FF(MJHT)With U 4Ever-Updt 5 pg-32 Hide n Seek - Page 15

Originally posted by: dolly18

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nw i read i tn mm going to kill u

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koi baat nahi pura time le !!!!!! Me waiting

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read all the parts..continue soon..

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Waiting for it please update soon

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Ok guys I am back with the update of my one n Only Poor FF , I dnt knw after how many months !!!!! hehehehehehehehehe !!!!! Ok lets revise a small precap of past two updates !!!!

Update 1 :- We see gunjan sleeping in her room and she had a bizzaringly terrible dream about death of 4 people , she is one of them . She don't know why this dream haunts her every single night , who are those people who died in front of her eyes before her death , she just knows that these are some important people in her life and ahe loves them . As the dream ends she wakes up screaming and she is hugged by Mayank , her twin brother , to soothe her down .

Update 2 :- Mayank tries to soothe gunjan down . He is one such person with whom gunjan can share each and everything and he understands her comletely . After some persuation she calms down nd Mayank let her sleep . But he is tensed all over for her condition . He calls Shilpa Maasi ( their mom's best friend and a psychiatrist ) to consult about gujan and she advises him that they both should come and apend some time at Shimla as this would be a good change for Gunjan . He & gunjan had always shied away from their birth place after their parents' death but this time he doesn't know why he had agreed to go there , not only agreed but he was reluctant to go there as if the place was calling him .

Next , Samrat raheja is introduced . He is currently stydying in St . Xavier's College , Delhi . He is a complete ideat student cum son cum friend package . He is the best student of the college . Bascketball & guitar are his passion . He is from a conservative middle class family but still has a heart of gold . He is completing his study on the basis of his scholarships & excellence . He has saved money from his scholarships in order to buy a guitar for himself . He even does a part time job as a tutor of small children so that he can help his family . He is seen playing a beautiful melody on his guitar when announcement of college trip takes place . He hates such trips coz according to him they are wasteage ot time n money . Benji n uday are his bestest budies !!!! They try to convince him to go but he refuse . But things change when he hears about the destination of the trip ''''''

Update 2(b) ' Snap Decisions

St. Xavier's College , Delhi

Samrat was starting to move out of the class but just then one word in Rahul's whole crap froze him to his place locking his joints in between the classroom doors .......

SHIMLA ............

Samrat stood there numb & dumbstruck . He felt as if the place was calling him , like he wanted to just reach there as soon as possible . All the students started leaving the classroom after gathering all the information about the tour , but samrat stood frozen in his place . His body muscles refused to fulfill his wish of running away from the scene . Just then a strong jerk on his sholde brought him back in the real world . He saw a confused benji & a tripple confused uday standing in front of him .

B :- " Samrat ! Kaahan khoya hai tu ??? Pichhle 5 min se tere kaan main chilla chilla ke tujhe bula rahe hain lekin tu hai ke sun hi nahi raha . Tu to canteen main jaane wala tha na , fir abhi tak yahaan '''' I mean aise kyun khada hai ? "

Samrat didn't knew how to answer him . Hell he didn't even know how to answer himself for the urge he felt to go to that place . He has always hated such tours and now he was dying to go there .

S :- " vo ''."

B & U :- " Kya ???? "

S :- " Main bhi Shimla chalunga ''' "

B & U (literally screaming) :- " Kya ?????????? "

U :- " Kyun ??????? "

B :- " Achaanak Kyun ???????? "

S :- " I just want to go aur main definitely jaunga "

Saying so samrat moves out of the class leaving behind a confused benji & a bewildered uday . They had their mouths open on hearing from Samrat that he wanted to go on a college tour which he had always hated .

B :- " Ye kya tha ????? "

U :- " Pta nahi !!!! Benji ek intelligent question poochhon ??? "

B :- " Huh ? Haan Pooch ??? "

U :- " Iske maa baap ko bachho pe experiment karne ka shaunk hai kya ? "

B :- " Pta nahi yaar !!! Ek Minute !!! KYA ????? Uday tu kya bakwaas kar rha hai ? "

U :- " Theek hi to keh rha hun !!!! ekdam unique sample paida kiya hai unhone . Guitar ki dhun kharaab ho jaye to itna irritate ho jata hai maano abhi kisi ka khun kar dega , kabhi kehta hai ke mujhe aise tours pasanad nahi hain aur ab shimla jaane ke liye aise uchhal rha hai jaise iski Girlfriend wahaan iska wait kar rahi ho ''' "

B ( in full frustration ) :- " UDAY !!!!! Kabhi to ladkiyon ke baare main sochne par pause laga aur ab chal dekhein ki ismein achanak Shimla ' prem kyun jaag gya hai !!!!! "

U (hesitatingly) :- " Main nahi aa raha . Itna paar achadha hua hai aaj iska . Bhaut maarega main to kehta hun ' "

B :- " Chup !!!! Tu chal mere sath nahi to main tujhe maar dalunga "

U : - " Yaar this is not fair !!!! Nahi chalunga to tu marega , chalunga to vo maarega , matlab meri dhulayi to honi hi hai !!!!!! "

B :- " Uday mere bhai !!!! Na chal ke maar khaane se achha chal ke maar khaana hai . Aur agar isi min tu mere sath nahi chala to main tujhe kabhi chalne layak chhodunga nahi !!!! "

And without listening to uday benji drags him fron his collar with himself to find Samrat .

