MAYUR FF-love makes life simple or? pt10-pg11 - Page 7

i liked all the parts..they r sweet....plz pm next wen u update....

fabulous story!!

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Deeps

This update left me speechless yaar

I dont have words to describe how much I loved this part

Especially these lines

They reached the sea-shore and sat on the sand. His hand was busy caressing her fingers. He rubbed his palm on her's and slowly, gently inserted his fingers between her's. She looked at their entwined hands and curled her fingers around his. He glanced at her glowing face, shy smile, lowered eyes and laid back on the wet sand, pulling her along with him. They both laid there with their eyes fixed on the black sky, hands entwined and feet frequently touched by waves.

it really touched my heart

I loved the way Mayank consoled Nupur ...something which always goes missing in MJHT.....LOL

You are an amazing writer Deeps....And I love your ff

do cont soooon..............

Love you
Nidzy

hey thank u so much. its bcoz of guys lyk u dat i rush to update my ff asap. actuaaly i am havin exams ryt now. though i have the scene in my mind but yet to type it down.
will update after my exams. after 22 march.
hope u can wait till then...

nidzy, u r the first and the best person i met on dis forum
thanks a lot 4 everything....

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd

Awesome update dipeeka............Aww loved the last MayUr part was tooooo Awesome Adorable...........and the way he was consoling her Tooo Gooood.................

Do Con Sooooon............and add me to the pm list

of course dear.. will surely pm u...
ryt i'll update on 22 march pakka:)
:)
plz keep reading and commenting... it feels nice

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Great update, Deepika.

I am speechless, dear.

Loved Mayank's concern.

Hope, Nupur tells him everything soon, and then Mayur talk to Bauji that they want to marry. Bcz, Bauji was ready for love marriage if Nups loved someone.

Continue soon.

Thanks for PM...

Shreya...

oh dear u made the whole study of the plot:)
well to be precise... AAL WILL BE WELL!!!
wait and watch
till then bear me till 22 march...plz

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi dipika

It was wonderful update.

Oh
I can easily imagine nups pain.

She feels for myank but going to
marry someone else only 4 her fathers sake.

I loved mayur bonding

The way maynk helped nups and
cares for her was awesome

U describe their emotion in a
brilliant way.

U r an awesome writer dear.

Loved this part from the core of my
heart.

Amazing update

Keep updating

hey faria,
thanks 4 taking out tym reading it...
umm... yes nupur feels 4 mayank.. a lot but is under pressure...
here mayank's feelings are still in store
wait and watch!
keep commenting plz
love
deepika

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<font color="#ff00ff" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">WOW... Deeps... this is really nice... sometimes unsaid words and actions are more louder than the spoken ones.... I really loved the HUG part and the beach part..

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Way to go Girl... Really nice update!!!👏👏👏</font>

hey thanks a lot..

Originally posted by: myownarea

hey deepika :)

just read ur entire FF..its amazing :)

I loved the way u depicted their feelings and their situations..truly awesome :)

do pm me ur future updates

luv

Divya

wow
it feels so good to be praised by so sweet ppl
thanks a lot
i am really happy that u took out time to read this story
thanks a lot sweetie:)

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">It was really nice one</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">Loved it</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">I really cried for Nups n on her halat yaar</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">Liked that Mayu is always there for her</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">Hop Bui makes Nups marry Mayu or Bauji do it</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff" size="4">Dnt want them to get seprated plzzzzzzzzz</font>

don't worry
ALL IS WELL!!!
just keep reading and wait till 22 march
hope 2 see ur comments again too
love
deepika

Awesomeee..... Read all the parts now...
It was great.... !!!
Pls add me to your PM list...Pls