My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#221

awesome!!!

sweety just loved this part!!

update soon

pebbzzz

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Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#222

pooja
amazing update yaar
nupur was so caring
she always care for everyone
love her for this
Adhiraaj propose to suhani
cool yaar
and the dopatta scene was awsome
ab nupur mayank ka assistant banegi
ab dekhte hai keya hota hai
pls do cont soon

Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#223

it was brilliant....loved it to da coree....

eagerly waiting 4 da next update....

continue itt s0000000000000n......

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shweta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#224

wow super duper update....i loved the way how nupur made adhiraj propose mayank....n now ayank and nupur have to work together....hmmm....i hope even nupur starts developing feelings for mayank....thanks for the pm n cont soon

Love,

Shweta

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Mahima

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#225

itna chota update tha.....

i mean mere liye bahut chota hai......

i can never get enough of your ff.......

i simply love it.......

the update was awesome......

glad you were able to update.......

mayank's jealousy was so cute.......

nupur is a perfect friend......

she helped adhiraj, suhani and sumit.......

loved the canteen mayur fall scene......

mayur garden talk was so cute.......

and the best was the last part......

continue soon

luv

mahima

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#226

That was a really nice update... Do continue PMing..

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#227

Hey that was beautifully written, its really hard to find such great friends, I am so proud of N, would love to read ahead, i was also the editor of my law school's paper, wowwww it reminds of the old days man. They aren't really that old hehe.

Keep up the good work!

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT
Loved the update a lot. Hope to have more of Mayur now that Mayank is the editor of the newspaper and Nupur his assistant😊

Please update soon and do PM me.

Alisha xxx

hey
thank u so much
yeah, now even i am hoping for more Mayur
i'll update soon
pooja