Scene 3

( Vancouver )

( By Narrator )

A beautiful house with pale white color on the walls which gave as oothing effect to the ambience of the house . A woman in her mid 40's is sitting in the living room , peacefully reading a novel . But suddenly shrieks of a girl from upstairs disturbed the pefect peace and stillness of the house . Anju maasi Suddenly gets terrified on hearing . " YES !!!!! I HAVE DONE IT !!!! Yiiiiipppeeeee Huuurrraaaayyyy !!!!! " in her niece Nupur's voice .

( Nupur Awasthi's Introduction :- Nupur is a young , independent and above all a filmy girl who lives in vancouver with her maasi , Anju maasi . sahe is hr mothet's best friend but after her parent's death she has played the part of her mother in her life . Nupur shares almost anythinh n everything with her massi . Now leta see why Nupur is screaming " Happily " at the top of her lungs and "terrifying" her maasi to death )

Just when anju maasi closes her novel & keeps her spectacles down to find out all about nupur's bizzare behaviour , Nupur starts singing on top of her voice '''

" AAJ FIR JEENE KI TAMANNA HAI , AAJ FIR MARNE KA IRAADA HAI ' "

Maasi;s patience gave up & she asks nupur from downstairs itself , " nupur ? Is that you ? Tum ho kahaan ???? "

Nupur answers maasi with a song , " Aaj main upar aasmaan neechee !!!! Aaj main aage zamaana hai peeche !!!!!!! "

Anju maasi rushes toward nupur's room to look as what malfunctioning has happened with nupur's brain . Whwn she reaches her room she sees Nupur packing her thinhs happily & jumping around . Maasi is confused on seeing nupur literally dismangling her own room in order to pack her stuff .

Ma : - " Nupur tum se kya kar rahi ho ??? "

In the mode of her happiness , nupur has not noticed maasi's arrival in her room . She smiles completely & run towards her . Nupur hugs maasi tightly & swirls her along with herself .

N :- " Maasi maasi maasi main aaaj bahut khush hun !!!! I am literally on top of the world !!!!! "

Ma :- " Vo to dikh rha hai but aisa hua kya hai beta ???? Aur tu ye sab kar kya rahi hai ?????? "

N :- " Bhaagne ki tayyaari !!!!! "

Ma :- " KYA ????? "

Nupur laughs out loud at her masi's expressions .

N :- " Maasi aap to aise haairan ho rahe ho jaise main ghar chhod ke bhaag rahi hun "

Ma :- " lag to kuch aisa hi raha hai "

N ( smiling ) ;- " Of ho maasi !!! Main finally India ja rahi hun !!! Mera project theme approve ho gaya hai aur college ki taraf se mujhe India main research karne ki permission mil gayi hai . Kal raat ko meri flight hai ur do ghante main mujhe tickets aur passport colect karne jaana hai . isnt that great !!!!!!! "

A little tension sweeps across anju maasi's face but she manages to smile a little & nod to nupur . Nupur's smile fades on seeing her maasi's reaction .

N :- " Kya hua maasi ??? Aap khush nahi ho kya ?? "

Ma ;-" Aisi koi baat nahi hai beta ''''' "

N :-" Jhhooth !!!!! "

Ma ( gave up & sighs ) ;- " Main khush hun beta mujhe but mujhe teri chinta hai . Anjaan desh main tu aise akele ''' "

N :- " Of ho maasi !!!! aap meri chinta bilkul mat kijiye ! Aap to mujhe lekar aise ghabra rahi ho jaise main 5 saal ki bachhi hun !!! BY GOD !!!! "

Ma :- " Bacche maa ke liye hamesha chhote hi rehte hain chaahe vo kitne hi bade kyun na ho jayein . "

N ( smiles ) :- " aap tension mat lo . Maine dia se is baare main baat kar rakhi hai . Mujhe India main koi problem nahi hogi !!!! :

Ma :- " Vo to hai beat lekin mujhe ek baat samajh main nahi aayi tu apna research yahaan reh kar kisi aur topic par bhi to kar sakti hai,India jaane ki kya zarurat hai ? "

N ( in full happy mood ) :- " Han maasi bahut zaruri hai . Jo baat india main hai vo kahi aur kahaan ???? "

Ma :- " Tujhe kaise pata , tu to aaj tak India gayi hi nahi ????? "

N :- " Haan but fir bhi maasi mujhe hamesha aise lagta hai hai ke India mere liye anjaan desh nahi hai . Mujhe lagta tha ke ke India se mera koi na koi naata to hai aur dekho aaj main finally wahaan ja rahi hun !!!!!!! "

