Mayur SS Part 23pg 98 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
plzzzzzzz jaldi update karo

im dyin to read it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome dear.šŸ‘..
it was really very cute😳....
kash cv's bhi aise scenes include karte 4 mayur....
waitin desperately 4 d next part..😊.
luv u lots.šŸ¤—..
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Edited by mjhtmayurluver - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome work dear ..............šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
sorry for replying late
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so nice really liked it to the core

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awesome OS dear...yaar koi ye idea humare CVs ko bhi de do so dat dey cn show sum senseful episodes..šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
part 3
Nupur was in the kitchen preparing breakfast while mayank was getting ready for college. He comes down and saw nupur in the kitchen. He slowly without making noise moved inside the kitchen and hugged nupur from back and placed his chin on her shoulder.

"I Love You nupur" said mayank kissing her cheek

"Aaj subha subha tumhe kya hogaya hai mayank, ek minute kal ke bukhar ka sideeffect to nahi hai naa" said nupur jokingly and then facing mayank and checking his forehead. Just then she saw that there was no distance between her and mayank and saw mayank staring at her passionetly. She lowered her eyes.

"Nupur tum sharmate hue bohot aachi lagti ho" said mayank moving close to nupur. He then removed the strand falling on her face.

"Mayank woh '"

" meri sabzi , meri sabzi jal gayi" shouted nupur and switched off the gas.

"Mayank dekha tumhare wajh se meri sabji jal gayi" said nupur shouting at mayank

"Nupur tumhari sabji puri tarah se to nahi jal gayi naa" said mayank

" aur waise aap mujhe bataygi ki maine kya kia jo tumhari sabji jal gayi" asked mayank with naughty smile.

"Woh tum 'tum" said nupur moving back onestep while mayank moved forward one step

"Haan nupur main kya" said mayank moving forward while nupur moved one step back and hit the wall.

" Woh tum .. tum mujhe nahi pata tumne kya kia par tumhari wajah se meri sabji jal gayi" said nupur looking down.

"Aacha to ab galti ko sudharni bhi hogi" said mayank moving more closer to nupur and kissed her.

Just than the door bell ringed. Mayank just wanted to kill the person spoiling such a wonderful moment he went and open the door just to see uday standing there. Uday came inside while the gang entered after uday.

"Uday tumne humesha galat time pe aane me Phd ki hai kya" said mayank in irritating tone.

"Hi nupur breakfast me kya banaya hai" asked uday sitting on the table ready to have breakfast. The others too made there way to the table. Nupur served the breakfast to every one. She too sat besides mayank. They were having breakfast when mayank caught nupur's hand under the table. Nupur tried to free he hand but in vain.

"Mayank haat chodo" whispered nupur trying to free her hand

"yeh haath chodne ke liye thodi naa thama hai" said mayank and winked while nupur blushed

After the breakfast the whole gang went to the college. After the college the whole gang came to mayank's house as nupur called them while mayank was busy wth his job in the college.

"Nupur kya baat hai tumne hume aise aachanak kyun bulaya" asked dia worriedly

"Woh kal mayank ka birthday aur main use ek surprise dena chahati hoon, isliye tumhe bulaya" said nupur

"thik hai nupur hume karna kya hai" asked samrat

" kuch nahi bus kal mayank ko koi wish mat karna maine us ke liye birthday party arrange ki hai aur haan is baat ka khyal rakhna hi mayank ko yeh baat pata naa chale" said nupur just then her cell buzzed.

"Haan maa to aap kal aa rahi hai naa maine yaha sab ready kar diya hai" said nupur excitingly

"Sorry beta kal mujhe leave nahi mili but ek good news hai main agle mahine Bombay shift ho rahi hoon permanently meri promotion ho gayi hai aur don't worry main kal raat ko party ke waqt mayank ko wish kar doongi" said mm

"Thik hai maa aap apna khyal rakhna" said nupur

"Aur tum aapna aur mayank" said mm

Next day

Mayank woke up in the morning with the hope every one would wish him.

He went to kitchen and saw nupur making cake.

