhu

Ri(hugging her):hi nani..kaise ho?

Na:theek hu.

Ar(taking her blesssings):aur maa aap?

Pa:main bhi theek hoon..jeete raho'riddhu kaisi hai?

Ri(hugging her):main theek hu maa..app kaise ho?

Pa:main bhi theek hu.

Ar:waise ladies lagta nahi ki app dono se milke riddhima se jyada main khush ho raha hoon..n I thought riddhima bhaut khush hogi.

Na:arey beta ab humse milke khushi thode hi milegi'uski saari khushi toh tujhmein hi raheg abse.

Ri:aisa kuch nahi hai nani..yeh armaan na ekdum se leaaya isliye'

Pa:par achanak le aaya toh tujhe toh aur bhi excited rehna chahiye?

Ri:maa who aaj specially chutti li haina itna thak jaati hoon daily kitna kaam rehta hai isliye shayad

Na:who toh hai..par doctor bane ho toh yeh sab toh hoga hi na.

Ri:hmmm

Ar:kya nani aap toh bol rahe ho jaise main toh hospital jaata hi nahi

Ri:armaan

Na:bas armaan kyun ched raha hia

Ar:ok.

They have their time 'talking about many things

Ar:accha ab chalte hain sham hone aayi

Ri:haan abhi chalna chahiye

Pa:accha ek minute ruko.

She brings a gift for them

Ri(thinking):oh no yeh zaroor anniversary gift hoga'gaye kaam se

Ar:arrye maa yeh kya?

Na:yeh meri aur Padma ki taraf se tumlog ke liye tofha

Ri:par isski kya zaroorat thi I mean

Ar:haan aaj toh kuch khas baat bhi nai hai

Pa:haan par phir bhi aise hi ..mann kiya gift dene ka'nai loge

Ri:nai mumma aisa kuch nai hai

Ridzie has tears in her eyes(kisi ko bhi salgiraah yaad nahi hai..muma aur nani ko bhi nahi)

Na(hugging her):arrey beta roti kyun hai

Nani and Padma glare at armaan and he makes a bechara face

Pa:kya hua riddhu

Ri(hugging her):kuch nai bas aise hi.

Ar:ja..i mean riddhima kya hua ..theek hona?

Ri:hmmm..chalo chalte hian (gahr pahunchte hi armaan ko boldungi ki aaj anniversary hia humari baadmein dhyana gaya toh use bhi bura lagega)

Ar:you sure?...ok maa,nani chalte hian humlog

Na,pa:ok bye bachoon

They go from there

Car mein dono bhi baat nahi karte hain

Riddhima apni hi dhun mein thi

Ri:armaan humlog ab kahan jaa rahe hain

Ar:tum bas chalo jaan'u trust me right

Ri:haan I trust u par jaa kahan rahe hain?

Ar:wahan pahunch ke bata ta hoon

Ar:hmm..ab yeh blind fold tumahri aank pe bandhne do.

Ri:kyun?

Ar:jaan..thats it..suno na.

Ri;ok fine

Armaan covers her eyes and takes her to the place

Ri;pahunchgyae kya?

Ar:hmm..kholo aankhein.

Ri:armaan..

Armaan was on his knee with a red rose

Ar:happy wedding anniversary jaan.

Ri:oh armaan..happy wedding anniversary ..tumhe yaad tha.

Ar:so tumhe kya laga..main apni life ka itna important din bhul jaunga.

Ri:humari life ka..

Ar:hmm..so dinner

Ri:sure..yahan aate aate dinner time bhi hogaya.

They enjoy there dinner

Ri:so tumhe suabh se dhyana tha ki aaj anniversary hai..aur phir bhi mujhe pareshan kar rahe the..bad guy.

Ar:arrey jaan subah se nahi ek week se yeh sab plan karne mein laga hoon.

Ri:aur mujhe laga ki tum anniversary bhul gaye ..i'm sorry

Ar:comeon jaan tumne is baat ke liye tumne mujhse jhagada bhi nahi kiya..and I thought ki gussa kar kar ke thak jaugi.

Ri:armaan..itne din se tumhe kaam hi kitna rehta tha'toh maine socha ki shayad kaam ke chakkar mein bhulgaye.

Ar:to be precise jabse honeymoon se wapas aaye time hi nahi mila..hmm..btw shadi ke baad tum mein itna change aagya hai ki ab tum jhagada nahi karti.

Ri:armaan'maar khaoge.

Ar:heehehe'dance

Ri:hmm.

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Naa koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath

Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath

Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin

Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin

Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ri:accha par ghar gaye the tab maa,nani ne wish nahi kiya..

Ar:haan jaan who mera hi kaam tha 'nani,maa ne kaha tha ki humse milna hai ,par maine bola apne plan ke baremein toh yeh decide hua ki wish nahi karenge par gift dedenge.

Ri:aur tumhe sharam nahi aati..ruladiya na mujhe.

Ar:sorry jaan

Ri:chalo gift dekhte hain

Ar:hmm.

They open the gift

Ri:aww'kitna accha haina.

Ar:hmm.

Ri:btw meri gift

Ar:accha aur meri gift?

Ri:tumahri koi gift nahi hia.

Ar:haan toh tumhari bhi nai ha

Ri:accha ok 'ghar chalo deti hoon

Ar:oh ho aisa kya hai😉?

Ri:armaanEmbarrassed shut up aisa kuch nahi haiAngry

Ar:so unromantic

Ri:EmbarrassedAngry

Mallik mansion

Ri:arrey yeh dono kahan gaye?

Ar:rehne dona..btw mera gift?

Ri:laayi baba laayi

Ar:awww'thanx jaan.

Ri:ur welcome..ab meri gift?

Ar:kaunsi?

Ri:armaan

Ar:ok..kal milegi tumari gift

Ri:par

Ar:basket..bas kal tak ka intezaar'now don't disturb me.

present
Ar:hey bhagwan'

Ri:kya hai armaan

Ar:shaddi ko bas .only ek saal hua aur tum mujhse bore bhi hogayi'kiske baaremein soch rahi ho?

Ri:apne gift ke baaremein ..jo abhi tak nahi mila'armaan I want my gift right now.

Ar:ok laata hoon..relax

Ab gift app sab bataiye..mujhe toh koi idea nahi aaya.

Love

sammy

pm list on pg 86...agar pm chahiye toh just check ki pm post ko like kiya toh hiana..nai kiya hai toh like that post😊


love

sammy

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nice update.. 😳

Edited by m4manju - 14 years ago
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Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
AR Sooo cute
Love them
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice :)
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice 2 ffs update in 2 day.like it😃.keep postin frquently

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