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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

oh aru...🤗...this is just perfect :D
u r a fab fab fab writer.........:)
I m glad u started the ff...:)
awesome 🤗

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Aru awesome FF 👍🏼

Mayank is a football player !! 😳

very well written !! .........continue soon !! 🤗

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

superb...continue it soon...plz pm me when u update it...😃

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

i really love this ff!

wow yaar!

u wrote it sooooooooooooooooooo perfectly.......

especially these lines

"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground
Neither believed in the existence of true love"

and i loved them to the core.......

then i loved how u described things.....

Woh baat jo hotho se kaha nahi jatha
Jise Nighahoon main chupa jaata
Jo Khawboon main hothi hain
Jise dekh kar bhi dekha nahi jaatha
Jise sunke bhi, suna nahi jaatha
Woh -

wow!

and mayank a player?

wow!

and he seemed so nice with her.......

that's grt!

loved it hun!

do update soon and do pm me....

love,
Mahak

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

gr8 start dear...👍🏼.
luvd d 1st part....👏
especially Mayur's 1st convo..☺️
pls continue soon...🤗
-supriya

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shinz

@shinz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

awww it was so cute aru!!!!

me wants to read more!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

The strt was jus fab

Loved it

Liked the way Nups was defining Mayu wen he was playing football

Liked their meeting

Mayu's helping nature n Peeping also😆

Liked their intro part a lot

Mayu is he football cahamp

Loved all

Update soon plzzzzzzzzzzz

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Hey Aru awesum start dear
i am in love with this.
n the starting lines
"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground

Neither believed in the existence of true love

He was the Rockstar
She was the ultimate Drama Queen

When Mr. Nerd meets Miss Popular,
There starts the roller-coaster ride
Of many fuzzy events!

One meeting lead to another and another
Entwining them to step up together "

these lines are awesum.....amazing i mean
n then finally 1st part........that was too good......Mayank si basket ball player that sounds good. I mean its different na not like basket ball everywhere waise i myself love playing basketball.😆 N loved the Mayur meeting, a genuine one n realistic also, not bumping n all which happens everywhere in my ff also....😆 look i am making fun of me.......😆 that poetry lyrics were just too good........👏👏
n what u have written u were inspired by Rabi, Sanu, n Divz di........Sanu and Divya are awesum writer.......but Rabi, who? Actually my name is also Rabi na so i was confused.......i know i know its not me...... actually i can't be that as i know how much good am i.....opps sorry worst.....😆😆

Well Aru it was amzing start......i loved it
do cont soon.........i am anxious to read further.......😉😊

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Aranya

such cute update yaar

first time when nups sees mayu she already finds him cute...........

hes her partner.............

he helps her

and now they are friends

how cool can that be.............

it was real good update

yaar

waiting for manyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy moe to come yaar

lovely update

thanks for the pm

love pebo

Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago