Kuch Ankahee Jazbaat-MaYur FF Updated LAST PT p35

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

very gud...liked it...continue it soon...

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Ai miss kipta,
abar short update.
4/ 5 line.
mone hoy amar humki-dhamki te kono kaj hoy nai.
dekho ami kintu khub kothin meye. amr kotha na shunle tomar khobor ase bujhla?
jai hok update ta kintu mashallah onek valo hoise.
really very interesting.
ai meye(i m sure its nupur) hoy mayank er class mate nahoy mayank er neighbour.
hehehee awkard type guess- right??????
ashole amr mathai er cheye beshi kisu ashse na.
lovely part.
asha korsi next part next 1/2 an hr er moddho pabo.

till then good bye.

Fariaa...sorry late reply korchi. 3rd update e kaj korchilam. fiker not...update gula...I mean convi gula aste aste ektu boro hocche. ermm asholei amar korar kichu nai..Mayank er moto chele kokhonoi kono ojana meyer shathe etokkhon kotha bolbena...therefore the updates have to be short. but aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya 😉 keep reading...

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Awww i just read it...its so gud...plz add me 2 ur list..........pm me when updated.......

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

plz add me to yur pm list..

and update alonger part next tym,,,

plz send me a pm wenever u update,

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Hey Neela
I just read yout FF dear
loved it
Plz pm me when u update

luv
Nidzy

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

@sunshine...thanx for ur comment sweety. btw whats ur name? not that I mind calling you sunshine 😉

@pari...u r not the only one asking for a longer update. I've been threatened already 😆 😆 (fariaaa I didnt mention ur name 😆 ) but there is a reason behind the short updates. keep reading n thnx for the lovely comments

@mayurarti...yaar tum to one of the top mayur fan ho...tumse aisi comment 😲 wah...kuch aur maang liya hota aaj to mil jaata shayed 😃 thanx

I will send you guys buddy request ...then it will be easier to PM you all with an update. I think there will be one today 😊

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

hey awesome ff
plz add me to ur pm list

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hey it was an Awesum FF

Plz add me to ur pm list

Liked the way gal keeps an eye on evrythg of Mayu but he dosent knws her

Loved it

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

~~~~~~~~~~~~Part 4: Next Day…. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Phone rings..again at the same time

Mayank jumps on the phone to grab it and with sheer excitement says..

M: hello
A: wah…aaj itna jaldi phone utha liya. kahi hamare call ka hi intezar to nahi kar rahe the na? (she smiles to herself)
M: main kyun aapka call ka intezaar karne laga bhala..woh to kisiko disturb na ho isi liye foran utha liya phone
A: jahan tak humain pata hai aap to akele hi rehte hai na? to yeh kaun disturb hone laga achanak ?

*** Mayank is lost for words. He was never good at lying and whenever he tried he was caught red handed. With a cunning plan to avoid answering that question, he asks

M: aur kya kya jaanti hai aap mere baare me?
A: yehi ke aap university ke top student hai…bohat sincere aur ambitious hai. aap ki zyadatar waqt library me ya kisi science laboratory me guzarti hai. kitaabein aapki jaan hai…kabhi kisi kitaab ke baghair Mayank ko shayed hi kisine dekha ho. aap ki maa hai ghar pe jisse aap bohhat pyar karte hai. aap ke dost bohhat kam hai aur…
M: aur?
A: aur aap ki koi girl friend bhi nahi
M: (laughs out loud) aap ne to meri dictionary nikaal ke rakh diya hai. aur mujhe abhi tak aap ka naam ka bhi nahi pata
A: naam?? itna zaroori hai naam jaanna?
M: jee…naam ke baghair kya kehke bulayenge aapko?
A: agar hamara naam aapke liye itna ahmiyet rakhta hai to aap hi koi naam de dijiye humain
M: main? main kaise naam de du aapko? aap ke maa-baba ne jo naam diya hai wohi naam chahiye mujhe
A: woh naam to unke liye hai…aur tamam duniyawaalon ke liye hai. hum aap ko un hazaron me nahi laana chahte.
M: accha thik hai…main aapko…ermmm…….Nupur kehke bulaunga. thik hai na? pasand aaya naam?
A: iss naam ka istemal aap hi ko karna hai…agar aapko pasand hai to humain kya aitraaz ho sakta hai?
M: yeh naam meri sirf pasand ka nahi…iss naam se mera dil ka rishta jura hua hai. pata nahi kyun…arsaa se aisa lag raha hai ke duniya ke kisi kaune me kahi per Nupur naam ka koi mera intezaar kar rahi hai. kabhi kabhi andar se awaaz aati hai koi....jaise woh mujhe bulaa rahi hai..jaise woh chahti hai main usse dhonndh ke le aaoon apne paas
A: to kyun nahi dhoondhte usse?
M: (smirks)…duniyadaari nibhaane se fursat hi nahi mili kabhi. zindagi bas kitaabon me guzar rahi hai
A: afsos kyun kar rahe hai! aap ko shayed duniyadaari se fursat nahi mila apni Nupur ko dhoondhne ke liye per aapki Nupur ne to aapko dhoondh hi liya na! dekhiye…aaj hum Nupur bannke saamne hai aapke
M: saamne kahan hai aap? in fact..kahan hai aap?? hai ke bhi nahi? kaun hai aap? (Mayank becomes restless)
A: aapko apne uss dil ki awaaz per aitbaar hai jahan aap apni Nupur ko talash karte hai per hamari hone per yaqeen nahi…kyun? kyun jaanna chahte hai k hum kaun hai? kahan hai? hum Nupur hai…aap ki Nupur…kya itnaa kaafi nahi hai aap ke liye? kya farq aajayega aap ki zindagi me agar naam jaan liya ya phir kya karti hoon yeh jaan liya…batayye humain!!
M: (Mayank gets agitated) mujhe kuch nahi janna…kyun pareshaan kar rahe hai mujhe aap? kyun dil me aise ahsaas jagaa rahi hai jo meri zindagi ka rukh badal dega..kyun?
A: hum aap ki zindagi ka hissa shayed kabhi na bann paaye per aap ki pareshaaniyon ka wajah bann jayenge yeh kabhi nahi socha tha. yeh zindagi bhi ajeeb hai na? jab jab hum kaushish karte hai k kisiko dukh na pohunchaye khaas karke unko jo humain sabse zyada azeez hai…jo dil ke sab se zyada kareeb hai..tab bhi ussi kaushish me hi unhi logo ko taqleef pohuncha jaate hai.
M: suniye…aap…

**** tone of a call end ***
M: hello…hellllooo..

Mayank stares at the phone. He speaks to himself…" kaun hai yeh ajnabee larki? aur main bhi kyun isse baat kar raha hoon. jo baat maine kisise nahi share ki, jis Nupur ko maine barson apne dil me chhupa ke rakkha aaj woh ek anjaani awaaz ke saamne kaise aagayi!! yeh sab kya horaha hai…" as he contemplates he gradually puts the phone down…slowly, delicately as if he was letting go of his Nupur's hands…for the day.

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Hey it was an Awesum FF
Plz add me to ur pm list

Liked the way gal keeps an eye on evrythg of Mayu but he dosent knws her

Loved it

Afsha...you got the theme right 😊 and I am sooo glad that you like it. You're a true MaYur fan and I always watch your posts. I hope this FF continues to meet your expectations. Keep reading...just updated with part 4.

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