sorry guys will not be able to reply ur comments,,,bcoz of exms..!!! bt would really lyk to thank u'll for ur sweet comments..!!😊
part2...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flash bck..!!
N: offo gunjan..!!
Maine kaha naa..tu 1st aayegi..to aayegi..aur tu apne future ka tension mat le..tera future maine soch liya hai..
G: kya..???????
N: Mumbai...excel colg...ye sab tera intazaar kar rahe hai..!!
contd...
g:mumbai..??????
n:haan kyu...??? jab mai 12th ke baad mumbai shift ho gayi to tu bhi to mumbai hi aayegi..!!😉
g:di...tumhe mumbai jaana tha...tum gayi..lekin mai mumbai nai aana chahti...!!
n:kya matlab..????😕
g:mai yahi morena mai reh kar aage ki padhai karna chahti hun..!!!!
n: gunjan....mumbai me kya buraii hai..??
g:morena me bhi to koi buraii nahi hai di..!!!!
n:lekin gunjan..!!!
g:di pata nai kyu muje samaj nai aaraha tum muje mumbai aane ke liye kyu itna force kar rahi ho..??
n:tere hi bhale ke liye..???
g:..........
n:ussi reason ki wajese jis reason se mai mumbai jaane ke liye maani thi...
g:kya..????😲
n:gunjan...tu shayad bhul gayi hai....ki maine mumbai jaane ke liye haan kyu kaha tha..!!!
g:...................
n:bui ki wajese...!!!!!
tu jaanti hai naa...bui ne bauji se kya kaha tha....
ki muje mumbai naa bheje.....meri padhai yahi morena me hi karvaye...taaki merii padhai ho n sath me shaadi ke ladke bhi dekhu..!!!
lekin mai shaadi nai karna chahti thi...kyunki muje apne raj ka intazaar tha....!!
kyunki mai jaanti thi....pehle muje pyaar hoga..fir shaadi...'love marraige'...!!!
lekin bui....ke hote aisa nai ho sakta tha...huhn..!!!
isliye mai mumbai aayi..!!!
aur mumbai me aur ek khaasiyat[speciality] hai..!!!
MUMBAI SAPNO KA SHAHAR HAI..!!!!
aur mai jaanti thi..aur jaanti hun...muje mere sapno ka rajkumar mumbai me hi milega..!!!
aur shayad tuje bhi..!!!!😉
g:lekin di muje mumbai nai aana..!!!
n:dekh gunjan..tuje mumbai aana chaiye....warna bui teri bhi shaadi karva degi...fir tere sapno ke rajkuamar ka kya hoga..!!!
on other side....d phone call convo..!!!
b:..?????????
p:haan....muje gunjan bahot pasand hai...mere bete ke liye..!!
b:ye tu achanak kya bol raha hai...???
p:mai tunjse teri beti ka haath maang raha hun...apne bete ke liye...!!!
b:lekin aise achanak....bhi to gunjan se ek hi baar mulakat hui hai...fir bhi...ye??
p:haan...teri beti hai hi itni sanskari..ki mai ye opportunity khona nai chahta tha....isse pehle ki koi aur tujse gunjan ka haath maangle...mai hi maang leta hun..!!😆
b:.........
p:to kya khyal hai....iss dosti ko ab reshtedaari me badla jaye..?????????
b:lekin...!!
p:mai jaanata...hun...tu ab tak mere bete se nai mila naa...is liye hich khicha raha hai...mai...(cutting him off)
b:nai aisi baat nahi hai...tera beta hai...muje ter parvarish par aur tere apne bete ko diye hue sanskar par pura bharosa hai..!!!
p:to.....kya khayal hai..???
b:...hmmmmmmmmmmm....
p:...............
[after thinking deeply.....]
b:meri taraf se haan hai...!!!!!!
lekin tere bette ka naam kyahai..???????
scene shifts,,,,,,gunur room....
n:dekh gunjan..tuje mumbai aana chaiye....warna bui teri bhi shaadi karva degi...fir tere sapno ke rajkuamar ka kya hoga..!!!
g:lekin di muje kisi rajkumar ka intazaar nahi hai..!!!
n:by god gunjan...tu meri bahen hoke aisi kyu hai..!!!
acha babba..sapno ka rajkumar naa sahi...lekin teri padhai ke liye..!!!
g:di padhai to mai yaahan bhi kar sakti hun..!!
n:hey bhagwaan...maine abhi itna sab kuch kaha...usme se tuje kuch samaj nai aaya kya..???
g:diiiii...!!!!!muje pata hai...shaadi ki problm..!!!....hai naa..!!!
