World is too small Mayur SS Part2 pg 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi frnds i apperaed for 12th boards this tim so i got an SS idea on MAYUR
Funny na while giving borads i got this idea
It will be short stry may be of 3 to 4 parts or more if u'll liked it

CS
Mayank Sharma
Working in a company as MD
He is dedicated towards work
He loves one gal

Nupur Bhushan
The only gal of Bhushan's
Completed her career fashion desinging
Now is jus having rest she dosent work buit design clothes for her family n frnds
She does gets job offers but she says she is at rest

Baki all characters are same u'll get here Nupurs mum n dad also
They stay in Mumbai so nups is lil Modern gal

CS:Pg 1
Part1:Pg 1
Part2:Pg 3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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MM:Mayu's Mum
M:Mayu

MM:Mayu r u reday
M:Haan Maa but dnt u thk its too early for mr too marry
MM:Just shut up u said i can do wat evr i want so i'm doing it
Mere beta shaadi se darte hai mujhe sharam aarahi hai
M:Stop it Maa tumhare filmy dialogue nahi sunaa hai mujhe
MM:Abhi biwi aayi nahi aur abhi se mere dialogues se chid hogai pata nahi jab biwi aayegi toh mujhe yaad bhi rakhega ki nahi
M:Dekha Maa mein isiliye keh raha tha Shaadi ka idea Drop karte hai
MM:Acha bachu meri Billi mujhe hi se Meow
Chal jaldi wo log intezar kar rahe honge
M:Tum nahi manogi haina Maa
MM:Teri hi Maa hoon Chal
They left frm there
it was a bunglow
M:Maa tumne kuch zyada Rich ladki pasand nahi kar li Matlab we stay in buliding of two bedroom hall n she has a bunglow
MM:Beta she is my frnd n she knws u very well so dnt worry
Aur mere beta kisi hero se kam hai kya jo use Rich ladki na mile
M:Haan wo to hai chale
They enter in they r welcomed very nicely
Mayu remembers that he had to cum to this house wen he was in4th std for Diwali might be
That tim a gal frm this house hurted herself frm crackers n the whole Mumbal city Doctors were here to treat her
She might be full of attitude ego n too fashionable
I dnt thk mujhe pasand aane wali hai
Gal's mum:Beta khade kyu ho baitho na
M:Ji haan
He sits
GM:I'll jus call her
MM:Sure im jus waiting to meet her does she remember me yet
GM:Lets c
GM shouts frm down:Nupur Nupur cum down guest are here
Nupur:Yes mum cuming
Nupur cums down setting her duppta
She was busy but wen she looked up she had a big smile on her face
She jus left all her dupptta n shuppta n cam running towards me
I was hell shocked matlab why she is running towards me hop she dosent Hugs me warna Maa toh mujhe chida chida ke mar dalegi
While MM was seeing Mayu's expession n similing
Nupur jus cam running n Hugged MM
Mayu was now more confused n shock
Why is she hugging my mum
N wen Myau saw his mum he culd see that Smile that teasing smile he understood that MM saw his expression wen this gal wats her name haan Nupur was running towards her
MM:Hi beta how r u mujhe laga tum mujhe bhool gayi hogi
N:Appko bhoolana mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai
Mayu was lik ek aur filmy
Maa toh apni copy ko meri biwi banani ki soch rahi hai
While Mayu was feeling left out as MM n Nups were going on chatting lik Old Frnds
Mayu faked a cough
Its than wen Nups noticed Mayu
She gav him a qusetioning look at which MM said:Ye mera beta hai
N:Acha ye aapka beta hai wohi Sdau akdu bilkul non filmy haina n winked at MM
MM jus nodded her head in agreement n they strted laughing N
Mayu's mouth went open how culd she knw abt me matalb im not sadu akdu but this is wat mum says me n how she knws it and that wink i remember taht wink i had sen her sumwhr but whr
Whl MM n Nups again strted their chat n Mayu had a smile on his face
He remembered her yes he had seen her sumwhr
Than MM said to Nups why dont u spend sum tim wit my Sdau beta i wanna talk to ur mum sumthg
N:Sure aunty
Mayu gavs sadu look to his mum n Nups sees it
N:Dnt worry Mr i wnt eat u im cautious abt my health
MM:Its Mayank Nupur aur Mere beta daar pok nahi hai haina Mayu
N:Mayu oye hoye
Mm laughs n Myau says
M:Maa mujhe Mayu mat bulao
MM n Nups togther say: Kyu n laugh n Nups says itna cah naam hai Mayu Mayu
Mayu gets irritated n walks out to the garden
MM to Nups:Jus take care of him ill be back
MM:Sure aunt
MM goes to meet Nups mum n Nups walks towards Mayu


Ok dis is the strt how do u'll felt after reding it do tell me


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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwesome start
conti soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwwwwwwwwesome start

conti soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Sure will cont soon
Thanx for liking it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kiddo
its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice
i just loved it
i m so proud of u that u r my little sis
akher apne di ka kuch to asar huya na . he he he 😆
i m just kidding yaar
u r an amazing witer
I loved the hole update
thoroughly enjoyable part
shilpa unty and nups was awsome
darr lagraha hai ke shaadi ke baad dono milkar
mayu ka keya haal karega
pls update soon
i m eagerly waiting 4 the next part
dont b late
love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 start...continue it soon....do pm me...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey afsha
wah wah 👏
what an amazing start
i just loved it
mayus mom and nups convo was wonderful

oh no u stopped at crucial point.
i want to know about mayur convo.

fantastic update dear.
Plz update soon.
and add me to ur pm list.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start plz add me to pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I rili liked the part .plz continue nd pm me............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start

i loved it.....

do continue soon and pm me.....

love,
Mahak

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