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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
it was very niceee...................
awsesomeee....
pooor gunjie...........sam wuldve killed him if he was there!!!!!!!! n he shouldd....
anyways plzzz continueeeee soooonnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
sorry yaar for such a late reply
but terrific yaar
sheena aur rv dono hi ek number ke shaitan hain.unko toh pani main dobo dobo kar marna chahiye
lagta kuch zyaada bol diya
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
awesomeeeeeeee ud dear...
urrgghhhhhhh dat bloody RV..
i wanna kill him....
anways... awesome ud..
luved it..
pllzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
nice update dear
but that rv 😡
plzzzzzzz get him out of the story asap
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
brilliant pat dear......very emotional n touching....continue soon n thanx for ur PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
PART 5
Ok the gang had come n nupur ran upto gunjan, mayank went to call the police
N: gunjan
No reply, she was in a shock, she didnt even tell sam what had happened, she just sat quiet since then
N:GUNJAN!! gunjan kuch bolti kyun nai (shaking her) kuch to bol
S: nupur mein kabse bat karaha hon, lekin kuch nai bolrahi
N: aise kaise nai bolrahi, bolegi, apni di se baat na kare aisa ho sakta hai(crying), gunjan dekh mein ayi hon, mere se bi bat nai karegi
Nupur started to cry, mayank came there and consoled her
D: gunjan, kuch to bolo, dekho, hum sab tumse milne ayen hain
B: han gunjan, dekho hum sab tumare sath hai
U: gunjan dekho, mujhe tumara ye chup rehna acha nai lagta, please kuch to bolo
M: dekho gunjan tumara jiju aya hai, mere se bi baat nai karogi, tum to mujhe apni har problem batati ho na, phir abhi kyun nai batari
No response, she just sat there with her mouth closed, just then the police came there
S: ap log apni duty karahe hain, ya phir ghar pe bait k aram karahe hain, yahan meri biwi ki halat kharab horahi hai aur ap log ek criminal ko nai pakar sakte
pol: dekhen mr samrat, hum apni tarf se poori koshish karhe hain......
S: mujhe nai lagta k ap koshish bi karahe hain, mujhe rv lock up mein chaye, kuch bi hojaye lekin rv ko lockup mein dalo
Mayank came upto them
M: samrat sambhalo apne apko
S: kaise sambhalon mayank, chashmish ki aaj yehi halat ka zimedaar wo rv hai, i will kill that bas###d
M: chill samrat
pol: dekhen hum apne do constable yahan chor deten hain, ap dono ki rakhwali k liye, yeh dono apke ghar k aage phera lagate rahenge, jab tak humhe rv nai miljata, theek hai
M: ok inspector thankyou very much
The police went from there n left their two constable to keep a watch at there house, they all were sitting in the hall when suddenly gunjan started to scream, holding her tummy
G: ahhhhhhhhhhhh..........ahhhh.........ahhhh
They all gathered around her
S: kya howa chasmish
G: ahhhhh.........sam...ahhhh.......samrat........ahhhhh.........mera bacha...aaaaaaaaaaa
They all were shocked, sam picked her up n they all rushed to the hospital, the doctors took gunjan in n sam n the gang were waiting outside the ward, after a while the doctor came out
S: doctor kya howa gunjan ko, wo theek to hai
Doc: dekehn wo to theek hain, lekin hum unke bache ko nai bacha sake
They all were shocked, sam was shocked like he didnt know anything, he just sat on the bench, benji came n sat next to him
B: chill dude, dekh agar tu aise karega to gunjan ko kon sabhalega, usse to pata bhi nai hai
Sam started to cry
S: benji mein chashmish ko kya jawab donga, kash mein wahan hota to yeh sab nai hota
B: agar yeh sab hona tha to tere samne bi hosakta tha, aani ko koi nai tal sakta
S: lekin benji......
B: dekh samrat, gunjan ko abhi sabse ziada teri zaroorat hai, please ab rona band kar aur andar ja k usse sab kuch batade
S: nai benji mujse nai hoga
B: please sam gunjan k liye
They all went inside, they saw saw gunjan sitting on the bed, they all went upto her n sam sat down beside her
S: chashmish
She looked at him
S: tum theek ho na
N: gunjan tu theek hai na
She hugged nupur n started to cry
G: di......(crying)........wo mujhe lejayega
Nupur broke he hug
N: kon tujhe lejayega
G: r..........rv.....
They all were shocked
N: kya
G: di......(crying).....wo mujhe..........wo mujhe lene aya tha
S: chashmish koi tumhe nai lejayega, mein hon na tumare sath
G: nai usne kaha tha k wo mujhe lene aya hai.......wo mujhe lejayga........wo mujhe lejayga
B: chill gunjan tumhe koi nai leke jayga, hum sab hain tumare sath
G: nahi benji, wo dobara ayiga....mujhe lene k liye aur mera bacha.........
