AR One Shot: The Unplanned

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

wow Kshanika

this os brought tears to my eyes

i seriously loved it

amazing

loved each n every word u've written

do write more

if u do, plz pm me

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Nisha

@hnisha

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

🤗reserved candy EDITED-----

Candyyyyy....Wish you a very happy teddy day...

Tu bahut gandu hain... humesha rula deti hain...

Pata hain tujhe tere shots mein saare emotions bhare bhare milte hain...bhare bhare shots tere..emotions se bhare bhare...

Mujhe tera shot bahut pasand aaya.. i loved it..it was very well written..

Especially Armaans feelings--the way u explained them...👏..

Shot padte waqt aisa lag raha the jaise sab kuch mere aankhon ke saamne ho raha hain..maine ek do baar khud ko pinch bhi kiya tha..😆

God bless you candy... Love you lots❤️

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Teli pyali si kheer puri

Nikko😛

Edited by hnisha - 15 years ago

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Candy mera babu tu kitna chhota sa hai par kitna kuch samate betha hai apne andhar...
itni sara dard is Armaan ke hisse hi kyun aata hai.Kehte hain jo bahut uppar uddta hai vo itni hi zor se nichhe girta hai,tension aur sadness ke baare main jis ko pata nahin tha usko khud ko sambhalna be mushkil ho gaya.😭😕
pehle hum na chahte b pyaar karte hain phir us dard ke saath jeete hain.😲
ye pyaar itna dard kyun deta hai..????
armaan ka pyaar itna pure hai...................by God is decency pe to khud ko lutane ka dil karta hai.😍.😍😍..Agar ridzi chali jati to shyad main usko kabhi maaf nahin kar pati....
har lafaz lajwaab tha....har tarf lipta hua dard.....pyaar insaan ko insaan bana deta hai.....
hats off to u....⭐️i wanna give u standing ovation...⭐️
love u babu.plz keep writing. u r too gud in one shots.❤️❤️❤️

Milna ittfak tha bichadna naseeb tha,
Woh itna door hua jitna karib tha...
Use dekhne ko tarasti reh gayi aankhein,
jis shakhas ki hatheli per mera naseeb tha....

love u bacha
ritu

Edited by janu1610 - 15 years ago

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395998

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

wow its marvellous....im speechless....wonderful one shot...and i loved it!

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aishar

@aishar

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

I mean i am totally speechless! bravo!

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

i can actually feel tears..its was amazing...................soo emotional............soo deep.......................very beautifully written.......superb job..........luved it to the core.................do write more......

luv
kj