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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Lovely_Diva

hey kavya simply awesome, congrats on the new ff and do continue soon

heyy dear
am so glad u liked it
thanx for commenting
keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: arluver15

kavya

that was gr8 intro
loved it very much......
very intersting consept too
cont soon and do pm me when u update next....
nruti

heyy nruti di
i always wait for ur comments😊
thanx so much for this wonderful comment
thanx for reading and commenting
keep commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HER LAST GIFT

PART 1

She knew she will have to speak but she had little courage to do so. She was sleep deprived. Her crying eyes swollen, her face dull. Facing him was not an easy task for her now. Had it been back then, she would have been in his arms but twnty years had made them both more sophisticated and more mature. All the carelessness of their youth was gone. It was just the seriousness left and after this incident there was lots to be told and lots to be heard but both feared this conversation.

Their first meeting after twenty years was not a pleasant affair may be due to the atmosphere and happenings or just the fact that they had moved on. Both too sgoistic to take the initiative to talk, and both too sensitive to forgettheir love. They were still deeply in love. His gaze still made a shiver run down her spine… her smile still seemed heavenlike but something was missing. It was not the same and it never could be.

Today there was nothing that could make her pain worse. Nothing that could make her feel better. Her memories of tamanna were so few and so cruel. The little newborn bundle in her arms , the strong little limbs kicking against the tightly wrapped blanket, just as they had kicked in her womb. The large round eyes just like his, the dimple, the nose all of divine appearance. Her white skin glowing and her little hands flying in the air. The smell of a newborn. No feeling in the world could have been better than this. The feeling of motherhood felt heavenlike. Those memories stabbed her heart still she wanted to gather more from the few she had. She was a blessing but her loss was sympathy gathering for mr shubhankar and kirti rao, the adoptive parents of tamanna. The turn of events of the previous day were fresh in her mind and were keeping her occupied.

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"ridhima" she turned swiftly as she felt her name being called out. Her body stiff and trying to gather composure. She felt kirti's hand on her shoulder. The two mothers-adoptive and biological stood face to face. The two most paned hearts at this loss. Kirti too looked exhausted, her black eyes were now red due to tears and her face pale. They had met before- at the hospital after the accident but they had no words to console each other today. Ridhima opened her mouth to say something but burst into tears. Kirti comforted her by caressing her back while hugging her but this was harder for her. Ridhima finally spoke through tears " I have mentioned this before but I need to say this again. You and shubhanker gave her a beautiful life. I am grateful to you people. I am grateful that you gave her a happy home and everything she needed. "

Kirti still could not gather composure. It was a huge loss for her too. It was irrepairable. " ridhima I want to speak to you, about…about the baby." Ridhima had felt history repeat itself when kirti had told her of tamanna's new born son delivered just two weeks back.

"ridhima, today I left him sleeping with a friend. But I am sure you would like to meet him again. He is exactly like tamanna. And now that tamanna's father is here too we can all sit over to discuss a bright future for tamanna's last gift to us"

Ridhima looked up more paed and shocked than ever. It was not the time she could face another truth of her life. She felt weak and all she could mutter was " he..he is here??"

And as kirti moved from the way she could see him cast a long shadow in the room. He stood there leaning onto the door. His state too was pale and hurt. But she was too shocked to noticethis. She felt her body go weak as she clutched the wall for support"

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Her chain of thoughts was broken by the ringing of the bell. She moved to the door but was too terrified to answer his queations but deep inside she knew that it has to be done now or later. On her way to the door she felt her body turn pale again. So much pain on her was difficult to carry. She again had tears brim out of her eyes and there were memories of yesterday again in her mind, haunting her, she wanted to disappear into the darkness and never reappear again.

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. heyya guys....i know this was a short part after so much delay....maar lo mere ko...lolz....but this is all i could manage..pls bear with me....will try to make the next one longer . pls comment guys hope u like it.... .
R*R=rate and review
comment(appreciate/criticize/suggest)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Kavya
Nice one
Would definitely want to read more
Do PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
kavya
that was fantastic part........this was gr8 part.......poor ridhima and armaan..............i cant belive that shashnk seperated them and put their child for adoption.................i am glad tha after 20 years she was able to meet armaan.................
thanks for the pm
cont soon
lods of love
nruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Heyyyyyyy KAVYA🤗

nice part
like it so much
keep continue
thanks for the pm😃

lots of love
prinz
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Edited by Prinnia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Amazing it was, as ever Kavya, but I feel confused.Maybe, the next parts will bring a clearer picture of the scene...!

Very well written!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
interesting part
but still its not clear
may be coming parts will clear by confusion
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kavya nice part but too short .How heartless is Shshank,?
nd why she accepted this?She gave up so easily. Why Armaan never retorted back?........plz continue soon...........

Love Quotes Graohics
thanks for pm.
love
ritu

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