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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

DEAR FRIENDS HERE IS THE FIRST PART HOPE YOU LIKE IT
IF YOU LIKE THEN PLZ PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON
SILENT READERS TOO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

MY FACE WAS COVERED WITH VEIL AND WHERE I WAS SITTING THE ROOM IS COVERED WITH FRAGRANCE OF AROMA AND ROSES
RED ROSES THE WHOLE ATMOSPHERE IS ROMANTIC ......I JUST LOVE ROMANTIC ATMOSPHERE WHERE HERO AND HERIONE MEET AND FAAL IN LOVE AND MAKE THEIR LIFE BEAUTIFULL ...... 😳 😳 😳

THE BED WHERE I WAS SITTING ALSO COVERED WITH RED FLOWERS ....... I WAS WAITING FOR MY HUSBAND ......

ROOM WAS FILL WITH ROMANTIC MUSIC SOME SONG WAS PLAYING I CAN'T LISTEN BECAUSE I WAS TO NERVOUS TO HEAR OR TELL ANYTHING ....

SLOWLY THE DOOR OPEN I CAN SEE HE WAS COMING NEAR THE BED ........
HE SIT BESIDE ME .......AND JUST TOUCH MY HAND WITH HIS HAND ....A SPARK RUN IN MY BODY AND HEART WAS BEATING VERY FAST .....HE CAN ALSO LISTEN MY HEART BEAT HE TOUCH MY HEART BY PUTTING HIS HAND .......
I FEEL LIKE BLUSHING .THEN HE JUST TAKE MY HAND AND PUT IT ON HIS HEART .LIKE WE BOTH LISTEN EACH OTHER'S HEARTBEAT.....

THAT WAS THE MOST ROMANTIC THING WHICH I FEEL .......
HE HUSKILY CALLED MY NAME -NUPUR....... 😳

WHEN I LISTEN MY NAME FROM HIS MOUTH I FEEL THIER IS SOME MEANING OF MY NAME WITH OUT HIM MY NAME IS JUST NOTHING.............
HE JUST DISCLOSE MY VEIL AND NOW I CAN SEE HIS FACE WHICH WAS GLOWING WITH HAPPINESS...... 😛 😛
I WAS TOO HAPPY TO MARRY WITH HIM ......
HE JUST COME CLOSE TO ME AND JUST LIFT MY FACE AND I CAN FEEL HIS HOT BREATH ON MY FACE NEAR MY CHEEKS....... 😳 😳

HE JUST COME CLOSE AND HIS HAND TOUCH MY BARE STOMACH ....... 😳 😳

AND HE JUST .........

BEFORE ANYTHING HAPPEN...........

SPLASH SPLASH...................... 😆 😆

OMG OMG WHAT HAPPEN

😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

NOW YOU CAN SEE A GIRL TOTALLY DRENCHED ..AND SHE WAS LOOKING SHE WAS SEEING SOME ROMANTIC DREAM........

(NO OTHER THEN OUR NUPUR)
NUPU- DIA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.............
(I THINK THIS TIME HER SHOUT CAN MAKE PEOPLE DEAF)😆😆

DIA- WHAT HAPPEN NUPS ...I ONLY DO WHAT YOU SAID ME TO DO.........YESTERDAY YOU SAID ME TO WAKE YOU EARLY MORNING 5 O CLOCK
(SHE SAID MAKING AN INNOCENT FACE)😉 😉

NUPS(FUMMING IN ANGER) - I KNOW I SAY THIS BUT YOU CAN WAKE ME IN VERY DECENT WAY BY USING ALARM ...WHY YOU DO THIS.............YOU KNOW I WAS DREAMIMNG MY FIRST NIGHT ..........AND HE WAS JUST JUST(SHE STOPPED IN MID) DON'T WANT TO SPEAK.......😳 😳

DIA- I KNOW YOUR DREAM AND YOUR FIRST NIGHT ....ARRE NUPS TU KABHI BORE NAHI HOTI KYA USSE JISKA TU FACE BHI NAHI JANTI BUS USKI DIL KE DHADKAN KO SUN KER TUJE LAGTA HEIN KE TUM EK DOOSRE KE LIYE BANE HO .........
OR EVERY NIGHT YOU WAS DANCING WITH HIM, AND KISSING AND DATING..........

DIA WAS BLABBRING BUT NUPS WAS AGAIN LOST IN HER DREAM WORD.......
OMG WHOM I WAS TELLING SHE IS JUST USELESS ....
BUT I LOVE MY USELESS FRIEND VERY MUCH.........