"Nupur aaj kuch special hai kya jo tumne cake banaya hai" asked mayank thinking may be nupur would wish him

"Haan who kya hai naa aaj ddlj ko release hue pure 15 saal ho gaye naa is liye" said nupur trying to hise her smile

"DDLJ yaad hai par mera birthday nahin" mumbled mayank

" Mayank kuch kaha" asked nupur still controlling her laughter

"Hum college ke liye late ho rahe hai" said mayank

Mayank sitting in the room was looking at the phone thinking may be mm would call her. But there was no call. Mayank thought may be mm was busy so she forgot to call him Both went to the college. Mayank thought may be the gang would remember his birthday but no one wished him. After the college whole gang came to mayank's house and started decorating it. It was 7.00 in the evening mayank's time to come. They switched of the light. Mayank entered the house and saw lights off so he went and switched on the light to see biggest surprise of his life.

"Happy birthday mayank" said nupur and kissed mayank on his cheek

"Happy birthday mayu" said mm on the phone which was on loudspeaker

the whole gang wished him. Soon nupur took mayank to change his cloth.

"Nupur yeh sab lekin tumne yeh sab kiya kaise" asked mayank

"Woh actually maine har mahine kuch paise save kar rahi thi tumhare birthday ke liye.main tumhara yeh birthday special banana chahti thi" said nupur and mayank just stared at his wife.

Both came down. Both were looking stunning and hot in white.(they were wearing the same outfit as in sajda song)

Mayank cut the cake and fed every one. Nupur was chatting with her college mates when suddenly the lights went.

"Hey guys this song is dedicated to the one who is my life. Ek aisa insaan jisne mujhe jeena sikhaya , jisne meri zindagi main aake meri zindagi badal di aur meri life main khushiya le aayi. Ek aisi ladki jo aaj meri zindagi hai , jo meri har baat bina bataaye samajh jaati hai , aur har kadam pe jisne mera saath dia hai who jo agar meri zindagi main naa ho to shayad main bhi naa rahoon . This song is for you nupur" said mayank while nupur was overwhelmed

Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra

Come around' it's time to baby
Come around..
Come on now' come around'
It's time to baby' come around
Come around' come around

Khwaabon bina, nigahen meri jee rahin thi

Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi
Ohhh yehhh'
Khamosh tha honthon pe baatein nahin thi
Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi
mayank moves towards nupur and starts singing around her
Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan
Tum mile toh har pal hai naya
Tum mile toh sabse hai' faasla
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya' hai khuda he points his finger towards her and sings
Come around' it's time to baby
Come around..
Come on now' come around'
It's time to baby' come around
Come around' come around
the whole gang joins mayank while nupur look down shyly

Palken moondein chaahat meri so rahi thi
Khushboo hawaaon mein thi
Maine nahin mehsoos ki
Mmm mm.mm
Jaane kahaan bahaaren meri khil rahi thi
Khushboo hawaaon mein thi
Maine nahin mehsoos ki

mayank again moves around nupur, he then trwils her around. now nupur's back is against mayank's chest while mayank places his hands around nupur's waist and rests his chin on her shoulder and nupur just blushes.
Tum mile toh mehki baarishen
Tum mile toh jaagi khwaahishen
Tum mile toh rangon ka hai silsila
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda
both remember the rain scene after their confession and again trwils her.

Ta ra ra.. ta ra ri re' ta ra ra

Tune duaaein suni
Dil ki sadaiyen suni
Tujhse main maangu aur kya
Tujh bin adhura hun main
Tere sang poora hun main
Karta hun tera shukriya

mayank moves towards nupur and sits on his knees. he then takes her hand closes his eye and then kisses it remembering the way nupur supported him
Kaise kahoon, kaise kahoon'
Kaise kahoon'kaise kahoon'
Kaise kahoon lamhe mujhe choo rahe hain
Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai
Ohh hooo
Kaise kahoon dil mein nayi aahaten hain
Aisa laga hain inmein tera hi toh ehsaas hai
nupur makes him stand and cups his face and hugs him and cry's mayank too hugs her.
mayank makes her look at him , cups her face and wipes the tears and then kisses her on her forehead.
Tum mile toh mera dil gaya
Tum mile toh sab kuch mil gaya
Tum mile toh logon se kya vaasta
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya hai khuda
he then then takes her in the middle and both dance with nupur resting her head on mayan's chest while mayank's hands around her waist

Come around' it's time to baby
Come around..
Come on now' come around'
It's time to baby' come around
Come around' come around
Come around

hope you like it

plz do reply

and tell me whether i should continue it or not

Edited by wind453 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
wow dear!!!!
am da 1st one 2 comment n it was soo beautiful!!!
pleaseeee do continue wud love 2 read such wonderful parts more!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Very very romantic os
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Awwwsome yaar ...lovely shot ...do write more

luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful update!!!!!!
mayur were so cute........
continue soon

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