Sam told her evrything
G: acha howa uska ganda khoon mere undar ab nai hai....lekin wo zaroor ayiga, tum log meri baat ka yakeen kyun nai karte
Sam hugged her
S: shhhhhhh.......koi nai ayiga....mein hon na tumare sath
They all were happy to see sam consoling her, they all went outside the ward, after a while they took gunjan home, the day after tommarow they went college, They all went to their classes, later the gang n sam went to the canteen, they all reached the canteen n saw gunjan sitting on the table, holding a book upside down n lost in her thoughts, they all went upto her
B: hey gunjan
No reply
B:GUNJAN!!
She came to her senses
G: huh........han bolo benji
B: hi
G: oh hi
S: kya howa chashmish, r u alright
G: mein theek hon samrat
Again she lost in her thoughts, sh looked quite sad, everyone noticed that so they tryid to cheer her up
N: gunjan, tu theek nai hai
G: han di
N: kyunke pehli baar zindagi mein, tu ulti book parahi hai
Gunjan looked at the book, she realized that she was holding the book upside down, she quickley turned the book the right way
G: han bas aisi
N: koi bat nai gunjan
Then she again lost in her thoughts
Sam noticed this n then he started to sing a song
SAM
(gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na) - 2
Benjidil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho
dil mein chhupaao na
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na
She gets up n walks away from there but sam comes infront of herSam
(jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye (kneels down infront of her )
shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi
(hold his ears )
bas itna toh bata do ke meri kya bhool hai
(she goes away from there)
phir chaahe jo saja do mujhko woh kubool hai
Mayank puttig her chin up (he sang these lines)kuchh toh kaho chup na raho aise sataayo na
gumsum ho kyun
Sam pulls her towards himpaas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

Uday follwing gunjan, n behind uday was the whole college (he sang these lines)(tum jo hasati ho toh yeh mausam muskuraata hai
kaliyaan khilati hai saara aalam gungunaata hai) - 2
tum jo hasati ho har sitaara jhilmilaata hai
mere dil ka sheher khusi se jagmagaata hai
Gunjan starts to cry, lookin at their love, made her crySamdekho kabhi rona nahin, mujhko rulaao na
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na
dil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho
dil mein chhupaao na
(gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na) - 2

Sam, uday benji n mayank sang together
gum sum ho kyun
Gunjan hugged all 4 of them
They all sat down again
N: gunjan tu kuch kahle, tune subha se kuch nai khaya
G: nai di mera dil nai hai
N: please gunjan apni sehat ka to khaal rakh
G: di meine kaha na, mujhe nai khana
S: nupur rene do agar gunjan nai khaigi to mein bi nai kaonga, mein jaraha hon bb practice k liye
N: gunjan agar tujhe nai khana tha to aleast us behchare k aage natak hi karleti khane ka, us behchare ne subha se kuch nai khaya, pata hai kyun, kyunke tune bi subha se kuch nai khaya, tujhe ho kya gaya hai, tu wo gunjan nai rai jo doosro ka khayal rakhti ti aur khaskal apne besfriend samrat ka
Nupur n the gang walked way leaving gunjan alone, Gunjan had tears in her eyes
G: yeh meine kya kardia
She went to the bb court, she had a plate of food in her hand n went n sat next to the gang who was watching sam practice, she went upto sam
G: samrat khana kha lo
S: nai mujhe nai khana
He was about to leave from there, when gunjan started to sing
Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga
Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya
Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola
Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya
She went upto him, n holded his hand, she had tears in her eyes
Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau
Tu Hi Apna Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu
(Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun) - 2
She made him sit down, n cupped his face, everyone was looking at their love towards each other
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun ( she feed him n he feed her)
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
This play at the background
Rab Ne.. Bana Di Jodii.....
END
OK guys hope you all like
enjoy
love you all
from sonal
Edited by sweetsonal156 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
brillliant dear......d song inclusion was so situaltional n so heart warming....very beautiful update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
comment for part 4...
wow...sam slaped sheena...!!!
n dat bloody hell rv..i'll jus kill him..!!!
hayeeeeeeeeeeeee gunji ne sam ke samne change kiya..😳
bt all over nice updt...
cont very very soon...
thanx for d pm..!!!
n for part 5....
wow....awesomeee...!!!
oh thank god...uss rv ka baby marr gaya...m sooo happy..!!!!
n loved tujme rab dikhta hai...!!!!!
cont soon..
thanx 4 d pm..!!
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
awesome update dear
nice one hun..!!
-Jyotika- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud dear..
luved it to d core...
specially d tujhme rab deikhta hai part...
ioverall.. awesome ud..
cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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