SHE PINCH NUPS HAND ,NUPS COME OUT OF HER TRAIN OF THOUGHT .......

NUP- OUCH OUCH WHAT HAPPEN .....

DIA-NOTHING LAKIN AGAR TU JALDI REDAY NAHI HUI TO EARTH QUICK AA JAYGA..........
NUPS MEIN JANTI HOON KE TU APNE SAPNE SE BAHUT PYAR KARTI HEIN OR MEIN CHATI HOON KE TERA YE SAPNA JARUR TRUE HO ........

NUP- ACHA NOW NOT TALK SO POSITIVE I HATE WHEN YOU TALK POSITIVE ,I LOVE MY RED CHILLI FRIEND DIA.....
WHO ALWYS DISTURB ME WHEN I WAS ON ROMANTIC RIDE BUT I LOVE IT WHEN EVER YOU DISTRUB ME .......
IT'S GOOD KUCH DREAMS KABHI KABHI INSAAN KO SHAYD NAHI DEKNE CHAYIA .......

AND THE BOTH TALK GIRLS TALK
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AND HERE WE CAN SEE TWO HOT YOUNG MEN BOTH IN BLACK VEST ........
YOU KNOW WHO THEY ARE ARJUN AND MAYNK ........(IMAGINE BOTH IN BLACK VEST OMG I AM BLUSHING)...... 😳 😳 😳

AND ONE WAS DOING EXCERSICE AND OTHER WAS WRITING SOMETHING ...SUDDENLY THE STRONG WING JUST FLEW AWAY WHAT HE WAS WRITING.........

BOTH YOUNG MEN RUN TO GRAB THAT PAPER..........
WHAT YOU WRITE I WILL READ AND THE PERSON READ
(THIS IS DOWNLOAD FROM NET FROM KHALID)

Dil ki dhadhkan hai,khyaalon mein mere rehta hai

Kaun hai woh, jo swaalon mein mere rehta hai

Jis ka dekha na khwaab us se wafa karta hoon

Dil ke aaine mein main us se mila karta hoon

Main nahin jaanta yeh kis ki talab hai mujh ko

Kis ka armaan iraadon mein mere rehta hai

Khwaab hai woh mera, taabeer dilaaon kaise

Apni hasrat ko main, taqdeer banaaon kaise

Mujh ko milta hai sakoon, us ka tasavur kar ke

Woh ishara, jo isharon mein mere rehta hai

Kis ki tareef mein likhi yeh ghazal kya janu

Kis ko kehta hoon mohabbat ka kanwal kya janu

Main tau bas aik hi umeed mein rehta hoon sadaa

Us ko dekhoon jo nazron mein meri rehta hai.

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THE PERSON WHO WAS READING THIS WAS MAYNK

MAYNK-BHAI I CAN'T UNDERSTAND KE TUM ITNA SAB KASSIE HANDLE KER LATEIN HO ...BUSINESS BHI ,HOME BHI OR APNI WRITING BHI ..OR SABSE BIG MERE ANGER KO TOLRATE KER LATEIN HO ..........

SEE ME I CAN NOT TOLRATE THESE GIRLS .....THEY ARE JUST USELESS ALWYS TELL ME THAT THEY LOVE ME ...... ALWYS BEHIND ME WEARING TINY CLOTHES .AND ALWYS READY TO SLEEP WITH ME WHENEVER I WISH ....... AND HERE I CAN'T BELIEVE IN LOVE.
I THINK GIRLS ARE BEHIND EVERY BODYS MONEY ........... THEY CAN DO EVERYTHING FOR MONEY ,THEN HOW YOU CAN THINK FINDING A GIRL AND HOW YOU WRITE SO DEEPLY FOR THIS GIRL I MEAN IS IT HAPPEN IN REALTIY THAT THERE IS SOMEONE FOR EVERYBODY JO AAPKI AANKHO MEIN OR POEMS MEIN MUJE DEKYI DETI HEIN
KYA VO SACH MEIN HEIN

ARJUN- I DONT KNOW MAYU WHAT MY HEART SAY ONE DAY SHE WILL MEET ME AND MY SEARCH WILL FINISH PHIR MEIN USKE SAATH APNI LIFE SPEND KAROGA.......
USKE JISKE AANKHO MEIN PYAR HO JISKE DHAAKAN MUJE DEK KER TAJ HO JAYE ,JISSE DEKH KER MERA DIL BUS DHDAKAN BHI BHOOL JAYE........

MAY- BHAI IF YOUR HEART STOP BEATING YOU WILL DIE.......

