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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

I wonder....mujhe aur kitna w8 karna hoga....Rajeev ki entry k liye....hehe. And ye Rohan....I think ye Naina se thoda dur rahe to hi better hai....but anyways....that was a nice part!! Pls continue soon.

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

hey nice update

too good

but jaldi Raj ki entry karwao

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Hi Dear Thanx for the pm..

Update was gud..

Rohan is a nice guy..😊 Raj is no where ...I'm waiting for his entry..😛

Continue soon

Bye

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Sorry for replying so late

The update was very nice.

Rohan is a nice guy...he respects others and their feelings.

Kamini is very arrogant and rude.

waiting to see what happens next,

Please continue soon

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Nice part

waiting for rajs entry

plz continue soon

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

hey yaar nice fic.different one.

last ud was also good.but who is this Rohan yaar?jaha Raj ko hona chahiye waha Rohan hai.pls yaar ab Raj ko jaldi se laao na.we r waiting for him.

continue and pls send me a pm on ur next update..........

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Rani

@rajeev_myfriend

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

raat ke kareeb 1 baaj rahe haai office ke sabi staff ya toh aapne aapne ghar chale haai ha ya phir kahin news cover karne gaye ha

office main ab sirf rohan aur naina haai jo ke ek report main kaam kar rahe haai

naina-rohan coffee piyoge

rohan-ha agar hote toh aacha hota

naina-hmm main abhie leeke aate hu

naina jaake aapne aur rohan ke lie coffee leeke aate haai

naina-rohan ur coffee(naina rohan ko coffee dete haai)

rohan-thanks naina

naina-u r most welcome rohan

rohan-naina

naina-ha

rohan-agar tum ghar jaana chahate ho then u can go bocz its already too late

naina-par yeh report

rohan-dont worry i will manage if u wan to go u can go

naina-no way rohan jab tak yeh report khatam nahin ho jaata main kahin nahin jaayunge

rohan-par naina kal tumhe office bhi toh aanne haai

naina-so tum bhi toh kaam kar rahe ho na

rohan-naina par u also need rest

naina-rohan we r journalists in our life work comes first then everthing

rohan-hmm(rohan smiles looking at naina)

naina-kya hua tum mujhe dekh ke has kun rahe ho

rohan-naina u know for this i like u you r just so perfect tuumhare yehi quality mujhe sab se zada pasand haai i really appreciate u for this

naina-rohan just shut up flirt karne ka koi naya tarika socho this is old

rohan-are nahin nahin i really mean it

naina-aacha

rohan-yes believe me

naina-thanks

rohan-aacha naina tum jo itna kaam karte ho tumhare boyfriend ko koi problem nahin hote isse

naina-rohan mera koi boyfriend nahin haai

rohan-what?i cant believe it u are lying

naina-no believe me rohan mere zindage main koi nahin haai

rohan-kun

naina-kunki mujhe yeh sab pyaar shaadi romance in sab main bilkul biswas nahin haai

rohan-oh

naina-aacha ab agar mr rohan aapke mere love life ke baare main question pucchna khatam ho gaya ho toh kya hum abhie aapne kaam suru kar sakte haai

rohan-ya sure

rohan aur naina pure raat baith kar kaam karte haai

agle din subhe rohan naina ko naina ke ghar drop karta haai

naina-thanks rohan for the lift

rohan-sirf thanks aur kuch nahin

naina-matlab(naina raise her eyebrows)

rohan-matlab yeh ke pure raat kaam karke mujhe main bilkul energy nahin haai ke main ghar jaake aapne liye chai banau isliye agar aap mujhe ek cup garama garam chai pila dete toh mujh becchare par bohot baara upkar hota

naina-ok come

rohan aur naina naina ke flat main jaate haai

naina-rohan tum baitho main tumhare chai leeke aate hu

rohan-hmm

rohan jaake hall main baithta haai aur tv on kar deta haai tv ke sound se kripa jo ke aapne room main chain se so rahe the uske need tut jaate haai kripa sochte haai ke naina ne kripa ko disturb karne ke liye tv chala diya haai isliye woh bohot he gusse main naina ko datne hall main aate haai par rohan ko hall main dekh ke kripa ek dam shocked ho jaate haai

kripa-rohan tum tum yahaan kar rahe ho

rohan-woh mainne socha ke aaj tum logo ke nasta kar lu isliye chala aaya but if i disturb u then sorry

kripa-are nahin nahin u r most welcome aacha bolo kya khayoge naste main

naina-tujhe uske fikar karne ke zarurat nahin haai

kripa picche murke dekhte haai naina sab ke breakfast bana ke laaye haai

kripa-oh god plz naina pinch me i cant believe this tu aur nasta bana ke laaye haai

rohan-kun naina kabhie nasta nahin banate kya

kripa-nasta toh dur ke baata haai yeh kabhie aapne liye ek cup coffee tak nahin banate hamesha mujhe order karte haai

naina-kripa shut up

kripa-are kun rohan humara friend so he needs to know this kun rohan

rohan-ya kripa very bad tum hamesha kripa se kaam karwate ho very badddddddd

rohan aur kripa dono milke naina ko chirane laagte haai naina in sab se bohot gussa ho jaate haai aur aapne room main jaake door lock kar ke baith jaate haai

rohan aur kripa naina ka yun baccho jaisa behaviour dekh ke zor zor se hasne laagte haai

rohan-kripa yeh naina ek dam baccho jaise haai naa

kripa-haan rohan naina abhie bhi bilkul bacche haai baat baat pe gussa ho jaate haai aur aapne room main jaake muh phulake baith jaate haai

rohan-waise kripa becchare pure raat kaam karne ke bad bhi humare liye itna sab nasta bana ke laae aur humne uska itna mazak uraya aacha nahin laag raha haai

kripa gave a fake cough-kya baat haai rohan kahin koi i mean kuch kuch toh ho raha haai

rohan-are kripa main chalta hu bye(rohan sharma ke chala jaata haai)

kripa samajh jaate haai ke rohan likes naina but usse naina ke dil ka haal bhi jaanna haai islie she thought of a plan to know what is there in naina's mind

i know u all r angry but i promise rajeev ke entry bohot jald hoge aur haan hmare rajeev ke banaga naina ke jeevan ka humsafar so plz comments

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina is very hardworking and is working late into the night with Rohan on a report!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Rohan likes Naina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊But I don't like any other guy near Naina!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina doesn't believe in love and marriage!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Naina and Rohan work the whole night and Rohan drops her home the next morning!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina makes tea for Rohan wile Rohan sits in the hall switching on the TV!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This wakes up Kripa who is shocked to see Rohan there!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina has made breakfast aur Rohan aur Kripa milke usse chida rahe hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina gussa ho jaati hai aur room mein jaake baith jaati hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Kripa and Rohan are laughing and saying ke Naina bilkul baccho jaisi hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Kripa understood that Rohan likes Naina and made a plan to know ke Naina ke dil mein kya hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I am sure Naina ke dil mein Rohan ke liye kuch nahi hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

No dear....not angry at all....its just we r w8ing for Rajeev to enter!! Kisi aire gaire chikni chupri baatein hazam nahi hoti u c....but I'm sure ur story has its own flow....and u r trying to show Naina's characteristics...must be sum reason for that!! Anyways....pls continue soon....and yeah....it was gud part!!