MJHT FF-10 Things I hate bout u-Pt 13-Pg 77(29/07)

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Niharika

@X..Niha..X

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

Great part dear .

Mayur as always were amazing .

Loved Mayank's gyaan to Samrat .

Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

mindblowing awesomeeeeee

but ur update r really slow yyyyyy

plz try to continue soon

n thanx for the pm

lots of love

sanu

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

awesomeee updt..
luved it..
do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

hey dear superb update can't wait for party and thanks for pm do continue soon

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

appu..i really enjoyed reading this part ! kind of remind me the first barn scene of mayank & nupur...😆.I wish in the next part she opens up more to mayank ....i really feel like giving a hug to her in this part!!!!!!!

Thanks appu....plz update soon!!!!🤗

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

hey appu..nice part...

Mayank had the task of carrying a drunk Nupur home..which was getting really tough for him..she started talking about serious stuff..n he even got into the situation..n they realized how similar they are..but then her randomness started agn..n sam pulled mayank away..

Samrat told him its just not happening..but mayank encouraged him..n with that he went to look for nupur ..but she had disappeared..

gunjan was really uncomfortable with RV n his frndz..n he didn't seem to bother..so she moved away..n found sam..she asked him wether he'd drop her..n he agreed..though he acted indifferent...he took her to a bike..n she had neva been on one..lol..so she was nervous but didn't let it show!..

mayank finally found nupur..n she was really sad..n thats why he didn't say anything..n she started the randomness agn..but eww, she puked on him!..most be gross..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#447

appuuuuu meri jaan!!
lot of difference in dialogs from original movie... n dats y its UR story!!u hv really put in work in it beyond just the idea from movie!

thats wat i love abt it and abt YOU!
i hope not that saajan will have a ... ahem ahem.. alike movie...(i won't mind one... but since its sumthing bhushan not stratford *wink*)

but really wanna see how u'll take out mayur in this... m to impatient abt there story build up

p.s- i loved that here kate is having a diary and revealing abt *someone* in front of mayu too...
continue sooooooooooooooooon

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

hey!!
finally an update =P
haha.. just kiddin
but ya..
nice part!
loved the similarities between mayur...
=)
very cute..
and also nupur's insecurity..
really well described!
do cont soon =D
<3
HiNaL