ARJU-NAHI MAYNK JAB DIL KE DHADKAN RUK JAYGI TO USKE DHADKEN MERE SAATH JUDD JAYGI .........MERA DIL USKE EK EK DHADKAN KO MEHSOOS KER SAKGA.........
MERI ANKHO KE INTEZAR KHATAM HO GA VO JARUR MILEGI.......

MAYN- OH GOD PLZ GAVE MY BRO SOME SENSE YE AAK KE TIME ME DIL WALI LADKI USSE FIND KER RAHA HEIN JO MONEY SE NAHI USSE SE PYAR KARE I WISH KE AISE KOI HO IS KE LIYE.VARNA IS KA DIL TOOTH JAYGA OR I CAN'T TOLRATE THIS...... HE JUST POINT HIS HAND IN SKY......

ARJU-MAYNK YOU SAID YOU CAN'T BELIEVE IN LOVE BUT IF YOU CAN'T BELEVE THAN WHY YOU ALWYS HURT WHEN SOME ONE HURT ME SOME ONE GIVING TROUBLE TO MOM.....KYA YE PYAR NAHI HEIN..........
JARURI TO NAHI KE PYAR SIRF EK GIRL SE HE HO SAKTA HEIN.PYAR KE BAHUT ROOP HEIN MAA SE ,BEHAN SE, BAHI SE.......

MAYNK WAS SPEECHLESS HE SID NOTHING...

AR- MAYNK IN THIS WORLD EVERY BODY COME WITH HIS MEANING OR PURPOSE .....
KABHI PYAR DENE KE KABHI LENE KA OR KABHI KABHI KISSI OR KO KISSI SE MILANI KE.....
TUMHARA BHI KOI MAKSAD HEIN .TUMHARE LIYE BHI KUCH HEIN OR VO SAB TUMHE JALDI MILAGA.......

MAY- BHAI MERE PASS AAP OR MOM HO TO MUJE KUCH OR NAHI CHAYIA

MAYNK HUG HIS BRO AND WENT FROM THERE 👏 👏 👏

ARJUN CLOSED HIS EYES AND PRAY- GOD PLZ MERE BAHI KO MERE HISSE KI BHI KHUSHIYA DE DO VO ABHI TRUE LIFE KA MEANING NAHI SAMJTA ......

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HERE IS MY FIRST PART

SPECIAL THANKS FOR THIS TO FARIII AND TAPOOR WHO ENCOURAGE TO WRITE ME

AND FOR THIS FF THANKS TO MY LIFE WHICH GAVE ME MORE TROUBLE THIS IS THE REASON I WRITE THIS FF.....

HOPE YOU LIKE THIS PART
PLZ FRIEND DON'T BEAT ME BECOZ MAYU'S CHARACTER IS LITTLE NEGATIVE BUT IT WILL CHANGE SOON

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK FOR THIS PART.....

WITH LOVE

ADITI

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Oye ADi

I'm first to comment on ur 1st part

wat an update yaar????
you left me speechless

Starting padh kar mai ekdum blush kar rahi thi
ha ha ha sirf Nups hi aise dreamz dekh sakti

Aur yeh kya kiya tu ne
ek Mayank hi black vest mein handle nai hota aur tu ne dono ko
Uffff.........even I'm blushing now
Superb start yaar
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved it
do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy~

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

awesome part adi

jaldi doosra bhi update karde

main nahi hoon😭😭😭

love pebo

Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Adi i'll comment later dear.
May be after my exam
sorry 4 that.
plz pray 4 me

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

gr888 start

awwwesome

thanx 4 d pm

update next prt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

& plezzz update ur ff secret also plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Adi
Jhoot maat bol
main tujhe encourage nehi karti hu
main to tujhe dhamki deti hu
ke update kar
warna i will kill u
or tu daar ke mare update karti hai
he he he 😆

Adi meri jaan
its wonderful
awsome
amazing
mind blowing
update yaar

1st part was really shocking
nups and dulhaan
but who is the husband?
Mayank or Arjun??????????? 😲
i was hold my breath
offfffffffff it was a dream
thank God nups hamesha nups hi rahegi
1st night ke sapne or koun dekhsakta hai

Mayu or AB both r in black vest 😳
OMG ye tune keya kiya
both r cool but handel to hot 😳
i was terribly blushing
2 bro's convo was nice
but mujhe mayu se jayada AB accha lagraha hai

rocking update yaar
ab jaldi se next part update karle
warna mujhe phir se dhamki deni padegi
love u my dear sis

Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago