Mayur ss Pyaar ke imtihaan epilogue updt Pg 48 - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

dear afsha you start a ff
and don't even pm yaart
plz now add me to this ff
ok and pm me

Dear wen i wrote the concept i pmed u but u didnt commented
So thought that u didnt liked it
Will paka pm u frm now onwards😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
don't forget ok
otherwise i will kill you

ok
and soon update samji
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

part 2

lovley update afsha
gun was telling mayu about nups good qualities
lovley part

Thanx jana
Thanx foe loving it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

part 4

nice part
want to read more

Thanx jana
Sure ull read more😉
Thats part 3
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

part 4

afsha dont end it soon

i like it
when nups said i lost my control when you are near me......

lovley update

and romnatic too

ab jaldi se updare karo or muje pm bhi

Sure ill not end that soon but not that late also
Nups says wats in her Heart to Mayu
Thanx loving the update n romance
Thanx jana
Thanx for reading n commenting😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 5
It was morning 9 am wen Nups cell strted ringing
She was hell angry as she culd hardly sleep yeterday nght n today so early sumone was disturbing her sleep
She picked n in her sleepy voice said: Hello
Caller:So Miss Nupur Sharma hasnt changed yet still her sundays strt late haan
Nupur's sleep all went in a second wen she heard the voice of caller
She witout thking anythg said:Mayank
M:So Mrs Sharam do remember my voice Im glad
N:Can u jus tell me why ur diturbing me n who gave u my Number
M:Im ur client for a deal so i can hav ur number n waise it isnt difficult for Mayank Sharma to get a gals no saying wit a Grin on his face
{He still remembers how in college also he got Nupur's number witout evn letting her knw He got it frm her Frnds His looks worked on them n they were already going mad that The Mayank Sharma was talking to them so it was easy for him to get it He still remembered that Nups was shock the same way she was now n he was disturbing her at same tim of Sunday n she cursed him for waking her up so early on Sunday jus to remeber her that they hav to hav lunch togther that too at breakfats tim n he laughed his Heart out wen she was cursing him lik anythg wen they met for lunch that day Evryone arund were thking Mayu has gone mad N Nups was getting more angry as he was laughing at her He smiled thking his past}
Nupurs voice bought him to the prsent
N:Yes MR Sharma how can i help u
M:U call me Mayank Nupur
N:Its Miss Bhushan Mr Shrama
Mayu was hurt that she wasnt telling herself Mrs Shrama n moreover was talking to him in jus formal way
He composed himself back as he thought his mothers words "That if they were not meant to meet how culd they meet after 2 years"
He was hurt but he did not show to her
M:Miss Bhushan we hav to meet today as we hav to sort out sum changes in materials If u say i can cum to ur hom jus give me ur address
N:No its ok i dnt lik doing professional work at hom U reach office by 10:30 i will be there
M:Im alraedy in ur office
Nups was lost of words now
It was 1st tim in her profession that she was making sumone wait
N:Soory to keep u wait ill reach there as soon as possible
M:Its ok take ur time ill wait
Nups jus kept the phone went had shower n came out weraing Chudidar It was green colour
She wears Saree in her office but today she was late n it takes tim too so she jus wore wat she wear usually on Sundays She left witout make up or anythg jus brushed her hair Took her cell n the file that needed there She took the car keys n drove at fastest speed she culd n too her luck it was sunday so less traffic on streets She reached her Office by 10
Mayu thought it will take Nups lot of tim so he strted roaming in her office
He was watching evrthg keenly he remember that these were the thgs he told her he wanted for his office an smile automatically came on his face seeing that actually Nups used his idea it was actually she was living his dreams he felt
He was diturbed by the noice of stepshe knwe it was Nups waise bhi who wuld cum to the office on sunday he thought n yup he was rght
She entered her cabin in hurry burry
Kept her thgs on her table Mayu had settled down listening to the sound of steps
N:Sorry for keeping u wait Mr Sharma now u can tell me wat changes u want in the materials
M:Yeah sure n he explains the changes he wants
Nups listenses to him attentively n agree wit sum points while argue in sum points n they settle
Mayu was going through the points she didnt agree n saw if she was rght or not
While Nups jus got up n stood near the window
She was seeing that how at this in the Weekdays this street is full of traffic pollution n all
As she was facing the window Her half face was seen by Mayu he culd see that she was deep thought
He remebers a moment wit her
Flash back
Mayur were walking on road it was daily routine either they wuld go sumwhr after college Beach Park or Where Nups or Mayu wanted
Today Nups didnt wanted to go sumwnr instead she sadi we'll walk hom Walking back hom means they had to walk a lotttttttt
Par Nups said toh said they strted walking back hom