lekin di agar mai bauji se kahungi ki muje shaadi nai karni padhai karni hai..to bauji meri shaadi kabhi nai karwaenge...!!!!
n:gunjan....bui bauji ko manna legi shaadi ke liye....aur agar ladka acha hua naa...to bauji bhi manna nai karenge..!!!
g: di...tum...!!!!
n:gunjan...tu mumbai aakar to dekh...mai sach keh rahi hun...mumbai...bahot..bahot bahot acha hai..!!!
waha ke log....saari jagah...sab kuch..!!
g:di...maine itne kum waqt me..tum me bahot saare changes notice kiye hai..!!
n:kya...????😕
g:di...tum mumbai jaane ke baad, kitni baar morena aayi ho..?
n:..hmmmmmm...3 baar..!!!!
diwali vocation me...christmass me n ab..!!!
g:rite...aur inn teeno baad maine tum me bahot saare changes dikhe hai...!!!
n:kya...kaunse...????
g:...hmmmmm...
[dis r d direct words wich nupur spoke....]
pehli baar jab tum morena aayi...
tum aake boli...".muje mumbai bilkul pasand nai hai...yaha ke log...huhn....ye log kitne selfish hai...inhe kisi ki bhi feelings ki koi parvah nai hai..!!
aur wo mayank...wo samajta kya hai apne aap ko....😡😡😡"
dusri baar...
"yaha ke log itne bhi bure nai hai....n ab to mere bahot saare ache dost ho gaye hai....maine mayank se bhi dosti karli hai...wo akdu hai...bt itna bhi bura nai hai...aur diya, uday bhaiya..unka gang bhi acha hai...!!"
aur ab...iss baar...teesri baar...
"gunjan mumbai sachme sapno ka shahar hai....mumbai bahot bahot bahot acha hai..!!!
aur jab hum sab pura gang ek sath canteen me masti karte hai...tab to by god...puch hi matt gunjan...!!
aur mayank...ab to wo bhi humare gang ke saath baithke masti karta hai....hasta hai..hasata hai...lekin ek baat wahi hai...benji aur uday bhaiya ab tak mayank se darrte hai by god...!!!
mai to mayank ki mom se bhi mili...aunty bahot hi achi hai gunjan....aur pata hai..jab kabhi kabhi meri aur mayank ki ladaii hoti hai..to auntyy mayank ka nai...mera side leti hai..!!
aur aunty mayank ko mayu....bulati hai...haayyy kitna cute lagta hai naa...mayu..!!!
ab to mai aur mayank best friends bann gaye hai..!!!😃"
[dis r d thing wich nupur had told to gunjan....directly..her words..!!😉]
n:haan to..???
g:di tumhara nazariya mumbai shaer ki taraf kitna badal gaya hai..!!!
n:mumbai hai hi aisa...!!!
g:lekin di...itna badlaav..!!!!
n:haan....maine kaha naa...ye sab humare super cool gang ka asar hai..!!
g:haan lekin sabse zaada asar to mayank par hua hai..!!
n:haan...mayank kaafi badal gaya hai...ab to wo gang ke sath masti aur sharat bhi karta hai..!!
g:aur ye sab kiski wajese...(she meant nupur...as in nupur ki waje se...bt nupur din't get her meaning)
n:gang ki waje se..!!!
g:ohk...😕
n:haan...aur specially.........
cutting off nupur...
g:aur specially tumhara asar..!!
n:mera...???
gunjan mayank meri suntata tha kya kabhi...!!
g:😕to kiska asar hai....ki mayank gang ke saath involve hoke masti aur.....
kisi ne jaadu kiya hai kya....kisi magic man ne..??😆
n:haan.....ye magic man ka hi asar hai ki mayank......
g:kaun....
n:humare gang ka most important member...!!!
g:...????????????
n:samrat....!!!!
g:samrat...?????????😕
scene shifts....on dat phone convo...!!
p: SAMRAT
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end.....or just d begining...😉
ok ok guys.....iske pehle ki tum sab muje pitne lago....let me tell u'll i hav written d name of d guy...jiska rishta gunjank ke sath bauji ne pakka kar diya hai..!!!
GUYS AS WRITTEN IN PM...!!!
I HAV DISCLOSED D NAME...!!!
i know u'll will ask....kaha kiya hai..????
here it is....do as i say to u'll.....u'll will get to see d name...!!!
***guys highlight d end part after...p:****
(eg: scene shifts...on dat phone convo...!!
p:!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ) -----highlight d portion where i hav done exclamatory marks....in d updt..!!!😉
guys thoes who din't get wat m i trying to say...den plz feel free to pm me..!!😊
next part/updt....samrat's entry....d whole updt..dedicated to samrat...!!!😳
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago
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