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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pinky
sach much abhut fantastic update tha
mayur ki finally scchi friendship ho gayi awesome
and update was mindblowing
continue soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome one dear.....
Lovely.......amazing part...........
I loved it......
Continue soon.................
And thnks for the pm............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Pinkyyyyyyyyyyyyy janaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Again a fantabulous update

I don't know why- but when mayu was scolding nups , It was hurting me

My eyes became moist

And u know what- maine tou mayank ko maan he maan thodi kuch suna bhi diya.

But then I found mayu was hurt too

And it gives me some relief

At least sadu, akdu ka bhi tou koi emotion hai- he was too guilty.

Hmm r a ya kya hai- he hurt nups and nups hurting eyes hurt him.

Heheheheehe lagta hai kuch ho raha hai.

Very good ,very good.

Poor nups – mayu scolded her very badly. But she didn't utter an word

Strange – ye tou nups se matching nehi karta.

Pinkyyyyyyyyy kya baat hai- lagta hai yaha bhi dal main kuch kala hai>

And then next maynk and gunjan scene- it was so nice that gunji explain the whole thing beautifully infront of mayank.

And maynk wah he was flirting with nups and trying to manofy her.

Wah mayank itna badal kaise gaya.

I loved the blubbering of my sweet, cute nups.

And I loved her maynk imagination part.

It was so nice

I loved that mayu said sorry to her and made her happy.

I enjoyed the whole part.

It was awesome

Amazing

Wonderful

Fantastic

Dekho jitna word kahungi wok am pad jayega

If I have power then I'll definitely appoint u as a creative in mjht.

U wrote the whole thing beautifully pinkey

I loved each and every bit of it

Pinky janaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Love u so much for ur quick and nice update.

Pls pls mere liye thoda jaldi update karma

Plzzzzzzzzzzz its one of my special request to u.

Plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to do it for me

So update next part soon with lots of mayur.

Waiting for ur update

Take care

Love u loads

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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar its was fantastic superb awesome........
mjhe mjht1 yaad aa gaya....
plz update soon.....

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update dear. sachi reminded me of old mjht. ab toh aage aage bahut mazaa aane waala hain. really, eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh wow Pinky..so Im back to ur FF's. I remembered reading Lagaa Chunari Main Daag of AR/AA/RM. It was one of the best FF's i had ever read in my life..and now coming to this one...I read all the 5 chaps together. They were AMAZIN. I loved the Mayur accident which was hilarious!!😆 The party idea was so sweet..and by god! Mayank is so FUNNY! Esp. the 15 mins and 37 sec wasting one!😆 Sam and Gunjan are utterly cute and I LOVED their aeroplane talk. Sp. when the nerd saw Gunjan and started blushing! I was 🤣 ive never read any FF about SaJan till date..but I loved this one to the core!!!! Mayank getting Nups sandwhich was cute..also loved the physics!! Amazing FF ..totally! Cant wait 2 read more!!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pinky,

awesome part!!!!! n also awesome ff!!

i always liked mayur fights, but the fights in ur ff are awesome!!!!!

Mayank is too funny specially regarding the time!!!! 🤣

Sajan scenes are also nice..

i liked sajan aeroplane talk was too funny!!!! 🤣 🤣 especially when gunjan throws aeroplane away n it by mistake reaches the nerd!!!!!! n he starts blushing!!!!!! 🤣 🤣

n also Mayur sandwich part was cute!!

do continue soon!!!!!

n add me into ur pm list!!!!!!!!

luv

deepti
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy pinky:-)
amazing update yaar
mayu was too angry yaar
bechari nupur ko rula diya...
But they are friends now that's the good part
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta



kya baat hai meri sharni pinkey maynk ek sher vaha vaha......nupur itna darr gayi ki bol nahi pa rahi .......yaar poor nupur....per i think maynk vegetarian hai na....yes he is vegeterian par nupur ke liye kya veg ya non veg....he loves eating her😆
true maynk ko bilkul bhi manners nahi hai.......
itna rude.......yesssss.....he is akdu 😉
i think nupur have to give him a lesson on manners........don't worry she will 😃
but i know some where he is too guilty........yeah because he is sweeeet too 😳
nupur skip her break fast ...........and he is such a inhumane ................but gunjan ka dialouge acha tha ..she is really understanding. yes.....first time gunjan spoke up & that too for her sis 😊
nupur confuse lakin confusion mein bhi uska mind kitna acha work katra hai poor girl....will remain more confused 😆
yaar pinkey i think vo mjht ki creative head ko really teri advise leni chayia na...yaar acha kahsa serial ka band bazzaa diya........ok I'll call them & give them tips 😉😆
i love nups dialouge mokey ko hasna bhi aat ahia kya.......i'm a fan of her dialogues so can't help including them 😊
lovely dialouge thanksssss
yaar kitna achi imagin thi kash muje bhi eyes open karne per mera dream man mil jata so sweet....but now come back
pinkey next time mere liye bhi kuch write karna ..ok......surely 😊
arre wah to maynk per kuch asar ho raha hai flirt bhi start ker diya poor guy....ek hi din mein bigad gaya😆
nupur is really a sweetheart ......yessss
baba samrat to ye dek ker bahut happy hai ofcourse he will be 😆
lakin sheena yaar i wish ke mien uska face dekh sakti yaar usse apni boards ki tension nahi hai kya maynk thodi na usse pass karowant wala hai..........usko pata hai kaise pass hona hai 😉
physics i too hate but i love maths.......i can do maths in my sleep too..............I hate maths....I love biology
sam so sweet aeroplane in class..........
i remembered when i was doing my pet coaching once my teacher also caught me sleeping
bad adi...doing masti in class 😆
i don't forget those days.....nor do I.....I miss my school & junior college
lovely update pinkey thankssss
i lvoe this part totally enjoying........lovely update........I'm glad u liked it
sorry this is wrong but tell me when will you update the next part ..........
next week na not sure sweety....but if you are lucky this weekend sat or sunday

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi pinky when r u going to update

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