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Posted: 15 years ago

thanxs for PM i love it plz do next update sooon as i m w8tng n thanxs for PM!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww sonal again stopped at bad point
hmm ice-cream khana gaye hai
intersting
plz try to continue it soon
n thanx for the pm
love
sana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey thanks for the pm.....do continueeeee soon.......lovely updateeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
verynice ud lovely
nw watin to c their ice-cream parlour romance
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Posted: 15 years ago
mmuuahhh loved it... its soo cute... thanks for the M ad update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was like Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww at the ice-cream scene!!!! samrat knows her so well!!!
Sorry for the late commenting!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Update!!
Can't wait for the camping trip!!!
PlllZz continue soon
THX for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
I hav to say that u r creative.................
i mean its amazing that u took a simple story and turned it to kinda of ur own.............
really nice work...........
I like the dialogues..................
Hope u continue soon.................
Bye..........................
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 18

Sam n gunjan reached the icecreeam shop, they sat down there

S: chashmish, camp pe kitna maza ayiga na

G: han, bohot maza ayiga

Just then the waiter cam there

S: hmmm, k chocolet aur ek vanella icecream

G: tumhe yaad hai

S: ofcourse mein kaise bhool sakta hon

Later they had there icecream n went home, gunjan n sam was watching tv

G: samrat mein bore horahi hon

S: romance karten hain

G: samrat

S: chashmish, tum tv dekho, tumari boriyat khudi chali jayigi

Gunjan watched the tv n sam went to the kichen, when he came back he saw gunjan watching tv so interestingly

S: kya ho........

she cuts him off

G: shhhhhhh

She was still watching, after when she looked at samrat, she saw him sleeping peacefull, she kissed his forhead n tried to wake him up

G: samrat

No reply

G: samrat chalo utho, apne kamre mein ja k sojao

S: chashmish sone do na

G: please samrat

Samrat got up n they both went to their room n both slept

Next day at college

All were sitting in the canteen

S: chashmish kuch to khalo, tumne subhase kuch nahi khaya

G: nahi samrat, mera dil nahi hai

All the girls knew, why she wasnt eating

U: arre gunjan, tumne subhase kuch nahi khaya, yeh lo burgur khalo

G: nahi uday bhaiya, mujhe nahi khaana, ap log khao, mein liberey jarahi hon

S: chashmish

G: samrat mujhe kuch nahi khana

She said this n went from there

S: pata nahi kyun nahi kahrahi, nupur tum samjhao usse, uski tabiyat kharab hojayigi

N: dekha mayank, kuch seekho, apne dost se, kitna khayal rakhta hai apni biwi ka, aur tum to...............khair choro, samrat aaj karwachod hai

U: karwachod?, yeh kya hota hai

N: har patni, apne pati ki lambi umar k liye vrat rakhti hai

S in his mind: meine aisa kya kiya jo bhagwan ne mujhe gunjan di hai, thankyou so much bhagwanji

S: isliye chashmish kuch nahi kah rahi

M: matlab tumne bhi subha se kuch nahi khaya

N: yeh sawal tum ab pouch rahe ho

M: im sorry nupur, mujhe nahi pata tha

N: its ok

S: matlab, chashmish ne mere liye vrat rakha hai
N: han, isliye wo kuch nahi kah rahi
S: lekin usne mujhe bataya kyun nahi
N: ab yeh to tum usse ja k poucho
Just then the bell rings n they all go to there classes

After classes, sam sees gunjan sitting in the bb court reading a book, he went upto her n sat next to her

S: hey chashmish
G: hi samrat
S: chashmish, tumne mere liye vrat rakha hai
G: hmmmmmm ( busy reading, she wasnt looking at him )

S: lekin chahmish tum kaise itni dair tak bhooli rahogi

G: its ok samrat, meiin manage kar lungi ( still not looiking at him)
S: arre kaise manage karog.......( he realized that gunjan wasnt looking at him)
He snatchs her book
G: samrat , kya karahe ho, meri book wapis karo
S: nahi, mein yahan tumse baaten karne aya hon aur tum ho k mujhse dekhne k bajai, is book ko dekh rahi ho
G: acha baba sorry, bolo
S: good, tumne mere liye karwachod ka vrat rakha hai
G: han
S: tumhe kaise pata k aaj karwachod hai
G: meine kal raat tv ein dekha tha, mein tumhe batana chahti thi, lekin tum sogayi the, isliye phir mein chup rahi
S: lekin kyun chashmish, tum poore din kaise bhooki reh sakti ho
G: poore din to kya, mein apne pati k liye poori zindagi bhi bhooki reh sakti hon
S: sach
G: han ab meri book wapis karo
S: lekin jabtak tum nahi khaogi, tabtak mein bhi kuch nahi khaonga
G: nahi samrat, tum pagal hogayi ho
S: agar tum mere lambi umar k liye vrat rakh sakti ho, to mein kyun nahi, mein bhi tumari lambi umar k liye vrat rakhonga
G: lekin samrat
S: lekin wekin kuch nahi, bas ab jab tak tum nahi khaogi, tab tak mein bhi nahi khaonga
G: theek hai, ab to meri book wapis kardo
S: le k batou
He starts to run n gunjan runs after him, just then gunjans feet slips n she falls on samrat, n they both fall down
They both had an eyelock, both were memerized in eachother, just then all started to whistle at them
They both caem to senses n got up, gunjan n sam was so embraced, gunjan snatched her book from him n ran from there n sam smiled at her
End
ok guys i know its a small part, but will update a longer one next time
Hope you all like it
thankyou all for ur awsomee comments
Enjoy
Love you all
From
Sonal
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Posted: 15 years ago
I LOVED IT! Actually, that's a bit of an understatement! I don't have words to describe what I just read!!! O my gosh!!!! Plzzzzz update soon! For a friend? Plzzzzzzzz!!!!!??? Thx so much for the gr8 part! I love ya!!!!
Babydoll

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