Nupur happily lays down her head in her maasi's lap . But anju maasi was tensed on seeing nupur's eagerness to go to India , with all that what's going on with her , can she afford to send her alone to India ?????? '''''''''''

Next Day

( Excel College , Mumbai )

[ Mayank is sitting in the college Canteen along with adhiraj and suhani . They both are really really good friends cum supporters of Mayank n Gunjan & mayank can share each and everything about Gunjan n himself with them ]

( By Mayank )

A :- " Mayank ? Kya baat hai ? You seem quite tensed ''' "

Su :- " Sab theek to hai na mayank ? Gunjan to thek hai na ? "

I thought these were the questions they asked me . Though I myself had called the early to the college so that I can talk with them but I myself was barely there .

A & Su ( unison ) :- " MAYANK !!!!!!! "

M :- " Haan !!!!! "

The sudeen shout of my name at the top of their lungs brought me out of my reverie .

A :- " Kya haan !!! Arre baba pareshani kya hai bolo ??? "

M :-" Adi vo ''' "

Su :- " Mayank kya baat hai ? Aaj tak kabhi koi baat btaane ke liye tum itne hichkichaye nahi , to aaj kyun ??? "

M :- " Suhani , main gunjan ko leke bahut pareshan hun , I am scared ''' "

And the I narrated yesterday night's incident .

A :- " To ab tumne kya socha hai mayank ? "

M :- " Adhiraj maine kal raat hi maasi se baat ki thi . Unhone hum logon ko kuch dino ke liye shimla aa jaane ko kaha hai . "

A ;- " Toh ???? "

M :- " Is baar soch rha hu jaun '''' "

Su :- " Lekin Mayank tum aur gunjan to kabhi ''''' "

M :- " Jaanta hun . Hum waahan kabhi jaana nahi chahte but is baar samajh nahi aa rha ke khud ko rok kyun nahi pa rha hun '''' "

A ;- " I think its time Mayank '''' "

M :- " Pata nahi adi main theek bhi kar rha hun ke nahi '''' "

Su :- " Mayank tumne jo decide kiya hai vo soch samajh kar hi kiya hoga , aur is waqt tum dono ko maasi ki zarurat hai , tum dono ko jaana chahiye ''''' "

M :- " Suhani , kya tumhein sach main lagta hai ke main gunjan ko sambhal paunga ? "

To my surprise they both burst into giggles . I looked at them like they have lost their mind .

A ( still laughing ) :- " Mayank tum ''' tum ye question poochh rahe ho ????? "

M (confused ) : - " Haan '''' "

And then he laughed out even more . Suhani tried to somber her laugh and hugged me with single arm .

Su :- " Mayank , kabhi kabhi tumhein kya ho jata hai ???? "

M :- " Kya ? Ab Aisa maine kya keh diya ya kar diya ????? "

Meanwhile adhiraj hugged me with single arm from another side .

A ;- " Mayank pura college janta hai ke gunjan ko tumse zyaada pyaar aur koi nahi karta !!!!! "

Su :- " Budhu !!!! Mayank hum bhi jante hain aur gunjan bhi ke aaj tak agar vo duniya ko face kar payi hai to vo sirf isliye kyunki tum uske sath hamesha khade rahe , tumne har ladam pe use sambhala hai . Aur apni is ability par doubt karne ki sochna bhi mat , nahi to agar gunjan ko pta chal gya ke tumne aisa socha bhi to vo library ki sbse moti kitaab utha ke tumhaare sar pe maaregi tumhara dimag sahi jagah laane ke liye !!!!!! "

Then all three of us laughed . This was the reason I wanted to talk to them . They always stood by me even in most ridiculous decisions of my life ( like this one ) and they can make me laugh even at the gloomiest times . I hugged them back & ranto find Gunjan .

I was filled with the energy of the trust they showed in me . TRUST ???? My pace slowed down and a sudden panic engulfed me . Was I good enough to deserve their and Gunjan's blind trust ? Hell was I even good to deserve just their trust let alone blind ? Frustrated I close my eyes & took a long deep braeth to shut the internal babble .

" Mayank relax !!!!!! This will work out !!!! Gunjan ke sath ab kuch galat nahi hoga , Main kuch galat hone nahi dunga . Gunjan ko is baat ke liye manaana mushkil hoga , but is baar main uski ek nahi sununga , use maan na hi hoga ''''' "

With this thought engulfing me , I moved towards library to met Gunjan ........

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finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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tu toh mujhse bhi zyaada time lagati hai update karne waaaste
but next time plzz thoda aur jaldi karna

but greaaaaaaaaaaaat update


uday toh humesha ultra confuse rehta hai par sam ki harkat ki wajah se shyad confuseon ki toli vich as benji bhi include honge😆

so finally ab sab shimla chalenge

well main apne question ka pitaara naa kholun wahi acha hoga warna tu pagal ho jayegi😆

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Originally posted by: sushups

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congo sush dear !!!!!! You are first this time !!!!!!