SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84

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jyotika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

omgggggggggggg....
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud....
it ws mindblowingggggggggggggg...
simplyyy amazinggg...
luved reading it...
actually i'm reading it again n again..
dis part ws grr8888888..
pllzzzzzz cont soon..
cant wait to read further..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago

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aashi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey meena superb update yar loved it please do continue soon and thanks dear for pm

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

wow Meenakshi

i want more

these were awesome updates

thanks for itplz update soon

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sonal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

AWSOMEEEEE PARTS

i loved it

ples cont soon

n thnx 4 the pm

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

wowow i really love it your part 1 a and b plzz contuied soon

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wickedangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

that was an awesome chapter girl!...simply superb!..you made me laugh and feel samrat's pain at the same time...like i said before you have a beautiful way with words...and seriously how did you write these lines:

"jab who tumhari life me aayega toh jab bhi tum use miloge tumhare kaan
me music bajega, aisa lagega ki uski aankhon me zindagi bhar ke liye kho
jaaon, raat dal jaaye magar uski baaten
khatam na ho, zindagi me koi toofan tabahi macha jaye magar uski pyari hanseen idhar se udhar
na ho, duniya poori doob jaaye magar uske aakhon me kabhi nami na ho, dil ka
har sapna tot jaaye magar uske arman kabhi adhure na rahe, poori duniya root
jaye magar uske berukhi ka kabhi shikar na banun, aur sabse khaas baat subah ki
roshni dikhen na dikhen magar in nigahon ko har roz us pyar bahre chehre ka
deedar zaroor ho

👏gosh the way you described what love is, is just so touching!...you have a poet's soul my friend...

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Marukh Zia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!
plzz continue soon!!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazing too good superb mindblowong i simply loved it.. i hope u continue soon.
i am waiying for u upadte and nyc story line o i hope saja nbecum frends soon ...