It was quite street n Sun had already gone away where as Moon was walking wit them
Mayu was seeing her her changing expressions wit evythg she crossed n all
He jus so wanted to Kiss her n he said her that moment only
M:I want to kiss u
Nups who was busy notcing thgs on road turned to him n her face shocked the cofusion whch also meant that Mayuw ill hav to repeat his question
M:U heard it rght i wanna kiss u
Nups saw him n his face he was looking really very cute n she had an idea at that moment only
She nodded her head in No
M:But kyun u knw All gals die to get a kiss frm me n im asking u n ur telling no
N:Go n kiss the gals who r dyying for it
M:No i cnt u knw ur my Gf n Evn present wife than how can i kiss sumone wen ur there Mayu said making such a sweet face that she actually wanted to kiss him but Nups was Nups irritate karna hai to hai
N:No one knws that im ur GF neither anyone knws tht im ur prsent wife so u can Kiss anyone u knw
M:How can u say u wnt feel jealous kya
N:Nahi why will feel jealous haan others gals mght feel jealous u knw she said keeing her hand on her chin n pretending as if she was thking
Mayu was geeting irritated yaar
M:How can u say this im ur husband ill kiss anyone n u wnt evn feel jelous or bad
She nodded her head in No n said
N:Mere ghar aagaya Im going Bye she said n winked at him n walked away
Mayu was hell angry n irritated she neither kisses noe Wished him Happy bday mana it was still tim for 12 but she culd wish him na
He really got angry lik anythg n went away
Nup was watching all this she was standing at the agte n seeing his expressions she was happy her planned work
Next day Mayu waited for Nups call but hiss cell didnt buzzed for any msg neither for call
He was really pissed of
How can she forget her bf her husband's bday how can she
She is the topper of class remembers evryones bday gives them gfts calls on tim but she didnt called me neitehr wished me
These questions were jus going in his head wen his room door open There entered Nups he was happy now he thought paka she will wish him
He was sitting on bed evn Nups came n sat there jus a lil gap in between them
But all in vain infact she said she came to discuss abt the project
M:Kya tum project discuss karne aayi ho
N:Haan kyun tumhe kya laga
M:Mujhe laga tum mujhe mera bday wish karne aayi ho
N:Kya Mayank aaj tumhare bday so sorry mein bhool gayi yaha tak ki gft lana bhi bhool gayi sorry Mayank really sorry
Mayuw as so angry that he didnt saw that small smile on Nups face sheMayu jus turned his face frm her n strted
M:Nupur how can u do this to me u forget ur bday ur one n only one husband's bday
N:Mayank evrone has one husband only n laughs
M:Dnt laugh 1st of all u forget my bday than my gft n evn wen i asked u yesterday for a kiss u didnt evn kissed me how can u do this me u dnt love me n all he was going on n on n on
Nups was so much liking this child lik behaviour of Mayu he was jus acting lik a child
Nups jus cupped his face n pressed her lips on his
Mayu was so shock he didnt knew wats going on it actually took few seconds for Mayu to understand that Nups was kissing him n that too on lips
Nups jus left his lips n went away opening the door n blushing hard
She said :Happy bday Mayu n went away all blushing
She really Thanked God that Mayu's mum was not there warna wat wuld she tell that why was she blusing so much
Mayu was still in sam position he was actually not getting wat happened jus a few seconds ago
Flashback over
Mayu came out of the flashback wen he heard sumones phone ringing
It was Nupur's
Evn she came out of her thought
She picked up the phone a smile came on his face
N:Yes Sam i will be there for arriage shopping Are paka baba i will be there dnt worry Bye take care meet u soon
Nups turned to see Mayu in confusion n evn hurt listening the word marriage
N:So ur finished wit work Mr Sharma
M:Yes wo wo
He wanted to ask abt that phone call that marrige but he culdnt gather teh courage so he jus said
M:Yes work is finished
She knew wat he mght be thking that she is marrying sumone else n wanted to ask that but his not getting the courage
She jus dnt knw why but she wanted to clarify this thg
N:Dnt worry Im not marrying agn the pain whch i got after marrying u i wnt marry anyone else now
Saying that she left the office
Mayu was happy that she wasnt marrying anyone but hurt also that he was the one who gav her so much pain
He too left form the office

Thats it for today
Hop ull lik the update
Sorry for updating late Really sorry
Criticizism is more than allowed

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Posted: 15 years ago
ha ah mein first wow without pm
abhi read karti hoon
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow.......

fabulous update.....
simply loved it......
the flashback was so cute,.....
and prsent was sweet too......
loved the sam nups phone convo as that left mayank confused.......
continue soon......
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey afsha jana

fabulouss updtt yarrr

loved each part of it!

and as usuall mayur rockkk

bt u updted vey late, i guess its okay

but plzz updt sooner okay!!
thank you

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

good one yaar afsha

update sooner: )

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